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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
bani runs a lil cafe/coffee shop...
she' not poor or anything ..her parents left enough money for her to live comfortably..but she runs the cafe becoz she like to do it...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow hun........I just caught up with this one, and I love your writing style!👏

Eagerly waiting for the next part!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow mindblowing parts
keep them coming 👏 👏
will wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

Two days later..


Dadi was visiting some friends and while driving thru the main market her car stopped at a shop where the driver got down to get something…

She looked out the window and saw a little boy across the road crying, there was another little boy there who was palying with a toy train..the first boy apparently wanted it.. as dadi watched a girl came up to them.. a pretty girl,about 22/23 wearing a yellow churidar

The girl sat down with them and within minutes both the children were listening to her.. she made peace b/w them..
The scene was so sweet, that dadi just smiled…

Bani was happy that the two boys weren't fighting any more..she sat chatting to them..
Suddenly a boy who worked at the ice cream parlour across the street ,showed up with 3 ice creams in his hands and held them out to the kids and bani..

B: are, wats this?? Usually I have to fight with ur boss to get some ice cream and even then its always cash first s he feeling ok??? sardi tu nahi lag gayi kaal ki barish se?!

Boy: nahi didi,paise tu samne wali madam ne diye hain
The boy pointed toward an elderly lady sitting in a black car, as bani looked up,the lady smiled
Before bani could do more then just smile bac, the car moved on..


The next day bani thought she saw the same lady outside her caf across the road..,she went over
Dadi was buying some medicines and when bani said " excuse me " she turned around..

B: namaste aunty ji… sorry apko disturb kiya , liekin I just wanted to thank u for the ice cream yesterday..

Dadi smiled at her..

B: aunty ji ,kal apne ice cream khilayi,todays its my turn.aye na, that's my caf over there.plz have some coffee

D: nahi beta ,ur very sweet but mayb some other day…

B: hmmm..ok…but only if u promise..ur not blowing me off r u?

Dadi laughing: no beta ,who would ever blow a lovely girl like u off?..wats ur name..?

B: bani..

D: thats just rite for..

Bani smiled: aunty leikin ap ka naam bhi tu bataye na.. waise tu I know everyone here, even the regular summer families
But I don't remember u..

D: haan beta ,that's bcoz I'v cm bac after a long long time…..im shradha walia..mayb u know about walia mansion.?

Bani was seriously surprisedeveryone knew that the walia's were amongst the richest ppl the country
Just like everyone also knew they never came to Mria anymore

D: beta, do come and see me sometime ,y don't u?

" who tu main waise bhi ati rahti hoon.mohan das kaka ke who toote phoote gamle shamle proof hain meri presence ke" bani
thought,not realizing that she was thinking aloud again..

Dadi smiled,she liked this girl
She was natural and sweet, bright and yet so innocent…
Just like roshni..

B:aunty ji… ap humare caf ka apple pie zaroor try kijye ga..its yummy….do u like apple pie?

D: yes I do

B: good ,coz its my fav too..

D: accha beta I have to go…take care

Bani said bye and watched her drive away


Ok…before anyone yells foul……just want to say that the next part is looong… and in it they do some face to face..finally..


Preview for part 6:
Bani and Jai meet…

Edited by destinyz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
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the cute scene between Dadi and Bani
i hope Jai and Bani meet soon 😛
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
so when r u posting part6???????? 😕 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
sorry guys...part 6 was ready to b posted last nite...
but my wonderful electricity guy decided that he didnt want me to post...
so here it is now...
hopefully i'll update prt 7tonite...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6


Next day, Bani is sitting at the caf just goin thru some receipts and stuff, when the aroma of freshly baked apple pie hit her nose
"ooohh!!!" bani inhaled ,closing her eyes..


she opened her eyes when she heard someone laughing
pushkar was standing there


B: are tum kab aye?

Push: abhi jab tum apple pie ke sapnon mi theen"

B : no way.. I was… was …ummmm u know…. Who kya kahte hain….uff…aroma therapy..apples r uplifting u know…..(slightly embarrassed but reagaining composure quickly)

Push: ohh pleezee.. everyone in Moria knows u have the biggest sweet tooth in town…
I think that's y u opened this caf ..so u could have all the sweet stuff any time…

B:push….

Push : yeah…..

B: shut up!!!

