FF:Dil Ka Rishta FINAL PT Pg 39(01/12/07) - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww...........Bani looking after Jai even though she 'hates' him!!😳

Awesome part hun!👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh pls pls update soon. loved it. Continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dude never long!!!!
in my opinion it was too short!!!
please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OH please continue soon DAT was very short!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey, awsome fanfic. and the last part was really nice 😃 plzzzzz cont. soon 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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why don't u write more ? please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys! i will update one by tonight =D

thanks for the comments! you guys are awesome!!!

-pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope you guys enjoy...

Bani had forgotten that she was mad at him as soon as she heard his voice and ran up the stairs but when she was outside the door she decided she wasn't going to go in running… she casually walked in

Bani: Yes, Mr. Walia… What is it that you want?

Jai: Bani, can you give me my tie?

Bani: Mr. Walia, after all that has happened you are asking me for a tie?!?!?! Do you really not have any shame—do you not care about anything? YOU ... you … ah I cant even bring myself to say it and you are pretending like nothing has happened??!?!?

Jai: Bani, I am sorry about what has happened and you have no idea how guilty I feel… but Maasi called me from the phone downstairs and told me that you look sad and down and I didn't want to upset her and so I called you up so that she could be happy about us being together… Bani, I am going to prove to you that you can trust me again and I will never ever break your trust again if you give it to me.

Bani: Mr. Walia, there are few things a girl cant share and that is her husband- and well its too late for that… I don't know what I am supposed to do! right now there are only two things important in my life, one of them is to make Maasi well again and the second is to take care of my…

Bani couldn't believe she had almost told Mr. Walia about her baby. No, Mr. Walia would never know- she would leave before that ever happened- he was not taking this baby away from her…. Luckily, Bani didn't have to finish her sentence as Maasi came into the door with the pooja thali and gave Jai and Bani some sweets…

Maasi: Bani beta, tonight is the pooja and I want you since you are the bahu of the family to do the pooja. I have arranged everything and I want both of you to be there! Okay?

Bani: Of course Maasi we will be there, right Mr. Walia…

Maasi: Oh, Bani beta don't forget to invite Pia and Pushkar- they are also part of the family… I am going to the temple so no one else is home- Jai take care of Bani.

Bani could feel the tears forming in her eyes and luckily Maasi had left otherwise she wouldn't know how to explain… she was going to have to talk to Pia and invite her now and she would cause she loved Maasi more then she hated Pia. Bani turned to see Jai looking at her- Bani knew that he regretted that night and the pain was shown on his face but Bani couldn't just forgive him like that. Had it been any other girl, then maybe but this was her sister and his first love… how could she forgive him so easily now? Her sister was also carrying Mr. Walia's child…

Bani: Mr. Walia, could you invite Mr. and Mrs. Shukla to the pooja?

Jai: Bani…I …

Bani: Thanks Mr. Walia.

As Bani turned to leave she started to feel dizzy and fainted falling on the floor. Jai rushed over to see Bani- he was scared out of his mind…. He called up the doctor and the doctor was there in a few minutes… By the time Bani regained consciousness the doctor was checking her… Bani got scared because she didn't want Mr. Walia to know about her pregnancy so

Bani: Mr. Walia can you get me water? Please…

Jai: Yes, I will be right back with it…

After Jai had left…

Bani: Doctor, can you not tell him that I am pregnant… I want to surprise him with the news later—

Doctor: Of course Mrs. Walia- but I recommend you take care of yourself… by putting tension on yourself you are hurting the child….

Jai comes back into the room and gives Bani the water and

Jai: Doctor, How is she? Is she okay? Is there any problem? Is there anything to worry about?

Doctor laughs: Calm Down, Mr. Walia. Mrs. Walia- your husband loves you a lot- just you fainting has shaken him up. Mr. Walia- your wife is fine—just a little too much tension—it seems like she is worrying about something so help her relax.

Jai takes the doctor to his car and outside asks him if there is anything more…

Doctor: Mr. Walia I recommend you keep your wife happy from now on… take care of her. She seems to be really worried and shaken up about something and it is causing a lot of damage to her body… Here are a few medicines that you should give her but take good care of her

Jai dropped off the Doctor and was sad about the turn of events—he wanted to keep Bani happy and regretted him decision—he now had to call Pia and Pushkar for tonight because of Maasi… he didn't want to because that would cause Bani more problems but Maasi would not let it go…

So, will Jai invite Pia and Pushkar? How will the conversation be infront of Maasi? Will Bani be able to forgive Pia—or even talk to her? Will Pushkar find out the truth?

dont forget to leave comments! and thanks for the pms!
-pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
its very good please count soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg...how great was that...cant wait for the next update...dont keep us waiting for too long... 😃 ...i hope bani forgivs jai but not pia...and i really hope pia is lying about being preggers with jais baby... 😡 ...iss pia ki toh main...ek baar mere haath mein aajaye...chodungi nahin usko...

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