FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 13

Another wonderful update.........please update soon.thanks 👏👏

"never the innocent" quite a rule!!

i dont really know what to make of this jai walia. 😕

he strikes me as very much a "Mr Darcy" type character, perhaps of the "once bitten twice shy" persuasion.

sending out so many mixed signals - Bani beware!! 😆

i have to say Ms. Dickens, this ranks as your best part yet in this ff!! 👏 the chemistry, the intensity, the unspoken conflict... i loved it!!

update soon armana, and plase disclose this raaz which i think i have guessed.... but probably not!!! 😆 😉

Cordy xxx

Originally posted by: Cordelia

"never the innocent" quite a rule!!

i dont really know what to make of this jai walia. 😕

he strikes me as very much a "Mr Darcy" type character, perhaps of the "once bitten twice shy" persuasion.

sending out so many mixed signals - Bani beware!! 😆

i have to say Ms. Dickens, this ranks as your best part yet in this ff!! 👏 the chemistry, the intensity, the unspoken conflict... i loved it!!

update soon armana, and plase disclose this raaz which i think i have guessed.... but probably not!!! 😆 😉

Cordy xxx

Cords...I see you pulled the similarity between Jai and Darcy...I saw it too but refrained for mentioning it...

Hi armaana,

your comment about silent readers made me soooo guilty i had to read
quickly and reply! I really love your writing and was happy to see that you
started this new FF. (Even lugged my laptop to work to check for your
updates!) The story so far is simply wonderful and i wish you would take
time off from your "real life" and just spend all your time updating!!
hee hee! 😉 seriously love it!

okey dokey so now let me go back to reading the update again "guilt free!"

hrishali

Hey Armana
My my my….am definitely seeing a new side to you m'dear...very sensuous and passionate 😳 😳 😳
So your JW is a hard bitten cynical kinda man…..wonder what or rather who in his past has made him this way? 😉 I'm really proud of the way Bani behaved….she knows she's hopelessly attracted to him, yet she senses his reserve and wisely gives him a wide berth, until that chance meeting on the balcony and then of course the dance....oooofff I can feel the sizzle and see the sparks right from here 😉
Can't wait to see what happens next…….loving every word of this ff hun!! 😃
Cheers
Sim

Intense, as usual...almost get goosebumps reading it..

At times, almost disliked Jai for his aloofness, but then, for a guy of his name, fame and moolah, not many options left...log jeene hi nahin dete bechare ko...
But I still feel hurt for Bani..good that she is getting under his skin!!!

Lovely updates... 👏 👏 👏
bt

Armana, I have been following all ur fan fics with great interest and have enjoyed each and every one of them !

Have been wanting to reply to this one for a long time but just missing it everytime...

It made a wonderful read..i especially liked the way the narrative shifts between dialogues and moments of introspection ! Also Tarun and Jai knowing each other was a surprise. I am still intrigued by Jai and Bani's past !

My favorite part in Part iv has to be the last line...Somehow the last lines just had me reading it again and again. speaks volumes of Jai's character. reminded me of another movie character (this was in tamil btw so not elaborating on the movie).

Swathi

Excellent, once again! All the signs for a budding romance combined with the right amount of mystery...


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Hi Armana,

I am still reeling from the effect that this chapter has had on me...It's absolutely mindblowing and the love the way you have captured Jai's character, very cynical and practical yet a part of him which he has no control over forces him to contradict himself...

What more can I say than I want more.... 😊

Garf

hi armana...just read the fourth part am simply mesmerised...u captured the intense attraction between the two so beautifully and wove it into words that sends shivers 😳 😳
so Mr.walia never the innocent let us see how long does this rule sustain 😳 ,his cynical assumptions abt bani ,his confidence abt the female ways of luring jai walia....now is there a story in that tooo 😉
loved bani,the way she handled the situation in a dignified manner yet cld not stop that pull towards him.....hmmmmmmmmmm

waiting for the next part with baited breathe...let me assure u 😊 😳