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Posted: 18 years ago

here comes..

part 30

bani shivered slightly…

she was cold on the outside.. but getting rapidly

warm on the inside

mayb it was the effect his touch was having on her….

Something she could see in his eyes as they followed

His fingers movements on her face…

It was something the likes of which she had never seen before..

Not even when he had almost kissed her in his bedroom….

As the memory of that almost kiss came to her mind she blushed…

Thankfully it was very dark and he probably hadn't seen

her face turn pink….

………………………………………………………………………………..

jai had put his finger on her mouth to silence her…

well…it was partly true…

the other part was, if she continued to speak,

he would have kissed her..

so just because he didn't want to take any advantages,

he had done it…

though now he knew he had made an even bigger blunder

coz he couldn't seem to move away from her…

his fingers traced her lips…her cheeks…

her nose….

He wanted the memory of bani with him….

He wanted to have something to hold onto when he went away….

He saw something flash in her eyes….

An emotion …. something he couldn't recognize…

but her eyes suddenly lowered…

she started to move bac…

but he couldn't let that happen…

his other hand just caught her by the hand…

he pulled her closer ….

She didn't resist….

But she wouldn't look up either….

J; I was smiling because I remembered the first time we met..

Jai tried to coax her into looking up at him

But her head remained resolutely bent…..

J: u pushed me into the fountain …..

B: I did not push u,…. I slipped……and u ….u….

In her haste to relieve her self of blame she looked

up and her breath caught in her throat

he was so close she had to tilt her head to look at him..

he was close enough for her to smell his cologne

close enough to see that his grey eyes

had a darker shade of grey at the rims…

close enough to kiss…..

she moved away from him with a small sound…

but he would have nothing of that…

he hadn't let go of her hand…

and as she stood with her bac to him

bani knew it was inevitable…it would happen…

becoz it was meant to…..

……………

but instead of turning to face him…

she stood as she was…

he slowly came up behind her…..

his fingers slowly moving across her shoulder blades…

he came close enough to put his arm around her from behind

and pulld her closer to himself..

bani who had closed her eyes at the brushing of his

fingers across her bac…let out a small gasp….as she came

in full contact with him…

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Ye, Paas Aa Jayein

Hum, Hum Tum, Tum,Hum Tum

Aankhon Mein Humko Utarne Do Zara

Baanhon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai...

Pass ajaye……….Hum Tum

Saanson Ko... Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Ye, Paas Aa Jayein

Hum, Hum Tum, Tum,Hum Tum

Jai slowly turned her around

bani who's eyes were still closed..slowly opened them

Jai was watching her with an intensity that was taking her breath away…

At that moment in time……bani knew wat passion was……

A passion she had never thought she was capable of …..

A passion she didn't think she could bear….

Jai moved his hand from her shoulder to her face

Tracing the line of her nose and lips…

He cupped her face in his hands..

His thumbs rubbing the side of her eyes softly….

Rubbing the kajjal that had

crept up to the corner due to the rain…

bani let out a soft sigh and her eyes just closed involuntarily…

Salvatein Kahin, Karvatein Kahin

Phail Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera

Nazron Mein Ho Guzarta Hua Khwabon Ka Koi Kafila

Jismon Ko Ruhoon Ko Jalne Do Zara

Sharm-O-Haya Ko Machalne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzaarish Hai Ye...

Pass ajaye……….Hum Tum

Bani who's hands had been clenched into fists at

her side.. gave in to herself…

her hands came to rest against his chest..

her fingers splayed across his heart..

as if to push him away….

Jai moved his hand down her arm as if to comfort her ..

His fingers creating a strange friction as they rubbed

off some of the droplets

Of water from her skin…

And oddly she felt the warmth spread thru her limbs….

It was like he knew , she was scared and confused…..

And he was trying to tell her , thru his hands…

Thru his actions…

That she could trust him…

That he would never do anything to hurt her…..

Chu Lo Badan Magar Is Tarah, Jaise Surila Saaz Ho

Andhere Chupe Teri Zulf Mein, Kholo Ke Raat Aazaad Ho

Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara

Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzaarish Hai Ye... Paas Aa Jayein

Hum, Hum Tum, Tum,Hum Tum

Saanson Ko...

Baanhon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara

Lamhon Ki Guzarish Hai Ye...Hum Tum

Jai slowly bent his head……

And stopped just a few breaths away from her lips….

J:bani???

Bani opened her eyes at the question she heard in jai's voice…..

J: bani can I ………may i……….

Bani looked at him in sudden realization that even though he wanted to…..

He was asking for her permission….

The knowledge that he would do that….

Even though she was completely at his whim….

Made her heart soar…….

She slid her hands from where they rested against his heart

Upto his shoulders ……..

And pressed herself closer to him…telling him without words…..

Jai slowly ..almost reverently leaned down

and placed his lips on hers….

………………………………………………………………

whew!!!!!!

ok...so the kiss hasnt really happened.....just started....but i dont think i have wat it takes to take things any further...😳..but im still gonna try.....😉..j/k

how was it??? plz do comment..

Edited by destinyz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
nobody read it?? or did nobody like it?? 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
g8 part destinyz and kiss has just started yaar i don't what it will lead to and whether jai will be able to go for his business meeting leaving bani for long or something else is gonna happen. please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: monsoon lily



There are a few grammatical mistakes...and plus, it's a little too clich

the cliche part...yeah...i know...didnt realise it at that time....and afterwards just figured...most romance is cliched aneways...

as for the grammatical mistakes.... sorry for that...i do try to b more careful now...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww... it was TOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD......... 😃 😳

the way u xplained everything was just WOOOW..... 👍🏼

plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..... 😃

okay 1 thing! y do u alwayzz stop in such places...
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon! that was amazing!
ive missed some parts but i read them all and i absolutely loved them! plz do cont soon! and wow finally the kiss! lolz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey gr8
loved ur ff
read aall 30 parts in 2 days
plzz cont soon
make them confess yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey i read your whole fanfic in one go. i must say u have done a fantastic job. 👏 👏 keep it up..plz update sooooonnnn. I am patiently waiting for it... 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Where are U? No updates for a while. The story is very nice . Please update soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yeaaa buddy where r u??? 😕

I hope u r alr8... 😊

plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz cont soon.... 😊

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