Woh tumhe to ho !! FF prt8 Pg.10 (upd) - Page 2

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ahhhh its coool 😃..... i already cant wait for part 4..... plzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz cont soon... infact on 2nd thought y is it so small...... 😉

its awesome.... too good..... 👏

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WOW, couldn't resist the temptation to write a comment!
Your ff is truly amazing, i am hooked!
Such a nice way to introduce your characters "freeze in and out" 👏 !
Like the storyline...hmmm...so this is how our Bnai meets Jai huh?? 😳 😃 !
ahhh please do continue soon!
You truly do write well, the plot is quite interesting.
Luv
Sweetu

Owww.... btw her mom sounds like my 1... 😛 my mom always does it... b4 going out she repeats one thing more than 1000 times... & then follows the list of do's & donts.... she still thinks I am a kid.... 😡

Originally posted by: sweetu144

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WOW, couldn't resist the temptation to write a comment!
Your ff is truly amazing, i am hooked!
Such a nice way to introduce your characters "freeze in and out" 👏 !
Like the storyline...hmmm...so this is how our Bnai meets Jai huh?? 😳 😃 !
ahhh please do continue soon!
You truly do write well, the plot is quite interesting.
Luv
Sweetu

its an honour to have you say that ... u urself are such a fantastic writer.... i know i am no writer buh i just had this idea in my head so i penned it down...

Thankz foe ur commentz !! 🤗

gr8 fanfic! i loved all three parts 👏 👏 👏
very cute
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

😆 😆 Bani was going to slam the door in jai's face 😆 😆 This girl is too much.

Please continue soon 👏

WOW!!!I just read ur ff, and I have to tell you that it is amazing!! I totally love it!!! Please continue soon, I love that way u use the freeze out and freeze in technique and the way Jai and Bani meet for the first time was too cute!!!

omgosh the end part was sooooooo funny
can't wait to read more
pls cont soon
take care
and awesome parts

hey i just read all three parts!awesome! 😊

Part 4

Bani: OH SHIT!!!!!

OMG... the whole tyme i thought ke mummy ke koi dost aa rahee hain... mein bhi bilkul buddhu hoon... now he probably thinks i am demented !!
ab mein kya karoon.... ??

B: aaAhh Jai...Of course !! eRr Jai... i knew it wuz u the whole tyme ... i wuz just joking...hahaha ( gives a fake laugh but can tell he iznt buying it )
J: Oh yea !! ( playing along) Interesting.... So how exactly did u know it was me wen u have never seen me before...?? (loving the state she was in)
B: umMMmm ... Errmmmm.... aaahhhh... ( knew her lie wuz caught) ok I am an idiot !! Happy !! ... ( giving up) Now plz cum inside.... !!
J: stepz in... takes a look around the hosue.... ( not bad he thinkz to himself and lookz back at bani noticing her red cheeks ) hey ur cheekz are red.. dun wrry i have that effect on girlz... ur not the first one and winks at her 😉 ....... well newayz.. it wuz very nice to meet you MS..?? ( remembers that he doeznt know her name and lookz at her questioningly )
B: cant believe what he just said.... narrows her eyes in anger... SHUT UP !!
J: Hmmm .. Miss Shut up !! That'z a very nice name. yeh kaise ho sakta hai ..... K Itni pyaari larki ka itna bura naam ho ?? ( flirtingly)

Bani cant believe his open flirting.... tell me he didnt say that... She takes a deep breath and chantz to herself trying not to lose her patience... he'z onli a guest !! He'z onli a guest !! Calm down Bani ... hez gonna go away soon !!

B: Thnkz for the compliment... but if ur done flirting would u like to take a seat? (gives him a sarcastic look)
J: yea k.. But i just have to ask u sumthing.... comes reallie close to her... just inches away from her face...
Bani braces herself... just astonished and taken back at his sudden move... Is he bout to kiss me or sumthing)
J: Bani.... Where do i ...............................( Bani'z just breathing heavily.. and waiting.. not looking into his eyes )
J: (continues).... Where do i...
B: ahan ...
J: Bani where do i Park my CAR ????? he sayz as he backz away frum her.. His eyes laughing at her.
B: his wurdz take a moment to sink in... and once they do she suddenly looks up and sees the look he has in his eyes... !!
She cant believe it ... anger takes over ... ALL YOU GUYZ ARE THE SAME ... PATHETIC AND IDIOTIC. ( rolls eyes)
J: ahan... nice theory ..(completely ignoring her wurdz) now plz tell me where do i park my car before it gets toed.
Suddenly a light bulb flashes over Bani's head .... and she gets a mischevious look on her face and knowz exactly how to get back at him.
B: Oh Parkingggg !!! ( goes openz the front door to see his car... and gasps .. it wuz the same Black sportz car that had swooshed past her before)
HmMmMmM...larka fazool aur car... Va va vrooommmmm... ( she laughs at her Pathetic rhyming) and notices that he is now standing behind her
B: Ok c that spot ri8e there... she says pointing to her neighbours Parking space ... That'z our parking spottt, so u can park your car ri8e there....!! Finishes her sentence and grins
at him widely... 😃
J: Oh ok... i'll be ri8e bac.
Bani sees him Park the car ri8e where she had told him... and says Mr. Jhon ( her neighbour in whose parking space Jai had parked ) to thori dher mein aane hi wale hein.. aur PHirrr... she smiles evily 😈

* Suddenly the phone ringzz *

B: oh lagta hai mummy ka hoga...she picks it up .. HELLO !!
Daddy: Bani beta..... ( his voice seemz as if he'z in trouble).. tum plz Jaldi se International cuisines aajaoo.. tumhare mummy ... !! and den
Bani hearz a click !!...
Wut did daddy mean... kya matlabb... kahin mummy ko tau kuch nahi ho gaya.... !!!!! . OH NO ! Worried thoughts start floating around her.... !!! She'z just sitting there shocked when she hearz Jai cum in.
Jai: Noticing her state ... asks very caringly .. MS. SHUT UP .. wut happen???
B: Already worried... looks at Jai as if ready to strangle him ... and den suddenly gets up and throws on her Black jeans Jacket.
Jai quickly follows her sensing tension... She steps out of the hosue and so does he. She quickly locks the door. and starts walking down the pathway.
B: jai daddy ka phone tha.... woh bahut ghabraye huyee thay... aur mummy ke baare mein kuch keh rahe thi... unhon ne kaha k mien jaldi se International cuisnes aa jaaoon.
J: now understading and sympathetic.... Par International cuisnes kyun.. and do u want a ride... ??
B: no... we often have family dinners there... we just love their food... and no a ride isnt necessary ihz just two blocks away...

Jai now feeling stuck in an odd situation... he had never met anyone in there family. He had never met "KIRAN DIXIT" before .... she was his last hope .... what would he do if sumthin happened to her? Where would i go? I came from England only becasue of her. HE crosses his fingers and hopes for the best as both him and Bani take long strides making their way through the snow.

So u guyzz.... what do u guyz think ??
What happened to Bani'z mom ? and Why is Jai thinking that way ??

Ne guesses ???? 😆