ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5 - Page 13

Originally posted by: ziddi

Good Luck for your exam Debolina
ALl the best

thanx mamta i really need it.
debolina

well guys i am back.
i kno u npeople must hav forgotten this ff.its not ur fault .i havent been able 2 arouse ur interest n above all i cudnt update 4 along time.navs ziddi tithi di nilaxi n all d other plz forgive me.i ahd my exams.i was online.read well almost all d updates.but didnt find time 2 update.my exams will get over on d 29th.but i will try n update soon maybe now itself...i hav a really shittin physics paper wish me luck tht i get thru.
well comment how u liked my ff is far.
debolina

don't worry debo i haven't forgot ur ff 😃
wish u all the best for ur exam 😊 n wish me to good luck coz mine r going to start next thursday 😕 🤢

Part 11



Jai n Bani came out of his home.Both with a creepin smile a smile of relief happiniess a smile of love.
Both were now in d hall.They saw tarun talikn over d phone..tarun also seemed happy.Jai was always a no nonsense man.he went forward 2 tarun n told they needed 2 speak.before he was able to speak tarun jumped in n said
T: Jai u were rite.u alwaz were rite.1 must go forward with life.i think Bani is d most beautiful n lovin companion 1 can get.

Jai was numb.he cudnt speak.his was betrayed him.he looked at Bani.she had tears threatin 2 fall.no he had to do this 4 Bani.but how cud he.tarun his best frnd aws happy.but he had to do this 4 Bani.

J:Tarun we need 2 speak.

Jigs: are Jai bhaiya kya aap bhi in dono ke beeche main khae hai(this stuck him hard he was standin in between)
aap chaliye mere saath in dono ko akela chor dijiye.aab to tarun ki shaadi ho jayegi.mujhe lagta hai aap ko bhi shaadi karleni chayi.

Jai in a ver controlled voice eyein towards Bani:haan di aap tik kehiti hoon mujhe jald se jald shaadi karleni chaiye.

Jigs: are waah.yeh 2 kamal ho gaye.tarun tuamra to jawab nehi.tum ne kya shaadi keh liye haan kardi Jai bhaiya bhi man gaye.i m sure Bani neh inko manaya hoga.

J:aisahi sumjho.

T:are Jai tu kya kehne aaya tha.

Pia out of nowhere (as always)

P:di aap yahan kya karrahi hai.di maine suna aap shaadi karrahi hai.amazin chale shopin par.

T:haan haan sali ji.main aapko shoppin par le chalta hoon.

Jai n Banis were glued at eachother.Bani with plwadin eyes askin Jai to tell him everythin n Jai tryin to say i am tryin


B:tarun mujhe tumse baat karni hai.

U:are tarun tum yahan kya kar rahe ho mujhe tumse baat karni thi.main bata nehi sakta u made me so ahppy 2day.i ha repented for my past mistake.

T:uncle aap aise mat kahiye.woh aapka dosh nehi tha.main saach main khush hu main Bani ko bahut khush rakunga.aye shaadi mujhe dil se manjor hai.

sombody shouted frm d back.

Par mujhe manjoor nahi hai.

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debolina

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how do u like it.reply.

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

don't worry debo i haven't forgot ur ff 😃
wish u all the best for ur exam 😊 n wish me to good luck coz mine r going to start next thursday 😕 🤢

well i owe u tht 1 nancy.i hav posted a part.i dint like it myself.so wont hav ne expectios frm ne 1 either.
good luck 4 ur paper.all d best.
n keep readin n postin whether u like it or not.

debolina

hi debolina
i just read all 11 parts of ur story n its amazing bohot jaldi twist aur turn aate hai great
hope bani speaks up if jai is not able to afterall woh dono dost hai par bani can
pls cont soon
n all the best for ur test

OMG...update...yay debo... 👏 👏 👏
omg...someone tell tarun already...
who is this person from the back...hope they r there to unite JB and not TB...
and yeh pia bhi naa...shopping...is mney all she thinks aobut...
ohhh...cant wait for update..again... so gald u r back...bte...exams kaisa raha...
and thanks for liking my ff too..
JAZ

YEA!!!!!!!!!! i agree with u whoevaaa u r shouting form the back....... 👏

plzzzzz plzzzz plzzzz buddy cont soon..... 😃

u updated afta such a long time.......

🤗 WELCOME BACK hunny🤗 Awesome part. 👏 👏 👏 par yaar stop this alliance. Someone please tell tarun and uncle the truth about our lovely inlove couple Jani. Plz cont soon. And hope ell ur exames went well.

welcome back dear!

Now please post some longer parts to your lovely ff