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Posted: 18 years ago
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super n faboulous dats wht can i say!
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-II
Bani and Jai keep looking at each other. Jai feels like he knows her for some reason. Bani moves away from his gaze and walks to meet other people in the party.

Jai looks at Tarun and Pushkar and tries to talk to them but both ignore him.

Pushkar has already gone to introduce Bani to other important business magnets and corporate hunchos.

Jai stops Tarun's way and says-

Jai- Tarun, I thought u were my friend so what happened u severed all ur ties with me and walked away from my life when I needed u the most. Why did u do this? And today u r with Bani? Who is she? And what is ur relationship with her?

Tarun looked at Jai and said- Jai, there was a time I would have given my life for u. There was a time when I thought Bani was a bad influence for you, but then when I came to know what she did for you and how u repayed her that is when I decided to leave ur friendship forever because with friends like you who needs enemy.

As far what I am doing with Bani that is none of ur concern to begin with and she is not ur wife Bani Jai.

U remember u killed her seven years back for that ur mistress Pia. And my relationship is not ur concern once again and I am not answerable to you. So why don't u leave me alone and run to ur mistresss Pia for support.

Jai was shocked and stunned to listen Tarun, his best childhood friend one time speak to him with so much scarsm and venom that Jai could not bear it and walked away hiding the tears that he could not control himself.

Jai Waila was not the same man after Bani had died know one knew that Jai had tried to commit suicide at least seven times after Bani had left his life forever.

But somehow the Gods up there wanted to see him live a life of torture and hence he was living it but the zeal to live had died seven years back. He was a man who was functioning but was mentally dead as far as he was concerned.

Because Jai Walia died the day he betrayed Bani and finally if it was upto Jai he would have burned himself alive but he had to live and somehow somewhere in his heart he knew that one day Bani would return to him.

Bani moved along talking to everyone and suddenly saw herself coming face to face with Pia the new wife of Jai Walia and the entire hatred and venom came to her. Pia saw Bani and was stunned when she introduced herself as Bani Dixit. Rano who was standing next to Pia was stunned also.

Bani told Pia- Ur life is about to change so enjoy all the happiness u can find. Because soon all u will have left in ur life is nothing but terror and sorrow. U along with ur husband killed ur sister it is time that someone taught u a lesson.

So Pia, enjoy life as much as u can because from tomorrow ur bad times will start and I promise u that by the time I am done with you u will reget the day u were born.

Pia was stunned and could not believe what was happening. She looked scared and that made Bani happy. Strange she said to herself that she was happy to see her own sister in tears whereas there was a time when she would have given her life for Pia now she make her life a living hell.

Rano was also stunned to look at Bani.

Bani told Rano- There are many surprises that will be coming your way dear make sure u are nowwhere near Pia otherwise do not blame me if u get wrapped up when I destroy Pia and her husband Jai Walia. And of course, Rano how can I forget u? U were also involved in conspiracy to kill ur sister.

Rano looked confused but said- I do not who u are? But I will tell u one thing I loved my Banidi, I wished I would have died instead of her but then I do not expect u to believe me.

I will tell u this that anytime u want me to help u to destroy Pia pls tell me and if u want to destory me then I will accept it because I could not save my sister so please if u think by hurting me u can bring my di to me than just name the time and place I will be there so u can kill me.

Those words pierced Bani's heart like poisionous darts she knew that Rano was not evil. She knew she had to hurt her sister. She decided she will confide in Rano and take her help to avenge her the betrayal by Jai and Pia.

Bani just walked away she had tears in her eyes and decided to just move on. Suddenly the words "Mummmy" stopped her in her tracks she turned to see Rano's son coming and hugging her she was happy to see. But then she saw a boy and girl coming and hugging Pia and she could not believe it. That Jai-Pia had children.

Bani recieved a call on her mobile and came to know that Seema Sinha her friend had just reached India and had come with Bani's nanny Doris and her twin sons- Abhay and Vijay, the light of Bani's life. She told Seema to ensure that her children checked in and were fine she will come and speak to her tomorrow.

Bani was pregnant when she had faked her death and Jai Walia did not know and she had taken full advantage of this. Jai Walia u r going to pay and I am going to make myself enjoy every minute of it.

Bani walked up to Jai who was talking with Pia and Rano. Jai had no relationship with Pia. She was there in his life and he could care less for her than anything.

Bani walked up to Jai and told him how he was? Jai looked at her and said nothing still trying to figure out who she was and more importantly what her motives were?

Bani told Jai- Tell me Jai, do u still take ur medicines on time? Do u still carry ur wife's photo in ur pocket? Do u even remember her?

Jai was stunned. Nobody knew he kept Bani's photograph in his pocket except Bani. How does she know?

Bani smiled and walked away.

Preview for the Next Part-
Bani-Rano meet.
Bani tells Rano the truth about her disappearance and reasons behind it.
Rano is shocked.
Rano vows to help Bani and is delighted to meet the twins.
Bani comes back to Walia House.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happpiness Always,
Manish

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry posted the update twice.
pls ignore.
Edited by mk727272 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
that was realli gd pls continue! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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owesome ya
what did jai do to bani that she hate him so much had an affair with pia or beded her i guess
keep it going its good
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏
i am confused does jai and pia have kids? i hope not
i will kill pia if she had jai's children
wow bani has two sons
i can't wait for bani to take her revenge but don't hurt jai that much😭
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, you write so well and so many ffs running at teh same time.
How come jai and pia have kids when he can't stand her and why did he marry pia. couldnt he have just kicked her out after bani died. that would have shown greateer remorse. i am looking forward to bani's plan of action.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya hey wow this fanfic is real gud..ok sort of confused does jai n pia have kids or no??? but omg bani has twins awwww!! omg i am sooo exicted plz update soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part.interesting story.cant wait to read more. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
darling...u have got me on the edge of my seat... 👏
OMG...what a story...i cant wait for more...
please post soon...is pia ki toh main 😡 😡 ...
god i so want to see jai and pias realtionship burn...
cant wait to see what bani has in store for her ex-hubby and non-sister.... 🤢
Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago

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