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here is part three.... i hope you guys like it... please comment and give any advice...
When she finally turned around she saw Mr. Walia rush into the hospital with sweat forming on his forehead and him looking totally hurt and sad and depressed. Her heart went out for him before she could stop herself.… she was walking towards him when Pia came running into the hospital and straight for Jai and Maasi… Bani looked through the tears in her eyes at Jai and Pia and thought about leaving but she couldn't for Maasi's sake. When no one else in the Walia mansion had liked her, Maasi and Dadi and Aditya uncle were the ones there for her… She could not leave them at a time like this no matter how much it hurt her. She walked up to Jai and in a very determined voice talked…
Bani: Mr. Walia and Pia- I know you guys must be very sad and depressed at having to see me here when you thought you had gotten rid of me… well I am sorry to disappoint you as I will have to say some more days with Mr. Walia for Maasi's sake.
A smile lit up Jai's face… he thought of the past where he had hated her but forced her to stay with him and the way that turned out- they ended up loving each other… so there was a way to get Bani back.
While on the other hand Pia looked sad and angry at her sis for staying… Pia had already made plans of being with Mr. Walia forever… now she was going to have to think of another way… she loved her Di but she would not let Di take Mr. Walia from her…
Bani hurried off to find Maasi and show as if she was the happiest person alive.
Bani: Maasi… How did this happen? Are you okay? I cant believe you didn't take care of yourself…. Do you need me to get you anything?
Maasi: Oh Bani Beta, I am fine… You went to dinner with Jai.. where is he?
Bani: Maasi Mr. Walia is coming in a minute… he is outside talking to the doctor.
Jai: Maasi! Aap kaise ho? Are you okay? I talked to the doctor and he said you can go home as long as you take good care of yourself!
Maasi: Of course Beta, I have Bani with me how can I not be fine.
Maasi is bought home and its night time so after having successfully avoided Jai for the entire day, she now had to go to his bedroom…
As she entered the room she saw that Jai was not in the room… she was relieved as she did not know what to say to him. As much as she hated the fact that he had slept with her sister, she could not be mean to him or pretend to hate him…
She takes out her bed where she had previously slept when she had married Jai due to the circumstances… then they had begin to understand each other and eventually fallen in love but now it was back to the beginning but now instead of him hating her she hated him (or wanted to!)… she decided that the best way to deal with the situation is to avoid him and hurt him how much he had hurt her at the beginning of their relationship.
She did not but Jai was standing right behind her. When she turned around she bumped into him causing her to fall back but of course Jai was there to protect her. They stared into each others eyes as each of them loved the other but Bani could not admit it. The stare continued on for a long time when Bani came back into action and she remembered Pia and Jai… her eyes turned moist and Jai's face filled with regret at seeing her like this. He wanted to tell Bani that Pia did not mean much to him but he knew she was not in the mood to listen to anything right now.
Jai: Bani.
Bani: Mr. Walia don't talk to me. I don't want to listen to anything you have to say. You can sleep on your precious bed and I will sleep on the floor. Outside this room we will act like the perfect couple who is happy but in here we don't have to pretend to be happy when we are not.
Jai: Bani, you can sleep on the bed and I will sleep down.
Bani: No, Mr. Walia. When I slept on the top with you I considered this house to be mine, this bed to be mine, you to be mine--- but now I will not make the same mistake twice. You can do whatever you want but I will sleep on the bottom.
Bani turned and went to sleep on the ground. After a while Jai could not sleep as he thought of Bani sleeping on the hard floor. He knew she liked the comfortable bed so he went and slightly picked up Bani.
Bani out loud says: I love you Mr. Walia- why would you do this to me?
Of course Bani thought it was part of her dream but that ripped apart Jai as he stared at her innocent face and thought of what he had done to her.
The next morning Bani found herself on the bed and was confused about how she got there. She was afraid to turn around cause she would have hated it if Mr. Walia was sleeping next to her but much to her surprise he was sleeping on the couch across the room. He was cold as it was winter and she had the urge to go put the blanket on him… she quickly got up and went to look for Tony, she told him to go put the blanket on Mr. Walia. As Bani came out of the bathroom all ready she realized that it was 7:30 and Mr. Walia was still sleeping. She knew that he had forgotten that he has a meeting in 30 minutes. So once again, she told Tony to wake him up…
While she was giving Maasi her medicine she heard Jai call out her name from upstairs.
Jai: Bani…. Bani!!!
Bani comes running up to the room and...
TELL me if it was too long or boring or any other form or kind of advice and i shall try to change it!
thanks for all my readers... u make it fun to write !
pari
here is part three.... i hope you guys like it... please comment and give any advice...
