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Posted: 18 years ago
Its a treat reading your ff...(except the guava part, toh muh mein paani aa gaya.. 😭 )

Roshni putting on lipstick while driving...aur kya...
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Posted: 18 years ago
OH wow!!!
Great Part Sheena!!!
👏 👏 👏
That was so good!
I can't believe Jai didn't recognize BD 😡 😆 😆
As for Roshni 🤢
Now this is fun Jai and Bani racing 😆 😆
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was amazing!!!! finally an update!!!! 😃 it was really worth the wait!!!! 👏 absolutely loved the part!!! pls update the next part sooooooooooon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sheena!!

That was an awesome update!!!! loved the whole part!! hopefully Jai recognises who she is!! 😆 😆

pls continue soon!!

just one quest.. how old is Bani and Jai? I'm confused.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
loved it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hey meri pyaari billi 😆…yaar u updated!!! Cool!!! 😃

So Bani and Jai meet again…but he doesn't recognize its BD….awwww….
Bechaari Bani almost got killed by Roshni's rash driving!!!! I mean…putting lipstick on whilst driving…who was she trying to impress at the time!!! 😡 Jai??? He's already ticked with her coming at all to Mount Abu!!!


"Oh god, Oh god!! I am going to go to the prison" Roshni started wailing. "Jai, you have to help me, you have to put me on a plane to U.S, I can't go to jail". She was crying in earnest.
Maybe this would have been a good way to get rid of her once and for all 😡…send her to prison or put her on a plane!!! Shes gonna be upto no good this women!!! 😡

"Roshni, Please leave me, I want you to go home, now!! I will come home on my motorbike, I asked my driver to bring it. Please don't say anything!" Jai turned away disgustedly. He still couldn't believe that she wanted to run away leaving the dead girl here.
Haila…he has a motorbike…wow…just picturing!!! 😍 Man…I'm going all dreamy!!!! 😆 hehehe….he must have some mean machine!!!

Roshni looked stricken. She turned to go and spotted Bani hanging behind. Roshni gave her a pure look of hatred and ran to the car. The car started on the second try and left both Jai and Bani staring behind it.
Haha…get lost from here….!!!

God this horseriding seems so much fun!!! Learning so much from ya sheena….Me wanna come go to this stable too…sure jai can't train me?? 😉 I'm sure he would be a fantastic trainer!!! 😳 😆

"You want to have a race?" Bani looked at him challengingly. Jai stared at the young girl who sat upright on the beautiful gray horse that looked big and menacing. Chhoti se ladki challenge kar rahi hai…man he's gonna be shocked how godd a rider she is!!! And he still hasn't worked out who she/he is!! Hehehe…😆

"You want to race with me?" Jai looked at her curiously. This girl had guts!! "Jai Walia doesn't race with little girls"
not with girls But me wanna race…😍 😳 😆

"The usual place, to the sunflower farm and back" Bani clicked her heels to give the signal to Kismet to take off. As the horse galloped past him picking up pace, Jugnu moved with an easy grace behind Kismet. Bani held the her horse back just a little until Jai caught up, "You can do better than that, Jai" with that she let Kismet do her thing. Jai's mouth opened in astonishment!! Arre wah!!! Hint de diya na Jai ko to the sunflower farm and back…and calling him by his name!!!!

Simply loved this update…👏 👏 Sheena 😆 …want the next part super fast so get into that galloping mode of urs!!!! 😆

Taz 😊


Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago


Thanks Tazoooo dearest!! Meiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiooooooooooowwwwwwwww!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: baran

hmmmm .....nice nice.... bani just 12 years.... 😆 👏 👏



Hi Baran,

this FF has a few leaps, but she will grow up fast!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: swatinarang

my sweet innocent blue billi ji aka sheena,

Swati, my Jungle ki Sherni, kaise ho!!

really nice part. jai was not able to reco bani, whether bani has changed too much in her looks or jai was not able to find because he thought BD to be a boy and was not aware of BD being a girl, i know now as she has talked about usual place and all that jugnu care he will make out (i know JW has that much brain.

Some times, he finds to it hard use his brain around Bani!! 😆😆😆

JW picking up bani and took her inside 😉 kya baat hai sheen kis cheeze ki shuruway hai.

Yaar, she is way too young!! All innocent sooo far!! Love is one sided right now!!

Roshni ko to mein kacha chaba jaungi 😡 she is so selfish she was not sad because she killed someone but was worrried about her going to jail. i want her to come under some truck (not car as she might be saved after that).

You know how it is, it's all the good ones who get into trouble, the bad ones go their way!!

JW has given right treatment to roshni and left her to go alone to house. 👏 , i think jw shld have slapped her as well for her being so mean and how dare roshni look at my bani in that way, i just want to take her eyes out for seeing my bani with disgust and hatred.

Thank god, at least - they have some alone time together!!

please continue soon.

swati



Rooooaaaaaarrrrr, better get that server alive with that roar, right, Sherni??


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: btkr

Its a treat reading your ff...(except the guava part, toh muh mein paani aa gaya.. 😭 )

Roshni putting on lipstick while driving...aur kya...
👏 👏 👏

bt



BT,

I love Guavas too, I miss them soooo much!!! Yaar - I see women putting lipstick and driving all the time, I have more than one hour of commute everyday and I try to stay clear off of these ladies!!


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