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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 3

-Bani was just aked about marrying Tarun; she is just standing in front of everyone looking out into space; Rano hears the co motion and listens by the door-

B- (thinking to herself) what!? How can this be?! A proposal for me. Aur woh bhi from Tarun. What should I do they need an answer?! (she looks and sees Rano from the corner of her eye) Tarun is a goo dguy, he is nice and honest and successful. I see him at Jiggs house with Jai and Adi bhaia. I should do this. I always wanted to amrry someone I loved but I have to do this for my sister. If I become Taruns wife then I can look after Rano and we wont have to be tortured and put down by Cachi.

A- Bani kya baath hai, do u need time to think? Bani whats the matter?
(Bani looks at her Cachi who has a nasty look on her face and then at Rano then to Tarun)
B- Nahin mujhe aur time nahin chahiye. Mujhe yeh rishta manzoor hai.
(All breath a sigh of relief) No i dont need time, i accept this proposal.
C- yeh lijiye aap log muh miitah ki jiye. Lekin is shaadi ke liye humare ek shaart hai. Here everyone have some sweets, but we have a condition for the wedding.
(Everyone looks at Cachi)
C- Main chati hoon ke tum dono ki shaadi jald se jald hojaye. Main chati hoon ke engagement next week taq hojaye. I want the wedding to take place ASAP and that teh engagement is done my next week.
T- Mujhe koi problem nahin hai, Bani tum? Im ok with that, how about u Bani?
B- Jo aap log tik samje, mujhe koi aitraaz nahin. I have no problem...what ever u think is best.
C- Aur Bani aaj ki baad tum college nahin jaoge. Stay home, kyun Tarun.
(Bani looks at her Cachi then Tarun shocked; why cant she finish school; its her life) And Bani after today u will not go to school. Stay home right Tarun?
T- umm….haan jaise app tik samje…aap Bani ki cachi hai. ummm....what everu think is best u are her aunty.
J- Tarun aur Cachi, what r u saying. Bani, Jigyasa aur Anu saab college ki last year mein hai. U want them to stop now. Why? Besides, unki Finals toh 2 weeks baad hai, right Bani. Anu jigyasa nd Bani all r in the last year and they have finals is 2 weeks Right?
B- (shocked to see Jai defend her) Gi, finals bohot hi kareeb hai. Yes finals are really close.
T- Tik hai Bani can finish her final year. Ok bani u can finish your last year.
A-Good, Cachi hum log gaar jake Massi aur Ma se baath kar ke aap ko engagement ka date batah denge. Ok aunty we must go home and tell mom and Massi and we will let u know the date for the engagement.
C- Acha tik hai. Ok great
(All leave; Bnai goes to her room not seeing that Rano is still standing there and connot believe what just happnes)
R- Didi ne haan kyun kardi. Mujhe paata hai ke didi love marrige chati hai toh phir yeh kya tha. Mujhe Jiggy didi ko phone kar na chahiyeh. Why did didi say yes. I know she wants to have a love marriage so why did she say yes. I should call Jiggs didi.

-At Walia House in Jiggs Room-
*ring ring*
Jig- Bani ka gaar ka number, Bani hi hoga. HELLO BANI whats up yaar? Bans house number, it must be her...
R- Jiggy didi main Rano. Jiggy didi its me Rano.
Jig- Rano tum, kya baath hai, saab tik hai na? Why r u sounding so nervous? Rano you, whats teh matter, is everythign ok
R- Didi woh, aaj humare gaar par Ad… Didi its....today adi....
(Lots of commotion coming from downstaris and Massi is calling Jiggy)
Jig- Rano let me call u back, Massi mujhe bolarahi hai. Rano massi is calling me let me call u back...
R- Didi woh... aacha Bye But didi...ok bye...

(Jiggs comes down staris to see the whole family there all waiting for her; everyone seems to be in a good mood and she notices boxes of sweets on the table)
Jigs- Bhaia itni saari mithaiyaan, kya baath hia…kisii ki shaadi hai kya…(joking) Bhaia so many sweets, what the matter...did u guys just fix someones marriage.?!
T- Jigyasa tumhe kayse paatha? Jigyasa how do u know....
Jig- What?!
A- Jigyasa ko paatha hoga na, after Bani ki best friends hai. Ofcourse jigyasa will know, banis is her best friends after all.
Jig- aap log yeh kya bolrahi hia, I don't understand anything? What r u guys talking about i have no idea.
J- aacha, tik hai, Tarun make the announcement Ok Tarun u make the announcement.
(Tarun blushes and looks down)
J- yaar tum bhi na, aab sharmana tumhari biwi ko hai tumhe nahin. Chalo ill tell u guys what up. Tarun ki shaadi paki hogai hai. U Tarun...its time for your wife to blush not you...ok ill tell u...Taruns wedding has been fixed.!
(All cheer and congratulate him)
J- hold on hold on, tum log puri baath toh suno. Tarun ki shaadi paki hogai hai aur woh bhi humari aapni Bani ki saat! Hold on hold, let me finish. Taruns wedding has been fixed with none other than our own Bani.!
(Jiggs cant believe what she just heard; not possible; everyone else is too busy with Tarun to see Jiggs slip away)

