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Posted: 18 years ago

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OOOOOMMMMGGGGG.....man raania...u were not late at all...i was the one who was late this time 😭 😆 ....but hey.......Rajvir....took her to the same farm house 😕 😆 ...i was like 😲 he's got some guts...but hey jaanvi seemed alright about it....OOOOMMMMGGGG...before i forget he called her jaanu...yaar raania i was blusing like there was no tommorow 😳 yaar jai...bless him...he collided with the coffee table... i think he is losing it ....it was awesome yaar....plz plz cont sooon...ur da best...and yes ur rite i luuuuuuuvvvv this ff...my fav 😆 keep it up 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

#152

Hey friends...those of you who enjoyed this fanfic...thank you so very much...i love you all 😳 adn those of you who didnt wel too bad the ones who do outnumbered you so ur problem... 😉

This is my last part to this fanfic...hopefully u enjoy it and no dont worry it doesnt end me writing i will continue to do so as i go forward but i guess i have reached the point in this one where i want to end it...once again u know me...i hate dragging the story too much

hope u guys enjoy this too....

Last Part 😭
Jai looked up to find …oh My god….Simran…getting up almost colliding wit the coffee table…..

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Masi: areh beta samhal ke…..

she looked so different…in Indian clothes very traditional and what …she wasn't clumsy or carless just nerves…looking down at the floor….

Jai: Simran……???? A slight smile playing on his lips…..

Simran looked up to the man whom she despised….hated…loved…made a fool of herself…..everything…his eyes looking into her soul

Jaanvi: aaahem lagta hai ladke aur ladki ko rhista pasand hai…toh rings kaha hai

RAj and Simran exchanged rings and Masi taking out the family necklace put it around Simran

Masi: a tad bit sad…yeh hamari munna ki bahu ki thi….JAishiv ki Maa…Bani ki…woh hoti toh khud karti……aaj meh bhouth hi khush hu!!

Sitting down while everyone ate sweets…and talking …....Jaanvi teasing Simran….

MR B: inse miliye yeh Simran ke nana ji hai…meri pheli wife ki pitah….Simran lost her mum when she was born and has always considered herself alone in this world other than her nana….she is always over in Delhi visiting him…

Jai was like…oh my God she was right to me all this time…..cursing himself for not having enough faith in her……

Mr B continued.: meh toh business meh tha aur yeh jaab moka mile apne nana ke saath…mujse kafi naraaz thi isiliye ek doosre company meh kaam karti thi…..magar kafi arse ke baadh mujhe mer bachi mili hai…jai beta apne jigar ka tukra tumhe de raha hu…kheyal rhakna….

Jai feeling really bad …looking at Simran…who had a smirk on her face….: told ya she whispered to him…..making Jai more embrassed for being wrong….

As everyone had dinner and were about to leave…Jai asked Simran to walk out with him……

Jai: tumne mujhe kaha kiu nahi….lookin at her…as Jaanvi made everyone go to the car to give them privacy

Sim looking up at this tall man who was her soon to be husband……: u didn't give me a chance to do so …remember…making Jai wince at the thought

Jai: smilng….putting his hands in the pockets…it was a bit chilly…yup I deserve that…

Sim: yup 101%....smiling now..

Jai: toh meh chalu……

Sim: I guess ……….Masi long aapka intezar kar rahe hai

Jai; woh rubbing his chin with one hand

Sim: woh kya??? Knowing very well what he meant….

Jai: toh gdnight than

Sim: smiling gdnight

Jai thinking no luck here…turned about to leave when Simran called his name softly

Simran…: ummm Jai….jai turned..kissing his cheeks quickly…looking at him….: gdnight….runnign back in the house…waving to him….

Jai his hands on his cheeks smiled and made way to the car

Jaanvi: aahemmm masi koi bhouth khush lagaraha hai….pheli pheli baar jab pyar kisi se hota hai..jaanvi started to sing..teasing her brother….

Jai: jaanvi ki bachi …chup as they drove off…..

6 months later??

It was Aakash and Aanya's engagement…and Anaya was really nervous….

Simran Walia came in: kya yaar tum itni dar kiu rahi ho

Aanya: dheko na aakash ne call kiya aur kheta hai milna hai…meh is waqt kaise jau??

Jaanvi Khanna stood at the window: it's a prank by Jai bhaia RAj Ana don't worry about it…un logo ko hum dhek len ge…

Sim and Jaanvi smiling at each other….

As the girls brought Aanya down the stairs….Simran and Jaanvi on each side….smiling….Simran married for 5 months now and Jaanvi 4…both glowing in their tikka..sindoor and mangalsutra….very much a newly married woman…and now their best friend was getting married soon too…

Aakash: 6 months..can u believe it …it took me six months to patao dad and get this happen nahi toh dad mujhe London bhejne wale the

Raj patting on his back: aareh bhai shadi she phele kuch kaam waam karn zaruri hota hai nah….education alone is not enough

Jai: exactly…akhir tera number ageya toh na….Jai slapping lightly on the other shoulder…

Aakash: ha ha haslo sale log….tum dono ke karan meri line autki thi….par now chat magni pat bia…

Mr K: Aakashhhhhhhhh

Aakash: sorry pops….as everyone laughed and watch Aanya coming down

Jai not taking his eyes of his wife of 5 months and Raj not taking his eyes of Jaanvi his wife of 4 months…..

