FF..Double standards...part 30...up! - Page 3

YA! Take your time and of couse a novel type fanfic is what required. But Dear, can you make the parts a little loonger.

Originally posted by: msrk

YA! Take your time and of couse a novel type fanfic is what required. But Dear, can you make the parts a little loonger.

more longer?? i thought mayb they were already long...

ok...i'll try to do that....😊

and thanx u guys...glad u like it...😳

ok one more

Here u go…finally the meet…or do they?????

Part 4..,,,

Walia mansion was a beautiful house settled slightly above the main town and market..

It had surrounding acres of green land, fruit orchards at the bac,

A clump of cherry trees rite behind the house.. and

There was a sunken fountain in the front gardens…

From the outside it looked very majestic and welcoming…

On the inside it had the air of being unused ,which it was ,since the past 15 years..

As Jai walked thru the landscaped gardens that afternoon ,he noticed that everything inside the house and outside it was in good shape

,which was to b expected since he employed full time staff to maintain the house..

as he walked towards the bac of the house he remembered coming there every summer and sometimes during spring break when he would come home from boarding school

he came to a stop near the cherry trees..

Flash Bac***

A young boy, 12 years old, running around the trees, playing hide n seek…

A little girl in a pink dress trying to find him and when she couldn't, she sat down and started to cry.

He immediately came out from his hiding place and ran upto her.

He could never see her cry…

FB*** ends

Jai touched the 'R' engraved on the trunk of the oldest tree.

'roshni'… the name escaped his lips like a silent prayer…

"jai sir…ap ka fone hai" a servant had walked upto him…

Jai turned and walked inside…

Next day…..

We see bani getting up…she has a dreamy look on her face…..for some reason she seems happy…

Mayb it was the weather or mayb it was just some gut feeling….but today she was smiling for no reason..

'OH no. aj tu pushkar ka lunch lakar jana hai" she quickly packed up his fav food she hade made this morning..and walked out towards the other side of town…

there was a cool breeze….."aj kuch accha zaroor hoga"she smiled to herslf..

(ok now in typical filmy ishtyle ,our bani breaks out in a song n dance routine..😉**)

(the song is from dosti)

aisa koi zindagi mein aaye,

joh zindagi ko zindagi banaye

thode khushiyaan ho thode ansoon ho

aur zara zara pe muskuraye

she 's walking thru some flowers…..

then we see.. the bac of a guy..dressed in jeans and a light blue shirt…he turns around and lo and behold…there stands our Pushkar..or Push as bani calls him…

**aisa koi zindagi mein aaye,

joh zindagi ko zindagi banaye

thode khushiyaan ho thode ansoon ho

aur zara zara pe muskuraye**

aisa koi zindagi mein aaye,

joh zindagi ko zindagi banaye

dilon jaan se joh mujhpe mare

sirf mujhse mohabbat kare

mere khwabon mein khoya rahe

mere kaandho pe soya rahe

mere liye duniya bhulaye

mere dardo gum bhi uthaye

**aisa koi zindagi mein aaye,

joh zindagi ko zindagi banaye**

***lamha lamha umar baat le

meri tanhayian kaat le

har ghadi bas mera naam le

ladkhadayon joh main thaam le

mere saare sapne sajaye

meri palko mein ghar banaye***

aisa koi zindagi mein aaye,

joh zindagi ko zindagi banaye

(ok lyrics in blue r Push singing, pink is bani.. bear with me…I promise this is goin somewhere)

as the song finishes, Bani reaches the Life trust hospital….coz that's where Push works(his lunch ,remember)

that's rite…he is a doctor…but he is busy with a patient so instead of disturbing him, bani leaves his lunch on his table

and leaves…

while on her way bac..it starts to drizzle…

bani loved rain….it felt so purifying…..she was walkin along enjoying it…

but then it started to really pour a spring shower…

she ran towards a tree" oh really smart bani,wat if lightning strikes?" she thought to herself…..then giggled and just decided to stay where she was…which was the middle of nowhere..

Jai was working at his laptop when he felt a gust of wind and some water splash at him from the open window.looking around he saw that the curtains were blowing..he wasn't really fond of rain…

He got up to close the the window..when he chanced to look down towards the road….

He saw her ……

She seemed so totally oblivious to her surroundings…. Just laughing …spinning around….

It was raining too hard for him to c her face…

How long he stood there, he had no idea…but he just did….

Its only when he saw her moving away..did he come bac to reality with a start…he looked at himself and then outside again…

She was gone…

Its only when he closed the window that he realized wat he had been doin…

His hand had been stretched out towards her….

Ok…that's it for today…..whew..im impressed with myself..2 parts in one go….

No preview as for now…coz I haven't thought that far ahead….lolzzz

Hope u guys like it…tried to stretch it as much as I could..

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Ek Anjeeb Sa Chera Thera SHayad Hai Pyaar Yeh
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I think that Roshini died in the accident, thats why Jai doesn't believe in love any more 😕
that was great please continue soon

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that was awesome!

"kitni dafa kaha hai araam se chal".

What does that mean?

O ya, it was awesome can u update soon pls? 👏 👏
& can u write in english pls?
if not, its ok..i'll try 2 understand. 😃

"kitni dafa kaha hai araam se chal".
means..how many times have i told u,walk carefully....
actually my bani is a little bit..clumsy, knocking things over,tripping,.kinda like that..
i 'll try to keep the hindi/urdu to a minimum

glad u like it jigna,ziddi...and hritik-lova 😊

next update will b either tonite or mayb tmrw...
though one thing i can tell as of now

"they will come face to face tmrw" 😳

dude wat a place to leave off


plz cont soon!

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

dude wat a place to leave off


plz cont soon!

i learn from the best...😉...u have cliff hangers in most of ur fan fics....

fantastic! well done!

one question.. maybe u have this in ur character sketch.. but what exactly
does bani do as in her profession is????

plz do continue!!

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