Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 13

Originally posted by: nibbles

Once again Sheena - absaloutely amazing!!👍🏼

Once again, Nibbles 😆 Thank you!!

I love how wonderfully you've described Jai's emotions in the two sports he has taken up - archery and flying!👏......shows his persistence to reach the top and his talents as a businessman!😛

Thanks, I will be writing some cute archery scenes!!

I wonder how Jai will react on finding that BD is actually a girl🤔, though she seems smitten by him!😳

She is a gone case allright😳, he will be a confused case!! 😕😕😕

As for Cobra😡 - can she not fall in love with a toad and elope!😃........would save us all a lot of trouble!!

I wish!! but what to do, her presence is required for the story!! 😭

Thanks, BTW: What's up with writing only 6a in Lies...leaving your readers all breathless and waiting????😡 Better finish it fast!! Just kidding!!

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

yay.. another amazing part..
poor bani fainted...well was knowcked unconsious (is that how u spell it?)
anyways uh oh.. what will jai do when he finds out that its a girl???!!!!
can't wait for the next part.

Thanks Bugs,

I think he will definitely be in a quandary!! What a predicament, looking for a boy and finding a girl, acne faced, flat chested, infatuated adolescent!!

Originally posted by: bkeero

That was awesome Sheena. Time is really moving forward.

Keero, Thanks yaar - too many leaps in this story!!

I am so glad that Jai's sees Roshni as a copy of Barnali, this way he knows to stay away from her. I can't believe he still let her come to his house. What was he thinking?

Yeah, big mistake on Jai's part, one that he will regret for a long time!!

Its so funny he thinks of BD as a boy. I agree though with Bani if she had told him he wouldn't have been as open with her.

Even at eight, she is real smart 😆

She is so excited to see him. How cute is that. She is going to give him the shock of his lifetime with that black silky hair…. Is she wearing a hat covering the hair so she can in typical hindi style movie take it off and let her hair fall down….

Ha Ha!! I am not sure if that's the way it's gonna happen, but great idea!!

I can't wait for the next part…. Write soon pleeeeessseee

Thanks Keero!! Will try to update tonight, key word being 'TRY'...

PLIZ UPDATE QUICKLY
AWESOME STORY
KEEP IT UP 👏 👏 👏

Where is the update? I woke up early this morning only to read the update before going to work and what do i see? NO UPDATE!!!!

come on yaar...aab torture karna band karo.

will check back after work or during lunch.

Anam

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

Where is the update? I woke up early this morning only to read the update before going to work and what do i see? NO UPDATE!!!!

come on yaar...aab torture karna band karo.

will check back after work or during lunch.

Anam

Sorry sweetie,

I had a pest who wanted help with his homework(Procrastinated till the last minute and wanted his mom to help because he had a writer's block, I have no idea if this happens with the real writers!!! 😆)

Couldn't say no - he has this a charming smile and a face nobody can say 'No' to!! 😉😉😉

Anyhow, I was up till 2:00 helping him, so had no time to finish the chapter, and I am off to work in a few minutes, reading MT's update!!

Today for sure, pakka!! Promise!!😊😊😊

Hello Sheena!
This my first comment on your FF...It was amazing!!!
I loved it!!!
👏 👏 👏
I read all 3 parts in one go! This story is really something new! I mean the whole idea of meeting in a stable is great!
I loved it!
👏 👏 👏
Poor Jai, he's really had bad luck
Poor Bani too, she had it worse than him...
Now the actually story is going to begin...
Please continue soon
rooj

Originally posted by: aarwen_193

PLIZ UPDATE QUICKLY
AWESOME STORY
KEEP IT UP 👏 👏 👏

HI Aarwen, Welcome aboard,
Thanks for liking the FF...

I am working on the update as we speak!!😆😆

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Hello Sheena!
Hi Rooj,

This my first comment on your FF...It was amazing!!!
I loved it!!!
👏 👏 👏
Welcome aboard and thank you for liking the FF.😃😃

I read all 3 parts in one go! This story is really something new! I mean the whole idea of meeting in a stable is great!
I loved it!
👏 👏 👏

I am glad you like the concept!! 😃😃
Poor Jai, he's really had bad luck
Poor Bani too, she had it worse than him...

Yes, both of them figured ways to deal with their pain, I think they can stand against the world better if they are together, but since she is only 12, it will take them a lot longer to figure this out!! 😭😭
Now the actually story is going to begin...
Please continue soon
rooj

Thank again Rooj,

n we r really waiting for update...
plzz update soon