FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 14

Armana,

Just read part four and have to say👏, you still haven't revealed the mystery between Bani remembering his face not his name and Jai remebering the voice and thinking of she "sounds just ike his angle" but not her face or anything else.😉😛 The suspense is really killing me...Arma....please, please dear put me out of my misery.😛

Loved the way he dismisses her and is then annoyed at her for ignoring him completely, and being different from all the other woman.😆

Ah....so he is attracted to her 😳and she to him 😳but he thinks she is an innocnet!!!😳 The question is is she...???😕 Is that the mystery???😉😃

Cant wait for the next part from you soon.😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: rivya

another wonderful update...love the tension between the leads...
So he thinks she is an innocent...so I am guessing nothing of that sort happened between them...or did it and hence the rule?

I like this JW...recluse but again authorative (is this a word?)...just like the one we saw in KS in the beginning...

So looks like Bani had fallen for him 7 years ago and is still trying to get up...tough luck for her...

Originally posted by: minnie25

Hi Armana,
Wonderful update. I was waiting for it. I hope you continue soon. There is so much chemistry and tension between the two I can't stand it 😉 . I hope you will throw some light on what happened 7 years ago , soon... I am just waiting with baited breath for the next part..
Minnie

Originally posted by: Cordelia

Ms Dickens!! 😉

yes Ms. Brown!😛

Nice part!! 👏 👏 the relationship between rano and bani very nicely developed!! i can totally imagine them being that way!! 😆

Thank you😃

interesting jodi - rano and tarun... maybe i am suffering from KS hangover, but are you sure Tarun actually knows how to say such big words??!!! 😛 😆

Agree with you about Tarun in ks, but one he suited my purposes exactly and two, i seemed to have developed a bimari: trying to redeem and rescue the poor characters Mayi mutilates!😕 First Pia in BH and now T!😕

aap ka bhi saat-saal puraana raaz?! please dont drag it as much as kekta maayi did!! 😉
I could not resist!😆 Kept remembering Mayi's 7 yrs old PR-Raaz and decided to do my own version! Hopefully this will prove more satisfying than the damp squib that fiasco turned out to be!

update soon - i fulfilled my half of the bargain, my update awaits your comments!! 😛 😆

My dear Torture Specialist, your updates always leaving me with the cheesy comment: "yeh did mange more!"


Lots of love,

Dan Brown. 😉

Lots of love and big 🤗
Armana

Originally posted by: rajkona

Only you could do it! I've been silent up to now but no can do any more. Wow wow wow! Wish I had your ability to capture the characters and their characteristics the way you do. You bring the characters alive and leave us poor readers panting for more long before we reach the end!!

Wouldn't presume to comment beyond saying that like your other fans, I hope you won't keep us waiting too long. Your story captures the nuances and reasons we fell in love with JB in the first place. And you're only on part four!! Can't wait to see the story unfold.

Regards, Rajkona

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Wonderful update.
loved it.
👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Another wonderful update.........please update soon.thanks 👏👏