Contract Heir -Note on Pg 90

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

Alumni

+ 7

Posted: 18 years ago

#361

I have been a silent reader for a while
I would like to say Tinu that as usual your ff is wonderful just like reading an novel 👏
They are falling for each other slowly, but they are scared to admit their feeling for one another 😳 😳 😳
Pia very well deserve each off the treatment and much worse that she is getting from Jai 👏 👏 👏
Love the bonding between Nattu and Bani a cute Devar Bhabi rishta 😛
The last part was really touchy 😭 😭 😭
Poor Bani, Jai should say something and admit maybe when the maybe is born he can say what his heart and minds wants to say but he is being stubborn 😡
can't wait to meet little munna ya munni 😳

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Sanjana

@basket

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#362

OMG amazing part!!! 👏

this was quite emotional though

i almost cried 😭

cant wait for the next update

Thanks,
Sunju

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#363

Tiny

thanx for clearing abt the info.I will be looking forward to the next ff of yours.
Just fabalous part.very touching part.choosing of the baby's name brought tears in my eyes.jai is going to be there for the baby's birth,cant wait for the next update. 😊

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#364

very emotional with the baby names scene while reading it i had tears in my eyes very beautifully put in to words of a persons emotional turmoil 😭 pls cont soon

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#365

Oh wow Baby's on the way...
I hope they land on time...
But what will happen after that? i mean with Jai and Bani...i hope they get closer...
Great update Tinni,
Can't wait for the next update...
Rooj

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#366

Aww.....Tinni,

This part of the update had me sad. I so feel for both of them, stcuk with the contract aren't they.😕

Both seem to forget it and then it rears up its ugly head again.

God so felt Bani's pain and Jais too when she said"main nahin hogi bulane kay liya"😭

So the kid has decided to come before time, and they are stuck in the plane and will land on a footbal field.

It would be really romantic if Jai delivers the child😳

Cant wait tot read the next part from you soon.

Love

Krishna

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Shwetha

@vshwetha

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#367

You are sucha wonderful writer... I find reading your ff's better than the original storyline now. You do a agreat job at portraying the emotions . 👏 👏