FF:Dil Ka Rishta FINAL PT Pg 39(01/12/07)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Guys,

This is my second FF that I am starting... let me know if i should continue or not?!?!

Bani comes to know the truth about the one night stand between Jai and Pia. (After 1 month)

Bani: Mr. Walia… Is… is all this true? [she could feel the tears brimming up in her eyes as she tried to look at him and still maintain the faith she had in him. She knew he would NEVER do such a thing…or would he?]

Jai: Bani… Bani.. I

Bani: No, Mr. Walia. Please just tell me in a yes or no if it happened…

Jai: I… I am sooo sorry Bani.

She felt as if her heart had been ripped apart…


Bani turns around to leave because atleast for now she cant stand there and look at him

Jai: Bani… don't go.

Bani: Mr. Walia… I have to go… I might be back, I might not be … I don't know… But before I go I want to tell you the entire truth… The truth behind the reason I did all this. The reason why I made you hate me. Mr. Walia… your sister Jigyasa was after your money and so to save your money from her I had to ask for the alimony… Mr. Walia I don't have enough energy in me to explain everything to you so you can ask Maasi for the truth later but for now just know that I did everything cause I loved you.

She turns around to leave but before she goes she adds her last line: I did not have an abortion. I was trying to protect you from a shooter when the guy hit me in the stomach- your sister told you it was an abortion when it was a miscarriage. Its funny- you have been betrayed by your sister and i tried everything to protect you from it… I have been betrayed by my sister and my husband… both of whom I loved from the bottom of my heart- I don't know if I can forgive them or trust anyone else again…

She walks out of the mansion that once belonged to her as she cannot imagine living there with Jai Walia ever again and instead goes to find her so called sister Pia…

She spots Pia sitting on a swing looking at the beautiful scenery. For a moment Bani felt sorry for her sister as for the first time Pia looked almost sincerely in love.

Bani: Pia…

Pia: Oh, hi Di.

Bani: Pia, I have found out about the truth- the incident that took place between you and my husband, Mr. Walia.

Pia: Di, I…. I am soo sorry

Bani: Pia, I have done so much for you… At such a young age I became your mother, then I forgave you for running away with Pushkar and making me marry Mr. Walia, I eventually have forgiven you for having a miscarriage, I have forgiven you for hurting Puskhar… But Pia there are things in life that no woman can forgive another for- specially her sister. I can never forgive you for going against my trust and breaking my trust in my husband. I told you before that a woman can share everything with another except for her husband. I will NEVER share Mr. Walia with you! I love him too much and I trust the fact that he was totally drunk at the time when you made him sleep with you.

Pia: Di… I am pregnant with Mr. Walia's child.

What will Bani do? Will she fight for her husband? Or for the sake of the child will she forgive her sister and get her married to Jai?

What do you guys think? Should I continue? If you guys have any advice or you want certain things to happen let me know… I hope you guys liked it… and if you didn't tell me straight off… thanks!

Edited by sapnon_ki_pari - 18 years ago

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shali thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please contineu.......

you all ready started good......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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first of all that was great! 👏 👏

but does pia have to be pregnant! ah i was soo happy when Bani said that she would never share Jai with Pia but then Pia being pregnant might change everything!!

ah gosh i wonder what bani will do! continue soon!

keep J and B together forever 😳 and kill that Pia 😡 actually Pia cant die cause the kid will die too and its not the kids fault!!! 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
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your opening chapter was really good.


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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was good start.loved it.too good.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! she finds out the truth and she stands up for her husband! gosh pia is pregnant NO 😭 😭

continue soon cant wait to see wat happens next!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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good start
i don't think that Pia 😡 is pregant with Jai's child i think its puskhar's 😕
Pia 😡 😡 😡 you are a disgrace to your family
Bani listen to your heart, fight with Pia for your husband, have an DNA test and closely supervise the whole thing making sure pia, or any of yours and jai's enemies doesn't bribe the doctor and present false results
i want jb to be together
plz write soon
Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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man you can't stop there!!!!!
pia!!!!!!!!! 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OH man!!

good start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cant wait for next part!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila.. that was greatttt.. awwww poor bani 😭 pia just HAD to be pregnant - i can't stand her 😡 😡 that was gr8888.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

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