Four years later... FF last prt pg 31 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guyz i no u r dieing to read the next part. i am sry i can't post it soon since i have so many tests and assignments due this week. but i will update soon. i am extremely sry. even i want to keep writing this ff, but i have to go to skool.

But here is a preview for next part

Bani comes to meet everyone mainly cuz maasi insists.
Maasi: Bani beta, i want u to promise me something...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I like your story, please continue! Best of luck for your test and assigments! You can do it..I'll wait yaar!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guyz i just read what is happening in ks right now and i am soooooooooooo pissed. 😡 😡 😡. the reunion which we have been waiting for months has finally come, but it has to be on the day jai and pia sleep with eachother. i feel soooooooooo sry for bani. her heart will be broken again when she finds out the truth. 😭 SO, i decided that i will post this one part for u guyz. atleast this might help us forget our pain about what is happening.

Part 5

(ignore spelling mistakes btw)

Two days laters, Bani along with Ria arrived at the airport. She was a little upset because Sameer had an urgent meeting (he has his own business) and Ria couldn't come because she had family reasons. So Bani was travelling alone with Mr.Walia. She was so nervous. She dragged her suitcase inside. She and Ria talked for a few minutes and then Bani set of, to go to the customs. As she boarded the flight, her eyes wandered for Mr.Walia. She sat down in her seat, when Jai appeared.

J said sitting down beside Bani: Hi Bani, how r u?

B: I am fine Mr.walia. None of the two didn't know how to start a conversation. They simply just sat in Silence and eventually Bani fell asleep and unkonwingly, she leaned her head on Jai's shoulder. Jai didn't mind one bit and started reading a magazine.

Bani woke up when she heard someone calling her name softly

J: Bani… Bani sat up and looked into Jai's face.

J: Bani we are landing… (lets just say that there is a direct flight from America to Mumbai and bani slep the whole way) Bani turned away from Jai and looked out the tiny window on her side. She straightened her hair and tried to tidy herself a little. The plane landed and Jai and Bani walked out of the aiport, after going through customs. As both of them came out, there was car waiting.

J: Bani, come…

B: But Mr.Walia…

J: Maasi called u home bani. Atleast for her sake come. U can visit her and then go to ur hotel.

B hesitated, but agreed to go. As the car drove through the familiar streets of Mumbai, bani's felt a warm pleasure. As the gates of the Walia Mansion opened, Bani looked at the great big house… Bani got down the car and looked around. Nothing has changed she thought. Nothing.
Tony opened the door and welcomed both of them.

T: Good evening madam.

B: Good evening Tony. How were u?

T: I am fine, thank you.

She then walked into the living room with Jai behind her. All the family memebrs were seated and were ingrossed in talking. Maasi was the first one to see Bani walk in.

M: Bani Beta, everyone turned towards Bani and Rano and Pia (yep she is still here) ran straight towards bani and hugged her.

R: Di, where did u go leaving us alone?

B: It's a long story Rano and she locked eyes with Jai for a moment. She then walked to the rest of the family. She took ashirwad from Maasi and sat down with the rest of the family. Soon bani was talking to everyone like old times. She lost track of time. And she forcefully had to stop her conversation with everyone as she had to leave for her hotel.

M: Bani Beta, I want u to promise me something…

B: What Maasi?

M: First promise me

Bani hesitated a lot but then said okay

M: I want you to stay here with all of us, untill u go back. Bani was like no way.

B: But Maasi…

M: I don't want to hear anything Bani. U promised me and u have to saty here. Okay?

Bani, really didn't have a choice so she had to call the hotel and had to cancel her booking. After dinner, bani's luggage was put in one of the guest rooms as she has no intentions to share a room with Mr.Walia. After she took a hot shower and came out in her night dress, she started working on her laptop.

J: U know it is past midnight. Bani looked up to find Jai smiling and walking towards the bed where she was sitting.

B: I am not sleepy and it is none of ur business Mr.Walia.

J: Well u see bani, we have to leave early tomorrow as there is a conference. And if u don't sleep now u won't get up early and we will be late.

B: don't wry Mr.Walia, I was never late and will never be late. Now plzz leave.

J: Why should I leave bani? This is my house and u r the one who agreed to stay here

B: only because of maasi.

