FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 43

Originally posted by: maria-n

Dear Sabsj,

So wonderfull to see that you are writing again, that you have in no way lost your ability and spirit! Praise to dear God, for having stood by you and granting your husband, your family and all of us the pleasure and happiness to have our Sabrina stay in our lives as our Sabrina! Sabsj you obviously have a special place with Him! May it always remain like that.

I've reached till part 7 and I love the increasing sensitivity and emotionality of the story. In the first few parts the attraction between them, seemed to be mainly physical, but gradually they started to need each other and become vulnerable in their feelings, needing the assurance of the other....I love it. Beautiful lines in between again.
And the jokes at the end: I recognized myself so much in what you wrote about what a man should understand from his wife! "Fine" 😃 😉, my J. surely knows about this... 😆

And Maria, are you still doing all the work for Sabsj? Whatever the answer, you did a great job! Is there a chance that we might have a new member from France soon? If so, we'd love to welcome you!

Love and best, best wishes,
Maria

hey maria,

how are u dear, have been missing ur critical acclaim for a while now, was wondering why?

yes, i too am happy to be writing/surfing again ...... god has been kind to leave my ability and spirit intact.

only part 7 ....... u have a long way to go, so catch up soon.... it is gonna get more intense now.

u were right ........... see only u manage to put ur finger on it, initially the attraction was more of a physical nature and gradually their feelings grew stronger.

no maria is gonna be going back home tomm, since the cast is off and hands are in working condition, she is resting. i know she did a fab job, i would have been lost and bored to death if not for her.

she does not get zee tv in france, nor does she have the time to surf, but has promised to take updates from me.

u take care......... sabs

Originally posted by: Garf

Hi Sabs, I just caught up with all the chapters, I had missed so far and I am glad you decided to continue the ff after the marriage...I just love your style of writing, it is sooo eloquently expressed...it's a pleasure reading it...and hats off to you sabs, despite being injured and stuff you still manage to write soooo well yaar...here I have a stupid cold and I refused to write the next chapter...can't even think of anything romantic... 😉 Can't wait to read the next part.... 👏 👏 👏

hey garf, glad to know that u r enjoying the ff ........ wanted to try something different this time instead of plain old happy endings.

thanks for the lovely compliments dear, i could say the same holds true for u too........... have been waiting for u to update for ages ...... hopefully u will get around to doing it soon. have posted some more parts, enjoy.

Originally posted by: jigna_07

sabrina that was awesome!!!!
awww the birthday thing that jai had done for bani was adoable!!!
haha love your joke on te perfect husband!
he does NOT exist! 😆 😆 😆

u enjoyed the surprised birthday plan ......... good that was my intention.

as for the perfect husband .......... myth or reality ...... who knows 😆

Originally posted by: Garf

He asked her once again what Sabs....you have stopped it at such an important juncture....but loved the whole description of how he planned the surprise b'day gift for her....can't wait to read further and can't wait to read poo's ingenious comments... 😆

sorry dear, my creative juices stopped flowing just then, so i stopped writing 😆 ........... blame it on my medications ............. have updated the part now, hope it was worth the wait.

as for poo's comments, those are the highlight of my day ......... i write so that she comments ......... she is my muse 😃

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

😭 😭 😭 itna pyaar tha.... ab kahan gaya...

they need to give each other another chance....

Awsome part .... one of the best... 👏

Poo

poo don't cry my dear ........ sabar karo, sabar ka phal meetha hota hain ....... don't worry chance hi chance milega, afterall its a walia trademark ......... they don't give up so easily 😊

Originally posted by: inavars

two hearts, one heartbeat, one soul, one body

those words were just perfect 👏 👏 👏 loved this part sabs..and thanks for making it a little longer than usual 😃

awww..how could bani even think he'd forget?! jai's perfect 😳

loved the humor of hte day 😆 😆

hi srav ......... perfect words for the perfect couple 😛

ok ok i got the hint about the long part ........ will try to do a repeat performance again. it's just that my hand starts hurting so i stop, don't wanna push myself too much, hope u understand.

Originally posted by: divya_123

WOW lovely part dear

aww bani deer how could jai forget ur birthday 😳 he's true having the same old walia party its much better to have a birthday party with just 2 ppl just 2 of u jai and bani aww 😳 hmmm nice flashback hope we could see such parts in the present also 😃 aur haa love the humour it was just fantastic 😆 continue soon 👏

hi divya, yes try putting some sense into ur bani dear ........ she was more interested in having a walia style party .......... so much for romance 😕

don't worry future will be rosy too ........ i'll try ok ........... have posted another update and yet another one is on the way, so enjoy urself.

Originally posted by: hanaane

Originally posted by: Auditi

WOOOOW buddy.... simply WOOOOW... 👏

just read all the parts now from 1 to 11.... its simply awesome... 👏

cont soon.... 😃

thanks auditi .......... for the woooooooowwwwwwww, just inspired me to write another quick update...... have fun reading 😃

Originally posted by: hanaane

You came soo close sabj... I guess thats God gift to you... Mansha Allaah.. I must say...We're all enjoying a high time here thanks for your effort, talent and hard working...😉 😳 👏

am so happy to learn that u r enjoying urself ........ 😃

Every mistake that is done has a price to pay in return..soo I please and personaly request to you... make her pay the price.... if she's really the one who driving the relationship away.. Yaar she's too much but make him handle her if you know what i mean.. 😉 😳... I want the ice queen running after him almost... I know I am asking too much but please take to count hun... we can wait np...😆 😆 😆

let's see who made what mistake, then we will charge them accordingly.

Thanks for the update we truly appreciate your hardworking... 👏 👏 👏

the pleasure is all mine.

Always luv...

hanaane...