When she finally turned around she saw Mr. Walia rush into the hospital with sweat forming on his forehead and him looking totally hurt and sad and depressed. Her heart went out for him before she could stop herself.… she was walking towards him when Pia came running into the hospital and straight for Jai and Maasi… Bani looked through the tears in her eyes at Jai and Pia and thought about leaving but she couldn't for Maasi's sake. When no one else in the Walia mansion had liked her, Maasi and Dadi and Aditya uncle were the ones there for her… She could not leave them at a time like this no matter how much it hurt her. She walked up to Jai and in a very determined voice talked…
Bani: Mr. Walia and Pia- I know you guys must be very sad and depressed at having to see me here when you thought you had gotten rid of me… well I am sorry to disappoint you as I will have to say some more days with Mr. Walia for Maasi's sake.
A smile lit up Jai's face… he thought of the past where he had hated her but forced her to stay with him and the way that turned out- they ended up loving each other… so there was a way to get Bani back.
While on the other hand Pia looked sad and angry at her sis for staying… Pia had already made plans of being with Mr. Walia forever… now she was going to have to think of another way… she loved her Di but she would not let Di take Mr. Walia from her…
Bani hurried off to find Maasi and show as if she was the happiest person alive.
Bani: Maasi… How did this happen? Are you okay? I cant believe you didn't take care of yourself…. Do you need me to get you anything?
Maasi: Oh Bani Beta, I am fine… You went to dinner with Jai.. where is he?
Bani: Maasi Mr. Walia is coming in a minute… he is outside talking to the doctor.
Jai: Maasi! Aap kaise ho? Are you okay? I talked to the doctor and he said you can go home as long as you take good care of yourself!
Maasi: Of course Beta, I have Bani with me how can I not be fine.
Maasi is bought home and its night time so after having successfully avoided Jai for the entire day, she now had to go to his bedroom…
As she entered the room she saw that Jai was not in the room… she was relieved as she did not know what to say to him. As much as she hated the fact that he had slept with her sister, she could not be mean to him or pretend to hate him…
She takes out her bed where she had previously slept when she had married Jai due to the circumstances… then they had begin to understand each other and eventually fallen in love but now it was back to the beginning but now instead of him hating her she hated him (or wanted to!)… she decided that the best way to deal with the situation is to avoid him and hurt him how much he had hurt her at the beginning of their relationship.
She did not but Jai was standing right behind her. When she turned around she bumped into him causing her to fall back but of course Jai was there to protect her. They stared into each others eyes as each of them loved the other but Bani could not admit it. The stare continued on for a long time when Bani came back into action and she remembered Pia and Jai… her eyes turned moist and Jai's face filled with regret at seeing her like this. He wanted to tell Bani that Pia did not mean much to him but he knew she was not in the mood to listen to anything right now.
Jai: Bani.
Bani: Mr. Walia don't talk to me. I don't want to listen to anything you have to say. You can sleep on your precious bed and I will sleep on the floor. Outside this room we will act like the perfect couple who is happy but in here we don't have to pretend to be happy when we are not.
Jai: Bani, you can sleep on the bed and I will sleep down.
Bani: No, Mr. Walia. When I slept on the top with you I considered this house to be mine, this bed to be mine, you to be mine--- but now I will not make the same mistake twice. You can do whatever you want but I will sleep on the bottom.
Bani turned and went to sleep on the ground. After a while Jai could not sleep as he thought of Bani sleeping on the hard floor. He knew she liked the comfortable bed so he went and slightly picked up Bani.
Bani out loud says: I love you Mr. Walia- why would you do this to me?
Of course Bani thought it was part of her dream but that ripped apart Jai as he stared at her innocent face and thought of what he had done to her.
The next morning Bani found herself on the bed and was confused about how she got there. She was afraid to turn around cause she would have hated it if Mr. Walia was sleeping next to her but much to her surprise he was sleeping on the couch across the room. He was cold as it was winter and she had the urge to go put the blanket on him… she quickly got up and went to look for Tony, she told him to go put the blanket on Mr. Walia. As Bani came out of the bathroom all ready she realized that it was 7:30 and Mr. Walia was still sleeping. She knew that he had forgotten that he has a meeting in 30 minutes. So once again, she told Tony to wake him up…
While she was giving Maasi her medicine she heard Jai call out her name from upstairs.
Jai: Bani…. Bani!!!
Bani comes running up to the room and...
TELL me if it was too long or boring or any other form or kind of advice and i shall try to change it!
thanks for all my readers... u make it fun to write !
pari
