Inteqam- ff lpart 14 onpg 23 last on pg25 - Page 18

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Posted: 18 years ago
haha the last line...when i typed it i was laffing!!
hehe it REEKED my style aur JUST DO IT?? 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

haha the last line...when i typed it i was laffing!!
hehe it REEKED my style aur JUST DO IT?? 😆 😆 😆

hahahah!!!

i guess both, but nothing can beat JUST DO IT. lol. 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

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i was laughing too....but i didn't want to insult jai by admitting it 😳 😆 😆

hehe now you can admit it!!!!!! lmao i was in fits. 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

hehe now you can admit it!!!!!! lmao i was in fits. 😆


haha u guys r tooo funny!
waise...i did this for myself...meri amusement...i didnt kno ne one would like it..i was expecting virtual belans!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

haha u guys r tooo funny!
waise...i did this for myself...meri amusement...i didnt kno ne one would like it..i was expecting virtual belans!

Just because it's different??? come on you killed mostly everyone, jai's death was kinda expected. 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
hehe...sabse bada twsit...may be i should just do another update tonite! 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

hehe...sabse bada twsit...may be i should just do another update tonite! 😕

JUST DO IT!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
lmao 😆 😆
MAY BE I WILL! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

lmao 😆 😆
MAY BE I WILL! 😛

haha i love saying "just do it" lol😆

cool can't wait.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 15
Pia knew Jai would not be able to face himself and would kill himself. So she arranged for a funeral and got over with everything, rona dhona and all the necessary rituals to show she actually cared and was mourning. When she was free from the people who came in to pay respects and give condolences. "Uff, yeh log mujhse bhi bade dhongi hain…yeh high society bhi na…kitni flashy clothes at a funeral but meri Satya Paul ki sari…I love it…log jealous hote hain to compliments nahi deyte..hmmpf." Pia talks to herself as she looks for Pushkar who was present at the funeral as her EX. Finally when she find him in the kitchen, "Pushkar I cant believe you are stuffing your face with funeral biryani!" "Sorrghy…waght" Pushkar tried to speak with a stuffed face. "Pushkar finish this up and meet me in Late Mr.Vollaya's study jo ab meri hai..HAHHA" Pia ordered Pushkar who choked on his rice and looked at Pia thinking she would give him some water but Pia had already walked out. "Yeh Pia kab sudhregi…iska kuch karma padega!" Pushkar thinks to himself, he gets a drink finish his lunner (lunch aur breakfast = brunch so lunch aur dinner = lunner) and goes to see Pia. "Maam, you wanted to see me," Pushkar says with a smile on his face which did not last too long. "Pushkar as you know you can be a pain sometimes and a bit childish, today you eating that biryani was a perfect example. If I am going to be running such a big empire I am going to need ppl I can rely on ppl who are responsible and ppl who are not childish such as youself!" Pia finished off leaving pushkar gapping at her. "Who WHAT? I always help you plus I am only doing this cuz I love you not cuz I need to do it. If I call you maam its not cuz you are my boss or ne thing its cuz I am joking around and I kno how much you love being the authority…hehe bedroom mein bhi..chalta hai.." Pushkar tried to cheer up the enviornement. "Pushkar frankly I don't need you anymore. There I said it!" Pia said with a harsh tone leaving pushkar surprised and his jaw dropped. "Are you firing me? Cuz you sooo cant do that…I am your hu…" Pia cut off Pushkar, "wohi toh, I wanna give you a divorce and get you to leave me alone! I want to be on my own if I want to make a name for myself." "Pia tum JW ka paisa use karke aapna naam banaogi?" Pushkar asked angrily. "Haan kyun nahi, everyone has to start sometime somewhere…mein kyun nahi abhi Mr. Vollaya key paise sey…pushkar I am giving you a divorce" Pia finished off