FF:Dil Ka Rishta FINAL PT Pg 39(01/12/07) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila...u hav eto continue...u cant stop there...cliff hanger...loved it...gerat start...cant wait for more...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome fanfic....but first bani should slap pia left to right....she deserves it and then she can do whatever her mahaan brain tells her to....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i hope you guys like it... sorry for not have responded for a while but my laptop had died and my parents dont know about my addiction to this so i could not use the outside computer but i am back and hopefully with update regularly... so enjoy and comment! thanks!

part 2:

Bani: Nahi… that cant be true… NO

Pia: I am sorry, Di. I just thought you should know the truth… I will leave Mr. Walia forever if you want and go far away but I have his baby in my body. It is a part of me…

Bani just couldn't imagine her sister doing such a thing to her… she would never be able to forgive her… Her heart broke as she took a step back to leave but bumped into Jai… who had heard everything…

Jai: Bani…. I…

Bani: No, its okay Mr. Walia.

Bani had turned cold all of a sudden… neither Jai nor Pia had ever seen Bani so cold before… all the warmth and love had been sucked out… she was just a body now with no emotions… only shock

She turned and left the house so calmly after telling Jai and Pia not to come after her…. Jai and Pia stood there under extreme shock… Jai wanted to go after Bani but he knew it would be to no use… he wanted to slap Pia but he knew it was also his fault as he was the one who was with her…

He stood there all broken up and alone with tears running down his eyes sad about having lost the love of his life – Bani.


Bani walked in the cold when suddenly she fainted in the pitch dark with no one around to help her…

Pia went into her room and looked at her pregnancy report which showed that she certainly was pregnant…

Maasi calls up Jai because Jai and Bani were supposed to come home about an hour ago and still had not shown up. But Jai makes up an excuse and says that they will be late tonight. Maasi smiled because she was happy that her children were once again together- not knowing the truth.

Pushkar's car came across Bani lying on the floor and he quickly took her to a hospital close by… she made him promise once again that he would not tell anyone that she was in the hospital… the doctor came back with the results and it was figured out that she was pregnant…

Bani's eyes flew open with shock… she couldn't believe the fact that she was once again pregnant… she was sooo happy until she realized and thought back to what had just happened… she could not tell Mr. Walia…

As she was walking outside she saw Maasi being rolled inside on a chair… Bani ran up to the nurse and asked her what is wrong and the nurse told her that she had fallen sick all of a sudden and needed urgent care… when the doctor came out Bani was waiting to find out if Maasi was okay

Bani: Doctor, how is Maasi? Please tell me she is okay!

Doctor: Your Maasi is in a critical condition, she will be fine but if she gets any shocks that will be detrimental to her health… You have to keep her happy…

Bani thought of what she was going to do… she was going to leave Mr. Walia forever but now she could not do such a thing as that would hurt Maasi… she was stuck somewhere in the middle…

She had one definite goal for now…Mr. Walia would not come to know of her pregnancy even though she will stay with him till Maasi is well.

comment and let me know if it is too boring and i will try to change it... but i hope you guys are happy that atleast for now bani is staying with jai!
-pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay im first...that was great...cant wait to see how bani plans to hide her preganacy...cant wait... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome!

@ least Bani will be in Walia House!!!!! 😉 😉 😉

plz cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful
atleast Bani will be in the Walia house,
i hope Bani finds Pia's fake pregancy report, pia 😡 you are dead
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgosh so much has happened
don't worry pia someone will findout ur reports are fake
and poor bani has to wait till massi is better
mr walia better fix this asap 😉
great part hun
take care

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys for the sweet comments! i dont even know where i am taking this story so just like you i am also looking forward to knowing what happens next... it will go wherever my fingers take it...

and ziddi what makes you think that the pregnancy report is fake... 😉

and yah we will see how long bani can hide her pregnancy!

i will continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am glad you guys are liking this fanfic... i have written several other ones that i am just recently starting... and if u guys want u can read these... i have two ids: srk_kajol and sapnon_ki_pari as i created them around the same time but forgot the password but now i will be updating through both of them...

DIL KA RISHTA:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=436110

When the Past and the Present Mix:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=435887

and finally Chances:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=436203

hope you like them! and please dont forget to comment!
-pari

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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
again great job 👏 .... please dont dare to stop.....

your writing is very intensive got me hooked....

big hug....

shali...

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