FF..Double standards...part 30...up!

Guys…..this is my first attempt at writing…so plz bear with me…and im writing in a mix of roman and English..but if someone rather I stick with one language just let me know… if u guys think its worth it ,I'll continue…wat with all the jai bani fans…I just hope I get things rite…..suggestions will b highly appreciated…

Other characters will b introduced as the story goes along..

Jai walia: succesfull billionare in his mid 30's.

Holds the reputation of being cold ,unemotional &

Analytical..A very private person who has no time for

nor Belief in love..he decided a long time ago that he would

never again allow himself to need someone

He was wrong

Bani dixit: a small town girl, early 20's,runs a local caf,

quick tempered,witty,slightly clumsy and a friend to all

She lives with her masi, her parents dying when she was

10….practical and pragmatic,she has another side to her

not many ppl know of, who loves life and believes that

Somewhere someone is made for each of us..and when

soulmates meet,life becomes whole..

Her life is about to change

Preview for part 1:

Bani is introduced….

part 1:pg 1

part 2:pg 2

part 3: pg 3

part4 ;pg 4

part 5: pg 5

part 6:pg 6

part 7:pag 7..

part8..pg 8..

part 9..pg 9

part 10...pg 10

part 11..pg 11

part 12..pg 12

part 13..pg 14

part 14..pg 16

part15..pg18

part16..pg19

part17..pg20

part 18..pg 22

part19..pg 23

part 20..pg 24

part 21...pg 25

part22..pg 26

part23...pg 27

part24....pg 29

part25...pg30

part26...pg32

part27..pg 34

part28...pg 35

part29...pg 36

part30..pg 38

ok im posting the first part...

PART 1…..

Small hilly town of Moria

She was in trouble, …she knew she was in trouble as soon as she saw the ppl outside her house…

"Haila,wat did I do this time?" she frantically searched her brains for any recent adventures but drawing blanks…. Until she saw mohan das the garderner at walia mansion in the ppl…

"ohhh..tu yeh aya hai sab ko lekar…ise tu main…."she starts plotting but her thoughts r cut short..

"Bani!! Wahan khadi kya kar rahi ho? Idhar ayo"says an elderly woman.

"Ok….courage bani ,courage ..feign ignorance and if that doesn't work..just remember…the best defence is a good offence….."talking to herself ,bani moves ahead….

"Kya hoa masi"?bani says

"kya kah rahein hai ye sab…?"masi gives a stern look

"masi,aap bhi na,,,mujhe kya pata yeh sab kya kah rahain hain? Main tu abhi abhi ai hoon"bani says innocently

"are is ladki ko dekho tu zara..itna bara nuksaan kiya humara aur kehti hai ise nahi maloom hum kyun aye hain" mohan das says angrily…..the ppl around him start murmuring in agreement..

"poocheye is se ajj yeh humare bagheeche main kya kar rahi thi…?"mohan das asked angrily..

"bani …tum phir se wahan gayi theen..i'v told u many times…stay out of there.."masi said.

"but masi I just went to check on the cherry blossoms ..it almost spring na..they will b bloming any time now" enthusiastically Bani replied forgetting for a moment that she had just claimed innocence in the entire matter… "wooh… ummm..mera matlab hai… maine tu … I mean …umm"

"dekha akhir sach aaya na samne…poocheye is se,she broke two of the imported flower pots,two decorative lamps and almost drowned the dog" mohan das rattled off….

'ok bani…time to go on the offensive'..bani thought to herself..

"ji nahi….i didn't drown the dog… ur dog strated chasing me…honestly that dog is dangerous..wat if it had bitten me?phir kya hota…mohan das kaka..u should know better then to let that thing loose…who tu us kutte ko pani se dar lagta hai tu maine ne khud ko bachane ke liye fountain main jump laga di…ab mujhe kya pata tha ke who bhi mere peeche aye ga../ agar mujhe kuch ho jata to?? Apke who imported saman to wapis asakte hain leikin meri jaan chali jati tu ???"

"dekhia mausi mere bazo per tu chot bhi ayi hai" bani pushed her arm in front where her elbow was slightly scratched

"hai !! meri bacchi…yeh kya hoa?? " masi said forgetting all about the complains… "jae ap loag..dekh nahi rahe..sara kasoor us kutte ka hai"masi turned her anger towards the crowd…

"arey leikin yeh garden main ayi kyun? Ab kutte ka kaam rukh wali hai na…tu who tu kare ga…." Mohan das spluttered…

'garden ko asman se aya hai?" "bus bus…jaane do…tum loag tu bus aise hi meri beti ki shikayat le kar ajate ho" masi shooed them away with her hands and led bani inside..

that folks is our Bani,not ur usual waif goodness come to life, but a girl who does wat she pleases,when she pleases,.

Ok…hope u guys like it… it's a little detailed…but that's coz I wanted to really bring out the essence of bani .

Jai will get an equally long intro..so no worries on that account..

After the initial intro, gona keep things short…

Let me know wat u think…

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Lovely start

Waiting for Jai's intro

gr8 beginning..!

eagerly await the intro of jai walia...!!

hunnii.. one question.. are u actually planning to write in roman or did u
mean u were writing in hinglish..<hindi and english!>?????


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this seems interesting!!!!

cant wait for next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome begining
pls cont soon

thanx for liking it u all..i thought i shouldnt continue as i got second thoughjts...but here goes...

@akriti,,,im plannin on writing in hindi written in roman(english letters...) 😆 ..just dont think im confused about wat my ppl r saying...
next part up in 15 min..

Originally posted by: destinyz

@akriti,,,im plannin on writing in hindi written in roman
(english letters...) 😆 ..

well well.. my apologies. and thanx for clearing the doubt!

Ok ..so Jai walia is played by ,of course ram kapoor..who else...complete with that white lock of hair(very hot white streak ,if i can b allowed to say.. 😳 😉 }