ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5 - Page 14

Originally posted by: nikhat_niki

hi debolina
i just read all 11 parts of ur story n its amazing bohot jaldi twist aur turn aate hai great
hope bani speaks up if jai is not able to afterall woh dono dost hai par bani can
pls cont soon
n all the best for ur test

thanx a lot.i will continue soon.well though Bani is not naive but i dony think she will speak up.so just wait n watch.............i think d twist i will put is quite yackey n hindi movie time neways................keep readin
debolina

Originally posted by: jnawaz

OMG...update...yay debo... 👏 👏 👏
omg...someone tell tarun already...
who is this person from the back...hope they r there to unite JB and not TB...
and yeh pia bhi naa...shopping...is mney all she thinks aobut...
ohhh...cant wait for update..again... so gald u r back...bte...exams kaisa raha...
and thanks for liking my ff too..
JAZ

thanx 4 keepin patience.well wait n watch who is person is he is defintely here 2 break tarun n Bani's marriage but dont kno how much he will help Jai n Bani 2 unite.n i will try n potray in d most disgustin manner i can.kya kare maan ke baras nilkani hai.by exams were suckin.n wat r u sayin i dont like urr ff i love them.i will update soon.keep readin.
debolina

Originally posted by: Auditi

YEA!!!!!!!!!! i agree with u whoevaaa u r shouting form the back....... 👏

plzzzzz plzzzz plzzzz buddy cont soon..... 😃

u updated afta such a long time.......

thanx well tat person whos is shoutin frm behind is neither Jai nor Bani nor anybody present in d scene.this person is a complete looser.so keep guessin who d person is.i warn u a rather filmy part is comin up.
debolina

Originally posted by: skn700

🤗 WELCOME BACK hunny🤗 Awesome part. 👏 👏 👏 par yaar stop this alliance. Someone please tell tarun and uncle the truth about our lovely inlove couple Jani. Plz cont soon. And hope ell ur exames went well.

i had my exams so cudnt update.i hope u liked this part.but personally i didnt like it.
debolina

Originally posted by: msrk

welcome back dear!

Now please post some longer parts to your lovely ff

i will definately try n put in longer parts.
debolina

reqad it at ur own risk this is quite filmy i am warnin u.

PART 12

Par mujhe manjoor nahi hai...........

Every body turned around.

It was none other then rahul(i kno i will get a lot of jhoote chappals..........yehi soch rahe hoo ki yeh duffer kaha se aa gaya.well dekte jao...imean parte jao 😆 😆 😉 )

R:Bani tum yeh shaadi kaise kar sakti hoon.

with this he strided forward.he came near Bani and grabbed her forarm n started shakin her(wat a lousy creature)

before ne body cud do ne thin rahul was blown off by a punch.

J:tumari himmat kaise hui Bani ko chune ki.How dare u.

wut this he started punchin him.rahul somhow manajed to get freed frm his clasps n ran n came in front of Bani.

R:Bani tumhe to pata hain na tat i love u.i kno u even lov.com on lets go.i wont let u marry this person whom u dont love com with Bani.i kno u love me.com on Bani.

with this he started draggin her.

Jai had had enough.he was touchin Bani.he was draggin her.blood boiled inside him.he moved towards tat wannabe(rahul)pulled him by his collar.separted his hands frm Bani's wrist.made Bani stand behind him.took him by his collar.thrashed punched him left right n centre (Jai ja mukka gals think abt u)with full force lifted him in air.and threw him .he crashed on near d mantle piece.

even though he stood up.he was comin towards Bani again.(wat a looser)this time before Jai cud do nething Bani came in front n gav him a thrash right on his face.

all this time she was quite tryin 2 swallow wat was actually happenin.

B:rahul mai kabi soch bhi nahin sakti thi ki mera dost mera saat aise kar sakta hai.mai tumse pyar nahi karti hoon.

magar tum ek baath saach hai.

all eyes were turned with shock

before ne body cud say nethin even before Bani Jai came n placed a hand around her shoulder.

J:Bani tik keh rahi hai.rahul ne ek baath sach ki hai.kabhi usse shaadi nahi karni chahiye jisse tum pyaar na karte ho.main tik keh raha hoon na Bani.

Bani noded in positive.
all eyes were on them.rahul was 2 wounded 2 even shift his limb.uncle was lookin bewildered.

J:mamaji mai pehele ekbaar ek galati karne ja raha tha uska natija aaj bhi hum sab bhugat rahe hai.mai nitu se pyar nahi karta tha.mere lakh koshisho ke bawajut bhi woh shaadi mai nahi rok pa raha tha.nitu had 2 pay 4 her life because of tat.i dont want to repeat tat mistake again.
I LOVE BANI

B:n I TO LOVE Mr WALIA

every body had som kind of expression.but it was difficult 2 say wat.there expression was not readable.it was certain they were shocked but they were happy or sad cudtbe judged.

uncle had a million dolaar expression on his face.

tarun was just standin there transfixed.he was as if frantically lookin 4 his voice.the he found his voice.......


are niche kya dekh rahe hoon.next update ka wait karo.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

debolina

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hope u guys liked it.comment.do post.it inspires me.

ha ha 😆 i hope u like it i kno its short.par i had less time.next time u will surely get a longer 1 .
debolina

Oye

Maine socha ke itna lamba part update kiya

aur yeh to itna choota tha

lekin ikrarr to hua kam se kam

are debolina
yeh kya meine soccha aaj bohot bada part mile ga
aur thodi der ke liye muje laga mera laptop bigad gaya hai sab blank kyun aaraha hai
chalo koi baath nahi atleast indono ne kabul toh kiya sab ke saamne
cont soon a long part

Uuuuu???? that was very funny huh??? 😛 😉

neway really glad they told every1 the truth.... YIPPEE!!!!! 👏 PARTY!!!!!

4 a while i thought that DUM DUM JW wont say nething & will go with the flow.... but thankzzz gawd he opened his damn mouth..... 👏

but y do i think they all pretended abt Tarun & Bani's marriage so that JW & Bani confess their love 4 each otha..... 😕 🤢

neway ITS REALLY GOOD!!!! 👏

plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz cont soon.... 😃