Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 11

Sheena
that was just wonderful.you described jai's pain and turmoil so well.beautifully written.looking forward to seeing jai's reaction when he finds out that BD is a girl.just loved.will be eagerly waiting for the next part. 😊

sheena,
great part yaar,
great if jai has learnt something from bani, bani has also learnt something from him and she is still reading books and will be appearing for exam, wow what a hard working girl and thanx god that now she is having long hairs as now jai will be able to find out that she is a girl and so both troubles pia and roshni are also there in story, very bad sheena but i know u will take care of them.

so memory of BD brings smile on jai's face. what will happen when he will come to know about being a girl and what a meeting after 4 years. i think bani is in love with jai only at the age of 12?

please continue soon.

swati

Great parts Sheena. read it in one go.

Please post the next update soon.

A very different aproach. 👏

One question: Do you love horses? 😃 😊

ok...phew...bd is bai..yay...lolz...now im not 😕 😕 anymore...lol...haila...did jai just run bani over...well almose... ...im sure jai will love u hun...but just as a precaution...keep reptile..aka...your sister... 🤢 away from him...turn her into the stable boy... 😉 imagine...pia cleanign up after horses... 😆 just too funny...cant wait
JAZ

oooo u have started a new fanfic!!! read all the parts at one go!!! very nice ff!!! love the way jai and bani meet!! 👏 👏 👏

cant wait to see what happens! do update soon!! 😛

Loved it...graduation time without loved ones 😭 the loneliness of staying alone in a foreign country, ignored because the ambition overshadows it all...love how Bani gets the guavas, love everything Sheena!!!!

Good going..

👏 👏 👏
bt

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Sheena
that was just wonderful.you described jai's pain and turmoil so well.beautifully written.looking forward to seeing jai's reaction when he finds out that BD is a girl.just loved.will be eagerly waiting for the next part. 😊

Thanks sweetie,

I will try to do an update today, but if I can't then I will aim for tomorrow!!

Originally posted by: swatinarang

sheena,
great part yaar,
great if jai has learnt something from bani, bani has also learnt something from him and she is still reading books and will be appearing for exam, wow what a hard working girl and thanx god that now she is having long hairs as now jai will be able to find out that she is a girl and so both troubles pia and roshni are also there in story, very bad sheena but i know u will take care of them.

Hi Swati,
these two are kindred spirits, he is doing things because of her and she is doing things because of him. Roshni and Pia have to be there because of the many leaps in the story!! Sorry yaar!! 😭😭😭

so memory of BD brings smile on jai's face. what will happen when he will come to know about being a girl and what a meeting after 4 years. i think bani is in love with jai only at the age of 12?

They don't know it's love yet, she is too young, let's call it infatuation!!
😆😆😆
please continue soon.

swati

Thanks for your comments!!!

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Great parts Sheena. read it in one go.

Please post the next update soon.

A very different aproach. 👏

One question: Do you love horses? 😃 😊

Thanks Sangita,

For reading and commenting -

Yes, I love horses - love books, movies, paintings about horses. I used to take some horseback riding lessons a long time ago, but I don't have any time to go to the stables anymore!! 😭😭😭