J: Still bani… He started to come towards to her face… bani felt her heart racing again. She closed her eyes and tried to clam her self. Now, she can feel jai's breath.

J quietly almost wispering: u no bani, I no u still love me. Bani opened her eyes at once to find jai staring at her. He then kissed her gently on the cheek and said Good Night.

Well guyz, it was kind of boring, i no. i had to rush through the flight scenes as i wanted to get bani back to the walia mansion again. From now on, it will be Jai and bani's scenes. how jai wins bani back. and don't wry about pia 😡, she will get what she deserves.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
hey i just luved it and i really want to thank you for PM me other wise mujh das saal lag jaati tumharer story dhoonti dhoonti yaar cus it so confusing keep it going dont stop i just luved that kiss on the cheek and good night scence cant wait for sum more romance for jai and bani
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!! hunnii such an awesome part!! kill off pia.. for my sake!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great.small and sweet.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
she slept the whole plane ride on his shoulder
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
awesome part
pls cont soon
take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
please continue will be waiting for it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8!!! cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx guyz for the comments. u don't no how that encourages the writer. anyway, finally it is the long weekend (thanksgiving in Canada)so i have time to post a new prt. and whats more exciting is that my birthday is in one more week. Oct.14. i am soooooooo happy. can't wait. anyway, here is the part.

Part 6

The next morning bani woke up early and and got ready for the meeting. She chose to wear a light pink sari (impressing who bani?) with little design work. It looked simple but elegant on bani. Even though she stayed in America for four years, she still loves to wear her Indian outfits. She was forced to wear business outfits, but now she was sick of them. She didn't put any make-up just lip gloss and made her way down stairs only to be met by jai at the top of the stairs.

J: good morning bani. U r pretty early seeing that u were up late.

B: I told u mr.walia, I was never late for anything and never will be.

Jai just smiled and both of them walked down stairs for breakfast. Soon, they had to leave for the meeting. The meeting went pretty well thought bani, only if he didn't stare at her instead of the projector screen. As she walked out of the conference room, she was greeted by all her old collegues. They were happy to see her and others were curious as to why she disappeared all of a sudden and now turned up again as the company's partner. All kinds of curious questions were asked but luckily bani's cell rang and it was from Sameer.

B: Hello

S: hi bani. How is India?

B: same as before. Nothing changed over here. it is exactly like how it was four years ago…I feel glad to be back (and we might just no the reason).

S: so it seems as if u r enjoying it. But anyway, where r u staying. I called the hotel last night and they said u cancelled ur booking and I tried ur cell but it was off.

B: well, actually I am staying with my family here.

S: family? Bani never told anyone of her past. Not even ria.

B: it's a long story sameer. I don't know where to start. Bani was thinking if she should tell about jai.

S: I still want to no.

B: well, I am living with my two younger sisters. Bani just didn't want to say anything to sameer. Its just a few months here and then she will be back, to where she built her home in these past four years.

S: really? I never knew u had sisters. Infact I don't know anything about ur past.

B: and my past is not that interesting or important right now.

S: okay, so when r u going to Mt.Abu?

B: well it is decided that we are leaving in a week.

J quietly: in two weeks bani. Bani turned around at once to be an inch away from jai. He was waiting paitently for her to finish her call.

S: bani?

B taking a step back: Haan Sameer,

S: I won't be able to come to India. I have to go to London since I am opening a hotel there. I am so sry ….

B: it's okay. And I will talk to u later. I have to go. Bye and she hung up.

J: bani I am sry if u ended the call cuz of me.

B: no, mr.walia. its not cuz of u.

J: so…….. lets go.

B: Where?

J: to eat. Its past 1. and just then bani realized how hungry she was. They both went to a fancy hotel (sry guyz, have no clue about india's restaurants as I am in Canada) and ate in silence. When they were going back, when bani realized that they were not heading towards home or office. They were going somewhere else.

B: Mr.Walia, where are we going?

J: Somewhere…

B: Where?

J: u will see

B: but I want to no.

J: bani, curiosity kills the cat. And have patience u will find out.

B: but…

J: patience bani…

i would love to hear ur comments and i was wondering if u guyz would like it if i skipped a few months so that the Mt.Abu project is in teh final stages. i would like to hear ur opinions. and sry for any mistakes.

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