(in her room)
Jig- no this cant be. Bani aur Tarun bhaia. No just no. Lekin…kya Rano isi liye mujhe phone kia tha. O god bani what have u done. No way! Bani and Tarun bhaia...No...but Rano is that why she called. WHat have u done Bani.
(Jiggs calls Bani and tells her that she need to see Bani right away and to bring Rano with her; Jiggs then calls Anu and says its an emergency to get to her house ASAP; Anu gets there first and Jiggs tells Anu what happned)
A- Jiggs what r u saying, Bani ne haan kardi shaadi ke liye. Lekin why, she wantes a love marriage. Jiggs what r u saying, Bani agreed to the proposal. but she wants a love marriage...
Jig- Yeh hi toh…we have to see why she did this… thats the thing....we need to get to the bottom of this...
(Just then Bani and Rano enter)
B- Aare Anu tum bhi. Whats wrong u guys look upset. Rano bhi, she is too quite for herself. Anu u are here too...
R- Didi aapne shaadi ke liye haan kyun kiah Didi why did u say yes for the wedding.?
B- Rano…
Jig- Yes Bani why, we all know u and u do not love Tarun so why did u say yes.
A- Bani u wil not be happy in a love less marriage.
B- thank u guys for looking out for me, I love u for that but its my life. Tarun is a great guy. Toh kya hua if I don't love him, pyaar hojayega.So what if i dont love him, ill learn ot love him. I know he will keep me happy and now I don't have to worry about Rano or cahci at all. We can finally live in peace.
Jig- Is this what u want Bani, if it is then we are all here for u?
B- Yes
A- ok Bani, hum saab tumhare saath hai. Ok Bani we are here for u all the way.
(they all hug; Bani- what will happen in my life now-)

…Chapter 4…the engagement party…will bani be able to go through with it…will jais feeling stir for the woman his best friend claimed….stay tuned…and please I love to see comments….

Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
haila! fantastic!

gr8 to see jigs nice!

wow!

plz do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooooooooo wow i jus read ur part amazin fanfic!! yeh kya no jai n bani but plzz contiue soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haye ppl... 😆 ...dont have any fear...JANI is very near...just a few more cahpters and u will see how jai and bani get together...u will love him more once u see what he does for her... 😉 ...and yeah jiggs is nice...no stupid villans in my ff...no stupid pea brain pia or ranveer...just all well wishers...hope u guys r enjoying...ill post ch 4 soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! awesome fanfic! make bani run away.. wit jai!! lol... cont. sooon!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila.. omgggggggg.. she's gettin engaged to tarun.. oh god plz cont soon.. the whole jai fallin fo bani - d grl his BEST friend chose.. omgggg that was gr8888.. plz cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz

haye ppl... 😆 ...dont have any fear...JANI is very near...just a few more cahpters and u will see how jai and bani get together...u will love him more once u see what he does for her... 😉 ...and yeah jiggs is nice...no stupid villans in my ff...no stupid pea brain pia or ranveer...just all well wishers...hope u guys r enjoying...ill post ch 4 soon...

awwwwwwwww now i can't wait.. wat's he gonna do fo her???? omg omg omg can't wait.. plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was wonderful
i hope they make good plan to stop bani from marrying where she can live in peace without worrying about rano or her chachi
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
Chapter 4

-Everyone is at the Walia House for Taruna dn Banis engagement. Rano, Anu, nad Jiggs are helping get Bani ready. Jai and Adi are helping Tarun…hes too nervous…Massi and Dadi are trying to keep cachi occupied and away from Bani.-

