FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
Commend u for building up the anticipation so well.

Rano makes a good "all-weather" friend. Depth of B's charecter shines through.

Lovely read.Thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely update 😊 but it has increased my curosity ,can u plzzzz tell when r u updating next.and what had happened 7 years back?plzzzzzzzzzz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Garf

Hi Armana,

Just read the third chapter and loved the way you potrayed the bond between the two friends...Having visited Diner, could simply visualize Bani meeting Tarun there...definitely one of the best places to meet up with friends...and needless to say I love the way you write...there's some kind of grace and elegance to your writing...I enjoy writing too and believe me if it was possible, I would love to steal a bit of the writing style from Sangeeta and you, I really like the way both of you write...it flows seamlessly...

Dear Garf,
Thank you!😳
Your comments are much treasured!😳
Thanks for reading!
Armana

Your thought process and writing has gained a lot of maturity from your earlier fanfics such as Temporary Marriage...Can't wait to read the next chapter. 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Armana,
Just read the 3 part.......excellent and amazing writing.....curious to know more...........please update soon.......



glad to see you convert from being a silent reader into a demanding one!😃
Armana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rivya

so we have Rano with Tarun...good it not the GFN sahil...
ANd love the friendship between Rano and Bani...so different yet so alike...reminded me of my BF back home... 😊
So something happened between Jai and Bani one fateful night...OMG this has me thinking...please make things right between them...I am so worried now esp. that Jai does not even remember her.... 😕
rivs



Keep thinking!😉😛
Thanks
Armana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Wonderful part.
loved it.
Two friends totally different by nature...loved it...it's same as me and my best friend we match your description very well. 😆 😊
Loved your writing style 😊 😊
Tarun and Rano...interesting.
plz cont. soon



thank you😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

ok finally i got time to read it 😊 .
dear ur gr8 👏 u've described bani n rano's friendship so well, very beautiful 😃
finally in this ff rano found someone batter than the looser sahil 😕
pleaz don't torture us n make jai to remember everything 😳 😛
gr8 ff dear armana 👏 👏 👏



but sometimes the wait can be fun......
thanks
Armana😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Armana
part 3 was beautiful.wonderful protrayal of rano and bani's friendhip.now i really want to know the raaz.very interesting.cant wait for the next update.plz cont soon. 😊



thoda sa sabr......
thanks
Armana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fsam

Armana re-read all three parts again. Enjoyed the re-read as much as I enjoyed reading it the first time. Excellently penned.

Loved Bani's vulnerability and strength. She is a paradox, am waiting to see how her character unfolds. Seems she has been through an ordeal and survived when most of us would been struggling to live.

JW comes across as an arrogant softy, especially where his angel is concerned, he may not remember her but his sub-concious sure does. Waiting to see how he helped her 7 years back.

Rano and Bani share a friendship that would be the envy of sisters.


Dear Farah,
it's a pleasure, as always, to hear from you.
Am glad you like TFS so far.
You might have to wait a while for the revelation......
After Pia in KS, sisterhood has a lot to make up for....
Armana

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