throwin the papers to Pushkar's face. "You are horrible….tum sirf mujhe paise ki wajah sey divorce kar rahi ho…tum khud enjoy karma chati ho…mujhe use karke chodh rahi ho na…mein bhi dekhta hoon!" Pushkar told pia in a warning sort of tone/ishtyle. "Pushkar, its tooo late to be a man, tumhe pehle sochna chaiye tha…itna lamba khel meine khela take poora paisa mera ho, usmein mein tumhe bhi share nahi desakti." Pia replied. "Kia matlab itna bada game khela? Kia keh rahi ho." Pushkar investigated, "tum mujhe bata.."Pushkar stopped midway seeing a gun pointed to him by Pia. "PpppPIA….yeeyeeee chal jaigi!" "I kno…yehi chati hoon mein,really." Pia answered "If I tell you about my game ill have to kill you." "Nahi mujhe nahi janna! Plz pia ill divorce you and go away!" Pushkar asked for forgiveness and tried to sign the divorce papers, "Plz mujhe jaane do mein tumhari life sey doooooooooor chala jaonga! PROMISE!" "Too late pushkar, ab mein tumhe bataongi bhi aur jaan sey bhi maar dalongi…you kno me, keh diya toh keh diya!" Pia gave an ultimatum, "agar tumhe nahi jaana toh koi baat nahi jaane baghir shoot kardeeti hoon!" "Nahin tum mujeh batao," Pushkar tired to buy sometime thinking she'll change her mind may be.
"Chalo toh the game was that, I made Mr.Vollaya fall in love with me, then I ran away with you getting Bani di married to him. Haha then I bought Tony off phir milke dono ney sab walia parivaar ko khatam kardiya takey koi property claim na karsake, phir Mr. Vollaya ko di ki khilaaf bhadkaya key she made me run away with you phir unhone Bani ko doosri duniya mein..haha phir unsey enagement karke everything transfer to my name via YOU…sweet ex-husband and ex-lawyer. MUHAHA then Mr. Vollaya ko KHALLAS! Ab tumhari baari hai Pushpushpushkar! You are not worth anything you were a mere pawn in this game of life, MY LIFE!" and there was a gunshot.
"Pia sirf tumhe gun nahi carry karsakti, remember it was me who bought you that, what makes you think I wouldn't have one for myself!" Pushkar laughed as he saw pia quivering on the floor. "Pushkar tum ne muj…" Pia tried to speak. "Haan pia meine tumhe shoot kia…ab tum kia karo gi…wait let me get this from you," Pushkar said as he walked upto pia to get the gun from pia's hand, as pushkar tried to get the gun from pia's hands, she shot him, "Pushkar yeh paisa mera nahi to kisi ka nahi." "Its ok Pia waise bhi if you or I die the money goes to the trust…haha I don't care about the money pia I loved you and you deceived a lover."
"haha pushpushpushPUSHkar mein….mein…" Pia tried to speak but she was interrupted by pushkar "Pia tum kuch na bolo, mein jaanta hoon tum mujhese sorry bolna chati hona!?" "nahi pushkar mein aakhri baar….." Pia tried again. "Pia I LOVE YOU…..sighhhhhhhh."Those were puhskar's ast words. "Pushkar you fool I wanted to tell you that I replaced the bullets to fake ones in you gun. Haha" Pia guffawed which was interrupted by none other than Barnali who was waiting outside the room since she didn't want to disclose herself infront of anyone. "Pia I cant eblevie you told poor pushkar it was all YOUR planning, agar mein nahi hoti toh tumhe guide kaun karta, for your information the dixit clan isn't that smart, you wouldn't have been able to pull this off on your own." "But I killed and br…" Pia tried to speak only to be broken off by Barnali, "Oh shut up pia, tum toh ek pyada thi…tumhe meine use kia jaise tumne sab ko use kiya…tumahre khayal mein mein tumhari friend thi nahi I have the right over this money cuz am related to this family aur tum log toh kisi stupid village ki larkian thi jinhe meine use kia apna revenge aur paisa lene ke liye…mera stupid pati sab kuch apne bachon key naam naa karta toh abhi tak sab zinda rehte! Pia ab tumhari baari hai." She shot pia with pia's gun.
The last words Barnali and the Walia heard from pia, "pi pi pia pia pia that was piaaaaaaaaaaaa". The court trasnfered all the money and property to Barnali's name who who was the second wife of Senior Walia and a victim of Walia's injustice.
Message of the story – Don't get mad, get even. And that no one rejoices more in revenge than woman.
Edited by wite_rainbow - 18 years ago

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