FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 12

Originally posted by: simz99

Hey Armana
This story is getting more and more intriguing by the moment.....I really wanna know what happened 7 years ago in that chapel....why was Bani so devastated, n how did Jai help his angel so unknowingly? 😊 Can't wait to see how this unfolds...so hope the next part is not too far away 😉
Bani and Rano share a beautful relationship...truly a good friend is a real blessing in life.
Waiting eagerly for the next part!
cheers
Sim

Sim,
Delighted to read you are intrigued. Usually you are good at guessing where i am headed. The real challenge is to keep you on your toes!
Love
Armana

Originally posted by: soapbubble

NEW Armana fanfic!!!! Oh joy 😃 Lip smacking start, that one.

Welcome Bubble, to the crazy world of my ff! Hope you'll stay the length!

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana,

Just read part 3 and the mystery surrounding Jai and Bani is getting very interesting, and the suspence is killing me. 😆

Loved Rano and Bans friendship alot 😛 and Tarun seems to be a darling too 😃 . Thank god no Sahil.

Cant wait for you to unfold the mystery surrounding them soon. 😃

Till your next update.
Love
Krishna

And where is the lovely, bold purple?
I miss it!
Thank you, i hope you enjoy the next part....
Armana

Originally posted by: india06

Commend u for building up the anticipation so well.

Rano makes a good "all-weather" friend. Depth of B's charecter shines through.

Lovely read.Thanks

Your commendation is much appreciated. Thank you and you are welcome.
Armana

Originally posted by: sushups

lovely update 😊 but it has increased my curosity ,can u plzzzz tell when r u updating next.and what had happened 7 years back?plzzzzzzzzzz 😊

I am updating in a few minutes. As for 7 yrs ago...i'm afraid you are going to have wait some more...

another wonderful update...love the tension between the leads...
So he thinks she is an innocent...so I am guessing nothing of that sort happened between them...or did it and hence the rule?

I like this JW...recluse but again authorative (is this a word?)...just like the one we saw in KS in the beginning...

So looks like Bani had fallen for him 7 years ago and is still trying to get up...tough luck for her...

Hi Armana,
Wonderful update. I was waiting for it. I hope you continue soon. There is so much chemistry and tension between the two I can't stand it 😉 . I hope you will throw some light on what happened 7 years ago , soon... I am just waiting with baited breath for the next part..
Minnie

Ms Dickens!! 😉

Nice part!! 👏 👏 the relationship between rano and bani very nicely developed!! i can totally imagine them being that way!! 😆

interesting jodi - rano and tarun... maybe i am suffering from KS hangover, but are you sure Tarun actually knows how to say such big words??!!! 😛 😆

aap ka bhi saat-saal puraana raaz?! please dont drag it as much as kekta maayi did!! 😉

update soon - i fulfilled my half of the bargain, my update awaits your comments!! 😛 😆


Lots of love,

Dan Brown. 😉

Only you could do it! I've been silent up to now but no can do any more. Wow wow wow! Wish I had your ability to capture the characters and their characteristics the way you do. You bring the characters alive and leave us poor readers panting for more long before we reach the end!!

Wouldn't presume to comment beyond saying that like your other fans, I hope you won't keep us waiting too long. Your story captures the nuances and reasons we fell in love with JB in the first place. And you're only on part four!! Can't wait to see the story unfold.

Regards, Rajkona

Wonderful update.
loved it.
👏 👏 👏