Pushkar laughed…"ok baba"

B: waise bhi im taking this for some one else

Push: really…ab jhoot tu mat bolo..i know u'll wait till i leave n then its just u,the apple pie and the fork….

Just to prove to him and basically to just shut him up,bani quickly put the pie in a box and tied it with a colored string..,eyeing it longingly one last time..

B: ab main chalti hoon..have to deliver this u know..

Push; wow im impressed….


Bani stuck out her tongue and hurried out the caf ,then turned around

B: arey I almost forgot , y did u come by today?

Push: actually I was thinking about goin out to dinner tonite…

B: today…no can do…
Masi is making aloo parathas and palak paneer…

Push; chalo ji..prog cancel..no way am I missing those aloo parathas

B: fine..c u there then…

Push; bye…

Bani spun around and her dupatta knocked over a ketchup bottle

Push said automatically:" careful"

Bani just walked on…




Walia Mansion…..

Sitting in the garden dadi was lost in thoughts
Jai looked up from his laptop

J: dadi wat is?

D: jai im thinking of adding a trauma wing to the hospital in moria..

J: dadi we already have a trust that does philanthropic work all over the country

D: I know that, but I want this in Moria…its imp to me..
I want this…for Roshni…

Jai looked up sharply..
By a silent mutual understanding,they both never mentioned Roshni's name infront of each other,it brought up too many painful memories…


J; ok dadi..if that's wat u want…it shall b so…

Dadi got up and kissed his forehead "I know u miss her" she thought

Jai went inside to place a few calls..



Bani walked up the driveway to walia mansion.,trying very hard to avoid the temptation in her hands

She saw mrs wali outside by the fountain and walked straight to her..
Dadi was surprised and happy to c bani..

D: beta tum baitho..main abhi ayi….

Dadi went inside and bani decided to go check her fav cherry trees at the bac of the house

She got near the largest tree and checked to c the buds…they were still tightly closed

"hmm…should b soon" Bani thought happily…and was so busy just checking the buds, she didn't notice her old nemesis, the dog ,staring at her….

She heard him bfore she saw him…

"oh no…aj phir tum khule ho?""bani almost wailed..

she started to move bac slowly,one step at a time…
the dog just stared at her growling…

then bani turned and broke out in a sprint worthy of an Olympic runner…



jai walked out bac in the garden..dadi had gone inside..he just stood by the chairs looking in to the fountain, formulating some plans for the new wing dadi wanted


something shone in his face .He looked up..at first he wasn't sure wat it was…just someone running from the bac of the house…

then as the flashing stopped,he saw her,,she was running top speed looking behind her..

Running straight at him


Before Jai could think,much less react,she crashed rite into him

Oooffffff!!!!!!!!


(ok now pic this everyone….
A shallow fountain basin,jai on his bac, bani on top of him, his arms around her waist,
Her hands on his chest…staring at each other…both wet and getting wetter by the second)


He was gorgeous..
She blinked..once …then once again..
Nope,she wasn't imagining things….
Those eyes…
Bani had never seen eyes in such an unusual shade.
Straight nose
Dark tanned skin…
Bani's breath caught in her throat…..



After landing in the fountain, the first thing Jai saw was a pair of big chocolate brown eyes
Eyes which were looking at him the way no one had ever looked
Abeautiful face,wide upturned lips..as his eyes travlled up from her lips he noticed her flushing… and her reflected all that she was feeling..confusion,shyness,curiosity….but no embarrassment

If the fisrt sensation were her eyes..the second sensation was how warm and rite she felt in his arms…



That's it for today folks….

Preview for next part
Pushkar and jai meet
Pia arrives..

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Part 6


Next day, Bani is sitting at the caf just goin thru some receipts and stuff, when the aroma of freshly baked apple pie hit her nose
"ooohh!!!" bani inhaled ,closing her eyes..


she opened her eyes when she heard someone laughing
pushkar was standing there


B: are tum kab aye?

Push: abhi jab tum apple pie ke sapnon mi theen"

B : no way.. I was… was …ummmm u know…. Who kya kahte hain….uff…aroma therapy..apples r uplifting u know…..(slightly embarrassed but reagaining composure quickly)

Push: ohh pleezee.. everyone in Moria knows u have the biggest sweet tooth in town…
I think that's y u opened this caf ..so u could have all the sweet stuff any time…

B:push….

