FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 7

Originally posted by: simz99

Just read part 2 and the story is unravelling as a fascinating tale with so many unanswered questions...do they know each other...what does she remember that he can't recall...who is "his angel"...questions that only time will answer. 😊
Am glad to hear you have the patience to enjoy the unravelling since there is quite a bit of it!
TFS is a far more ambitious and complicated project than the earlier ff's. I just hope it works out.
I'm very content to sit back and enjoy this ride that you're taking us on...please update soon.
PS - I definitely notice a change in your style...a lot more passion, a lot more sizzle...kya baat hai Armana, iska kya raaz hai?! 😉 😊 😊
Trust you to pick up on these tiny clues! Raaz to koi khaas nahin, just wanted to give free rein to my imagination!

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Armana,

Because of your way of writing I had to break my silence finally from silent reader to be an active reader...thanks a lot for another amazing FF....looking forward to getting the next part soooooooon........
Khushboo

Originally posted by: slowcheetah

enticing start. intriguing as well,where did they meet before such that only she remembers. I am guessing,Does he have amnesia or too many women coming thro his revolving door? 👏 😆

Originally posted by: minnie25

very nice.. Excellent .. After reading the updates which depress me this is a wonderful read.. Thank you for making my day.... Can't wait to read the next part.

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana darling its just so wonderful to red your fanfics as I have said, and this part was just wonderful.👏It was so sweet and so cute.😛😳 You really have way with words, describing feelins and emotions and facial expression so beautifulluy.👏

Aaaaawwwwww.......thanks a ton Krishna!🤗🤗🤗

Bani and Jai have met before , but our Jai does not remember their previous meeting at all. And here I am dying to now what was the occassion and whats the msytery.😉😛😃

Aaahhh.....well now you are going to have to display some patience...😈

Jai does not remmber her face but her voice sounded to him like his "Angel"😉. Aww...he does not know that she is his Angel.😉😳😃

Loved how he forces her to sleep by offering his shoulders as pillow😳. That was so cute, and just like Jai to get what he wants.😆

Ab hamara JW akhir hai hi aisa!😉

Jai thinking of her all through his drive and Bani at alast knowing his name.😳😛😆

Cant wait for the next update from you soon.😃
Good thinga come to those who wait!

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: Treasures

wonderful part armana, loved it.....
👏

Originally posted by: piccola

I've fallen in love with both JB all over again..this is beautiful! You wield magic with your pen, Armana!

Keep it going...its so promising! 😛