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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
ooo...do u guys like my ff...not too many responses...should i continue or not...dont worry guys JANI will be together...kuch sabbar karo...and really let me know...i wont continue if its not good...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow Tarun like Bani, but i think Bani likes Jai, plz make JB get together
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!
please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omggg tarun likes bani.. and jigyasa 21 yr old.. now there's somethin new.. so cool.. adi and jigs like each other.. how sweet.. that was gr888.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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-Jai, Adi and Tarun getting ready to go to Banis house to talk to her cachi. Jigyasa in her room when Jai walks in-

J- Jigyasa tumse ek baath puchna tha. Jigyasa i wnated to ask u sumthing.
Jig- Gi bhaia, kya baath kai? Ofcourse what is it?
J- Woh…Bani ke sirf ek cachi hai, right? Gaar mein aur koi busurg nehi hai? Umm...Bani has only one aunty right, there is no other elder in her home?
Jig- Haan bhaia, leki aap kuyn puch rahi hai? Yea, but why r u asking bhaia?
J- Nehi, woh assi hi…kuch nehi…thanks No...um...just cuz...its nothing..
Jigs- (a little weird about it) No problem bhaia.

(Jai meets Adi and Tarun downstaris who are with Massi and Dadi)
T- Dadi, Massi apki ashirwad chahiyeh. (Goes to get blessing) Dadi MAssi i need your blessings.
M- Beta humari ashirwad toh humesha tumhari saath hai. Son our blessings are always with you.
D- Kya baath hai, aak kuch special hai kya? Whats up, is sumthing special happening today?
T- Dadi ek bohot bada kaam ke liye jarahi hoon, vapas aah ke bataunga. Dadi im going for a very important thing, ill tell u once i get back.
A- Acha, Ma aur Massi hum loog chalte hai. Mom, Massi we should get going.
M- Haan tum loog jao, saab shub shub hoga. Yeah, go ahead, everything will turn out good.

(Jai, Adi and Tarun drive over to Banis house)
J- Tarun relax yaar, itni nervous kuyn hai? Tarun, relax, why r u so nervous?
A- Haan, enjoy your freedom while u can…hum tumhari rishte ki baath karne jarahi hai, life time commitment. Enjoy yur freedom, we going to set your wedding it a life time commitment.
T- Isi liye toh, itni badi baath hai, main relax kase karoon? Thats why. ITs such a huge step, how can i relax?
A- Don't worry, saab tik-tak hoga. Dont worry, everything will be fine.

(Mean while at Banis house. She comes home for the weekend so she can be with Rano)
*Ring Ring*
B- Hello
P- Bani, how are u?
B- Pushkar tum, kaal tumhe kya hua, Jiggs ki party mein nehi aya tum? Puskhay you?! What happned to u last night u didnt go to jiggs party?
P- Bani tum toh mujhe jante ho, I was busy. Bani you know me, i was busy.
B- Haan , haan pata hai tum kitne busy the. Choro kyase yaad kia hume? Yeah yeah i know how busy u are. Anyways how did u remember me today?
P- Bani u hurt me, tum jante ho ke tum mere yaadon mein din raath ho. Im hurt Im really hurt. Ouch that hurt. U know u are in my memories everyday day and night.
B- Acha, yeh baath hai. Wow I feel special. Its like that, well i feel special.
P- I called to say bye. Main kuch din ke liye bahar jarahi hoon, isi liye. Well i called to sayBYE, im going out of town for a few days.
B- Shukar hai, is baar at least u r tellim me. (*Knock Knock*) Acha Pushkar darwaze pe koi hai, have a safe trip. Bye Thanks for at least telling me this time...hey gotta go theres someone at the door...have a safe trip BYE
P- Ok bye Bani (Hangs up) I love you Bani. Ek din mere dil ki baath tumko kehe dungi Bye bani...hangs up...i love u and one day ill tell u wahts in my heart.

(Bani opens the door to see Jai, Adi and Tarun standing at her door step)
B- Aare, aap log yahaan? Andar aiyeh na. U guys here, come in please.
J- Thanks you Bani, umm….tumhari cachi gaar par hai kya? Bani is your cachi home?
B- Haan hai to, kya baath hai, saab kuch tik hai na. Jiggs is ok? Yes, whats the matter is everything ok, is jiggs ok?!
A- Oh yeah, woh…
(Cachi yells for Bani)
B- Aayi cachi… aap log please have a seat mein cachi ko bejtih hoon. Coming aunty, pleas have a seat, ill send aunty out.