Push : yeah…..

B: shut up!!!

Pushkar laughed…"ok baba"

B: waise bhi im taking this for some one else

Push: really…ab jhoot tu mat bolo..i know u'll wait till i leave n then its just u,the apple pie and the fork….

Just to prove to him and basically to just shut him up,bani quickly put the pie in a box and tied it with a colored string..,eyeing it longingly one last time..

B: ab main chalti hoon..have to deliver this u know..

Push; wow im impressed….


Bani stuck out her tongue and hurried out the caf ,then turned around

B: arey I almost forgot , y did u come by today?

Push: actually I was thinking about goin out to dinner tonite…

B: today…no can do…
Masi is making aloo parathas and palak paneer…

Push; chalo ji..prog cancel..no way am I missing those aloo parathas

B: fine..c u there then…

Push; bye…

Bani spun around and her dupatta knocked over a ketchup bottle

Push said automatically:" careful"

Bani just walked on…




Walia Mansion…..

Sitting in the garden dadi was lost in thoughts
Jai looked up from his laptop

J: dadi wat is?

D: jai im thinking of adding a trauma wing to the hospital in moria..

J: dadi we already have a trust that does philanthropic work all over the country

D: I know that, but I want this in Moria…its imp to me..
I want this…for Roshni…

Jai looked up sharply..
By a silent mutual understanding,they both never mentioned Roshni's name infront of each other,it brought up too many painful memories…


J; ok dadi..if that's wat u want…it shall b so…

Dadi got up and kissed his forehead "I know u miss her" she thought

Jai went inside to place a few calls..



Bani walked up the driveway to walia mansion.,trying very hard to avoid the temptation in her hands

She saw mrs wali outside by the fountain and walked straight to her..
Dadi was surprised and happy to c bani..

D: beta tum baitho..main abhi ayi….

Dadi went inside and bani decided to go check her fav cherry trees at the bac of the house

She got near the largest tree and checked to c the buds…they were still tightly closed

"hmm…should b soon" Bani thought happily…and was so busy just checking the buds, she didn't notice her old nemesis, the dog ,staring at her….

She heard him bfore she saw him…

"oh no…aj phir tum khule ho?""bani almost wailed..

she started to move bac slowly,one step at a time…
the dog just stared at her growling…

then bani turned and broke out in a sprint worthy of an Olympic runner…



jai walked out bac in the garden..dadi had gone inside..he just stood by the chairs looking in to the fountain, formulating some plans for the new wing dadi wanted


something shone in his face .He looked up..at first he wasn't sure wat it was…just someone running from the bac of the house…

then as the flashing stopped,he saw her,,she was running top speed looking behind her..

Running straight at him


Before Jai could think,much less react,she crashed rite into him

Oooffffff!!!!!!!!


(ok now pic this everyone….
A shallow fountain basin,jai on his bac, bani on top of him, his arms around her waist,
Her hands on his chest…staring at each other…both wet and getting wetter by the second)


He was gorgeous..
She blinked..once …then once again..
Nope,she wasn't imagining things….
Those eyes…
Bani had never seen eyes in such an unusual shade.
Straight nose
Dark tanned skin…
Bani's breath caught in her throat…..



After landing in the fountain, the first thing Jai saw was a pair of big chocolate brown eyes
Eyes which were looking at him the way no one had ever looked
Abeautiful face,wide upturned lips..as his eyes travlled up from her lips he noticed her flushing… and her reflected all that she was feeling..confusion,shyness,curiosity….but no embarrassment

If the fisrt sensation were her eyes..the second sensation was how warm and rite she felt in his arms…



That's it for today folks….

Preview for next part
Pushkar and jai meet
Pia arrives..

Edited by destinyz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was lovely, i liked how Jai and Bani met, its going to similar to how they meant in my ff but different
that was so cute,adorable, sweet hilarious and romantic, i hope dadi sees this
when pushkar and jai meet i think both are going to be jealous of one another, you should have Bani by Pushkar where she is hugging him for the new wing and congrulating him, Jai sees this he gets jealous 😉
so Roshini died poor Jai 😭 but i am sure that Bani will feel his life with happiness and love
he has already started to feel something when she bumped into him and he is attracted to her
Jai should give the dog a treat 😆
Now I want apple pie😭😆
Plz write soon 😛
Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago

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