The rings were exchanged by a very eager Aakash and very nervous Aanya….cake was cut and the 3 couples were on the dance floor

Raj: bhouth hi khoobsurat lagrahi ho
Jaan: thank you smiling yet not looking at him
Raj: kya tum meri baho meh hamesha aise sharmao gi??
Jaan: maybe
RAj: whispering pulling her very close….acha hai nah…makes me think as if we got married just today
Jaan: Raj…stressing it…
Raj; hiiiiiiiii ..sighing..jaab tum mera naam aise leti ho toh mere system meh ek ek current dor ti hi
JAan: tum nahi sudhro ge..
RAj: kabhi nahi…kissing her ears lightly
Jaan; Raj sabhi dhek rahe hai
Raj: sabhi apne apne dhoon meh hai…..so shhhhhhhsshhhhhhh…so…
Jaan: leaning her head on his shoulders…hmmmm???
Raj: I love you Mrs Rajvir Khanna…
Jaan: tiptoeing to his ears and kissing the ear lobe loosly…I love you too Mr Rajvir Khaana….from the bottom of my heart…from dep down my soul….kissnig him on the cheeks….
Raj couldn't believe this happening….it had to happen now…infront of al this people….guess its love…. ..love has no boundaries…limitations…..expectations…it just happens…

Raj: pulling Jaanvi away from him just a little bit…toh hum chale
Jaan smiling: hmm magar abhi nahi….baadth meh I promise…..winking at Raj…..

Raj almost collapsed…did his wife just do that…..holding her close to him again…..eagerly waiting to be alone with her in their confined space….

Sim: so I think red suits u Mr Walia….aahem Jashiv Walia…
Jai: why thank you Mrs Walia
Sim: ur welcome…putting her hands around his neck….so kaisa lagta hai is clumsy si careless ladki se shadi karke
Jai; smiled his wicked smile……he knew she was reciting what he once called her…..: nearing her ears…bohouth hi acha….
Sim: really ….
Jai: pulling her close….aaaha….
Sim: ek baath kahu….kya tum mujhe kabhi bhi phele pasand karte the??? U know before our wedding
Jai: why that question….
Sim: bus eager to know…smiling up to him
Jai: actually meh propose karne wala tha marriage….to be honest
Sim: laughed really sexy making Jai horny all over…whats so funny….seductivly he said
Sim: u and marry me…yeah right…u couldn't even stand the sight of me pati ji???
Jai: raj se poochlo ….he knew that …he just didn't know the girl…
Sim: hmmm yeah right..
Jai: well its true…but I was wrong though
Sim creasing her eyebrows: kiu???
Jai: because at that time I wanted to marry u because I thought u would be perfect for this family and the right girl to marry…
Sim: disappointed…and that's wrong….looking at him with confusion
Jai: yes because now I know the true reason to marry someone is love…and after marrying you Mrs Walia…I have learned the true meaning of the word love

Simran's eyes clouded with tears as she looked upto him…..smiling half crying

Jai: I know that I have never said it before but I had never felt the right time to…but I love you Simran…thank you for showing me the true meaning of love….

Simran in Jai's arm danced away

Aakash: finally yaar mera number
Aanya: oi stop couting and hold me…dance nahi karna kay
Aakash: oh yeah baby…thumare liye toh yeh counting ho raha hai

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath
Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein
Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin
Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Somewhere a couple up in the clouds looked down smiling and holding each other……feeling happy that their children did not make the same mistakes they had made…and that life for them will be much more happier! Jai hugged Bani close to his heart…he had kept his promise to be with her till eternity and there they were giving blessings to their two beautiful children and their coming families.

🤗 thank you all so much 😳

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rabia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#153

WOW!!!...mindblowing....to bad it had to end soon....i can't wait for ur next ff....

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andrea_19

@andrea_19

Explorer

Posted: 18 years ago

#154

you made me cry!!! this is the most amazing ff ive ever read!!! you are such a mindblowing writer....pls start another ff soon!!

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 18 years ago

#155

i am so depressed last posts on 2 of your FF on the same day...

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Raania

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Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#156

ohhhh Rivya dont worry honey...im soon to post a brand new one

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#157

OOOOOOMMMGGG...u finished this one too 😭 ...i know u don't want drag it....but its gonna take some time to get over it 😆 plz bear with me....u see...raania ji....rajvir..was the one who made me blush sooo much 😳 its funny though...cos he is not in the real thing..but the way u rite..made him sooo imaginable 😉 but...hey...congrats for another awesome ff....we will be waiting for more...keep it up 👏

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