(Jai, Tarun and Adi sit down when Banis cachi comes in)
J- Namaste main Jai Walia, Jigyasa ki bhai…Namaste im Jai walia, Jigyasas brother...
C- Jigyasa ki bhai…hey Ram…mujko paath tha yeh din zaroor ayega. Mujhe paat tha ek na ek din us Bani ki bachi aap logo ko koi na koi shikayat ki baath zaroor denge. Kya ki usne? Jigyasas brother...o dear lord...i knew that this day was bound to come. I knew that one of these days Bani was going to give u sumthing to complain about...What did she do?!
A- Nehi aap galat samaj rahi hain. No u r misunderstanding...
J- Haan, main hoon Jai, yeh Aditya aur yehTarun mere dost. Yes, Im Jai and these are my friends Aditya and Tarun.
C- Gi main kuch samja nehin. What...i dont understand...
T- Darasal baath yeh hai ke….. Well...the think is that...   ;   ; (Bani walks in with chai nasta)

B- Aap logo ko sugar kitni chahiyeh HOw much sugar do u take.?
(Bani makes everyones tea and leaves the room to help Rano; Tarun is very impressed with her hospitality)
C- Gi aap kuch kehe rahi thi. yes...u were saying.
T- Haan woh, actually hum yahaan Bani ki haat mangne aaye hai. Yes...actually we are here to ask for Banis hand in marriage.
C- Kya, Bani ki haat, lekin kis ke liye? Mere matlaab hai, aap ke liye? WHAT?! Banis hand...but foe whom...i mean which one of u?
J- Haan Tarun ko Bani bohot pasand hai aur woh Bani ko aapni paatni bana chate hai. Tarun ki garuntee main aap ki detah hoon. Tarun owns his own resturant chain, ek ache parivar ka hai. For Tarun, he really likes Bani and wants to make her his wife. I can vouge for him. Tarun owns his own restaurant chaina nd comes form a good family.
C- Saach aap logo ko Bani pasand hai? Maine to khabi sapne mein bhi nehi socha tha key aasa rishta Bani ki liye hoga. Hume Manzoor hia, subkuch manzoor hai. Really u like BANI?! I never dreamt that we would get such a good proposal for her. We accept...we accept everything.
A- Lekin ek baar toh Bani se puch lete. But...shouldnt we atleas ask Bani?
C- Uski koi zarruat nehi hai, Bani will do what I tell her. Is se aacha rishta nehi milegi usko. Thats not necessary, she will do what i tell her. She cant get anything better than this.
J- Phir bhi, ek baar puch to lete. Still we should ask her once...
C- Tik hai, BANI!!! OK BANI!
B- Gi cachi koi kaam tha. Yes aunty, did u need sumthing?
C- Nehi baas tumhari ek jawab chahiyeh…Yeh Tarun tumse shaadi karna chate hai, tumahi haath mangne aaye hai. Tume kya yeh rishta manzoor hai? No just an answer. Tarun herehas asked for you hand in marriage, do u accept this proposal?
(Bani just stareing at the group with a blank expression; Tarun, Jai and Adi are all nervous about her answer)
C- Bani?! Bani?! Kya hua, tumhe yeh rishta manzoor hai yah nehi…(cachi gives bani a dirty look) Bani do u accept this proposal or not?!
J- Bani tum koi bhi jawab desakti ho, no pressure… Bani can can give us any answer there is no pressure.
C- Bani jawab do…. Bani answer us.!

…Chapter 3- What will Bani say…will her cachi be happy will she be happy…

comments welcome please…should I continue or not…hope u like it

Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
goldie_ever thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
just read both parts
they were superb
but this cliff hanger 😡 😉 😆
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome fanfic! i just have a question: is this JB?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
cliff hanger!!
she better not say yes to tarun!!!
even if ahe does our jai better be able to do some magic on her. 😃
jnawaz thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the positive feedback...ill post the next chapter soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
well done hunnii..!

plz do continue!!

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