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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#381

Great...... !! why did u stop !! it was so beautiful... hope Jai and Bani share some very emotional moments.... please please ...

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Rupal

@culgal86

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Posted: 18 years ago

#382

hey dat was great.....
neev is a unique name.....
pliz update soon

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#383

wow i still cant believe she yelled out that she loves mr.walia and neev its such a cute name i hope they confess their love to each other soon............

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baran

@baran

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Posted: 18 years ago

#384

wowwww so0o0o0o beutiful... 😭 😭 <<khoshika tears ..hehe 😆 😆 plz con.... 👏

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preeti73

@preeti73

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Posted: 18 years ago

#385

Loved the part where she yells " I love you Mr. Walia".
Excellent update once again.

Love,

Preeti.

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 18 years ago

#386

Tinnni, you out do yourself with evey update dear and have us go through so many emotions.👏

Loved the look on Jais face when he sees the mid-wife and the best part was Bani shouting out he rlove for him, and his reaction.😳😛😃

Awww....Neevs sounds such a good name 😃and Jai wanted a girls😉😛, I can so guess why 😆but after having Neevs his son in his arms...the emotions of being a father took over😳. So beautifully described.👏

Aww...I just hope that Bani and Jai do confess their love for each other😳 and donot separate. They do so love each other.😃

And hopefuly their son will bring them closer to each other😉 and the realization of therie love for one another😛😳😃😆

Till your nexty update dear.😃

Love

Krishna

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#387

Tiny

you have own again out did yourself and blown me away.It was just beautiful,and very touching.bani finally said it--that she loves him.The arrival of their son,very cute and just adore the name.just fabalous.will be eagerly waiting for the next update. 😊

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 18 years ago

#388

OK So I read this start to latest update all in one go! All I can really say is Bravo! Excellent! You have written this superbly! Words cant describe how well you have conveyed each of their emotions- now if only they can confess to one another! 👏 You definitely deserve a round of applause!

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 18 years ago

#389

Neev - wonderful name Tin!!👏

So glad that the baby and Bani are fine as well!😛........Can't believe she actually said 'I love you Mr. Walia!'😳

Wonder if she still remembers!🤔

I'm sure by now it's going to be heard for either of them to let go!!😕

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 18 years ago

#390

That was just perfect Tinni!!!
I loved it to the core especially Bani's realization of loving Mr. Walia and then that last part how romantic...
I hope they stay that way forever...
Can't wait for the next part
Rooj

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