(In Jais Room w Tarun and Adi)
T- Did u guys see, Banis cachi…OMG she has such a low opinion of Bani.
A- u r right. Bani itni achi ladki hai aur uski cachi kya samjte hai. Bani is so good but her aunty really thinks low of her.
J- are adi, watch your toung verna Tarun kya karde paata nahin. Tum uski mangeter ki kuch ziada compliments deh rahi ho. Watch what u say Adi. U are giving too many compliments to Taruns fiancee.
A- oh ho…yeh baath hai…acah sorry. o...so its like that...ok fine im sorry.
(Sahil entens)
S- OMG…maine sunna ke ladkiyaan ready hone mein time lagate hai lekin yahaan toh humara Tarun sahib is taking too much time. OMG...i heard that the girls take tieir time in getting ready but here i see that Tarun bhaia is taking too much time.
J- Sahil, baas bhi karo. Come on stop it sahil.
S- aacha bhaia sorry, Adi bhaia u should get ready too. Ok sorry bhaia, Adi bhaia u should get ready too.
A- Why bete Sahil (sarcastic) Why dear sahil?
S- well because u r next to get hitched. Akhir aapne toh ladki bhi pasand kar liya. Cuz u r next to get hitched, after all u have already picked out a girl.
J- Adi whats this, tumne ladki pasand kar liya. What?! Adi u picked a girl already?
(Adi is now too nervous knowing that Sahil is talking aobut jigs)
A- Nahin jai, of course not. You know Sahil *gives sahil ad deadly look..)
S- Aacha chodo aab let go. Ok forget it...lets go.

(In Jiggs room)
R- Didi u look beautiful.
A- haye humari is pari ko kisi ki naazar na lage. OMG...nope no one puts an evil eye on our beautiful fairy.
B- Chup! Tum log bhi na (she is embarrassed) Shut up...u guys are too much.
Jig- Already sharmana, come on Bani aaj toh sirf engagement hai, tumhari suahaj raat nahin. U are already blushing. It only your engagement not your wedding night.
(Bani blushes while all the girls laugh; Massi comes in)
M- Chalo ladkiyoon tum log itni hansh kuyn rahi ho. COme on girls...why r u laughind so much...
A- Massi hum bani se uski su… Massi we were talking to Bani about her wedding n....
B- ANU!!
Jig- Nahin massi kuch nahin. Aap chaliye hum saab ready hai. No Massi its nothing, u go ahead we are all ready.

(In the Walia living room all eyes turn towards to grand stair case and everyone is mesmerized by Bani; Bani is dressed in a beautiful lavender gaarga choli, not too much make up and very simple jewelary but her hands are adorned with bangles and her feet with payals…all making a beautiful cham cham sound. They reach Tarun)
Jig- Kuyn Tarun Bhaia aapko humari Bani kaise lagi. SO Tarun bhaia how do u like our Bani. & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; (Bani looks at the floor and blushes, Tarun also a lil embarrassed to talk)
Adi- Saach Bani u look beautiful Bani u look really beautiful.
S- Adi bhaia humari behen Jigyasa ka bhi tareef kariyeh na, she will feel bad. Adi bhaia give my sister jigyasa sum compliments too or she will feel bad. (sahil winks at adi)
A- haan…woh…jigyasa… yeah,...jigyasa...ummm...
J- All u girls look beautiful, but Bani especially akhir uski special day hai. U all look nice but bani especially since its her special day.
D- Chalo hum engagement ka raasam shuru karde. COme on we should get started with the engagement.
R- haan massi lets start. yes massi
(Tarun and Bani stand across from eachother. Anu, Rano, and Jigyasa are on Banis side while Sahil, Massi, Dadi, jai and Adi are with Tarun)
D- aare Jigyasa tum Bani ki side kyun? hey jigyasa why r u on Banis side?
Jig- come on dadi, Bani mere behen jaise hai…aaj se Tarun Bhaia humare jiju hue. Come on dadi, bani is like my sister so from today Tarun Bhaia is my jiju (Bro-in-law)
J- Acha toh aaj se Bani humare Bhabi hue. ok then from today Bani is our bhabi.
(all laugh)
(they exchange the rings- Bani get a beautiful 2 carat yellow diamond ring in white gold and Tarun gets a simple gold band with srtistic handy work)
A- Cachi aaj se Bani hui officially humari. Humari gaar ki lakshim hai. Aunty Bani is officially ours, she is the goddess of our house.
C- Thank god ek se toh chutkara mile, aab ek hi baki hai. Thank god, i got rid of one and now just have one left.
(Bani and Rano look disappointed and almost cry)
J- Tik hai cachi, aap hi ka loss hai, Bani to lakoon mein ek hai. Fine aunty but its your loss cuz bani is one in a million.
(Bani gives Jai a look of thanks for saving her)
(All night bani and traun steal glances of eachother, Everyoen is having a good time at the party. Even Bani is happy with her decision, but no one is happier than Cachi)

…Chapter 5…it will be a little boring but bare with me. Once we get to chapter 6 youwill all see the JANI thing…hope u guys liked it…
Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part... but im DYING FOR SUM JB! in times lyk these, its these JB fanfics dat keep us hooked and alive. plz put in sum JANI action soon!!! 😉

however, it was awesome and update sooon!!!!

Edited by angad4life - 18 years ago

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