Woh tumhe to ho !! FF prt8 Pg.10 (upd)

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Hi all i am starting FF. Hopefully u'll like it. I look forward to ur commentz 😃

PART 1

The houses seemed dead buried under all the white shmimmery snow. It seemed as if there was no soul alive to bear the torturous cold morning.
And then suddenly sumone appearz holding a large cake. She squnits her eyes to make the figure more clearer as the it draws closer. Then with a sudden pang she she knew who it was - how could she ever forget HIM !! He wuz all she thought about. All day, all night.He walks up to her and places the cake on the near bench so he could hold her handz. They stare deep into each otherz eyez and den he brings up her right hand and kisses it ever so gently.....shez still in a shock that he was here... WITH her. She lets go turnz around and bendz over to the ground
and quickly turnz around and shoves a snowball in his face. He didnt know what hit him and frowns . She tries her best not to laugh
buh she just cant help it. Shez busy laughing buh suddenly stops and a feeling of shock takes over her.. when she feelz her back freezing and turnz around and sees that he just put snow down her Jacket.
Hiz eyes now twinkling. She also sees that he haz a ton of snowballs in his handz... he throwz one snowball after another and shez trying her best to stop him.Laughin. STop it !! Stop it !! Stop itttttTTTttt !!
It'z colddd !! STOPppp....

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Bani suddenly wakes up to see her mom splashing cold water on her face.
Bani WAKE UP!! tum kaisi larki ho.. UR ALRAM HAZ BEEN RINGING FOR AN ETERNITY. EVERYONE WOKE UP BUT YOU !! Get out of bed.. ur getting late for school. UTHO BABA !!
B: Mummy aap bhi naa !! Kitni acha sapna aa raha tha !! hahhhhhhhh !! * sighz deeply * btw wut tyme iz it ??

Freeze in. ( just like in Kal ho na ho )

Bani Dixit'z Profile : She just turned 17. She'z like every other teenager. Cheery.Bubbly.Full of Lyfe. Shez hard on the outside but once u get to know her u see shez as soft as butter. She lives with her mom and dad. She'z reallie beautiful and quite popular and haz been brought up in Canada and haz never visited india. Although she promises herself that one dai she will. Her parentz are quite rich and they live in a beautiful house in Ottawa. Her latest crush seemz to b Rohit who barely knowz shez alive.

Freeze out.

Mummy: Look at it urself...
B: lookz lazily at the clock and it'z 8:30. OH SHITTTTTTT!! Mummy apne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi... ab tau mein zaroor late ho jaaongi !! OH NO !! My English teacher iz gonna kill me.

She rushez to the washroom... quickly getz ready... sayz bye to her mummy. She not to far frum the house wen she hearz her mom.

M: calling out after her. Bani beta aaj hamare ghar koi aa raha hai. School se jaldi waapis aana !! and i totallly forgot ... HAPPYYY 17 BRITHDAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY !!!

Freeze in.

Kiran Dixit's profile: She iz a stay at home mom and loves her one and only daughter Bani to death. Shez reallie caring and iz a typical indian housewife. She has a Best frend bac in India named Jigyasa whom she considered more of a sister. Jigyasa had gotten married ( to Aditya). And den had to move to England. 7 years after Kiran also got married and moved to Canada. Up to this dai she haz never heard frum Jigyasa and missez her frend/ sister terribly.

Freeze out.

B: Blowz a kiss to her mom ! Thnkz mom. I LOVE YOU. i'll try to cum bac soon. Waves and hurries off.

Bani startz her 5 minute walk to school. Taking long strides, she startz muttering to herself. Aaj phir mehmaan !! YE mummy bhi na bas.... how can i cum bac early wen i know i'll get detention for gettin late.
oh god no !! i cant survive another detention with Ms.Walker... GOD she was boring !! aur uppar se mummy ne yeh mehmaan ko bula liya hai ...hongi mummy ki koi frend. God those ladiez.... they give u the weirdest look and check u out from top to bottom.
Bani cumz bac to reality as a Black sportz car swooshez past her !!
B: Wut a sexcii car !! Damn it... i cant wait to get my licence !
Bani checkz to see the driver but iz a lil late in catching his glimpse.

Bani finally arrives at school... she steps in and sees all the hallways empty ! oh god shez reallie late TODAI !! She finally reaches her first period class. Takes a deep breath and pushez the door open.
Once inside she sees 25 pairz of eyez staring at her .. wait make that 26 including Ms. Walker's. She lookz at Ms. Walker standing in the corner and giving one of her usual " i am gonna kill u now " lookz !!

k guyz there it iz. i just wanna drop sum hintz. The guyz Bani'z dreaming bout iz not Jai buh Jai iz gonna make hiz entry soon. * Black sportz car*So there it is. Do u like it ??? And i am srry for using"MSN language" itz just that i am so used to it.

SHOULD I CONTINUE ???

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Part 2

She lookz at Ms. Walker standing in the corner and giving one of her usual " i am gonna kill u now " lookz !!
She freezes and knowz wutz cumin up next?
Ms.W: Ms.Bani !! Nice of u to honour us with your prescence. I feel Obliged. So wutz ur excuse of being late today? Her voice dripping with sarcasm.
Bani just lookz down embarrased and curses under her breath.
Ms.W: since u interrupted the whole class... i would like u to apologize to everyone for disturbing them and wasting their tyme, in which they could've learned sumthing new.
Bani could now feel her cheekz burning. She nervously walkz to the front of the classroom and clears her throat. She could see Ms. Walker standing there waiting.
She lookz at the class and notices 2 familiar pair of eyez. Pia and Rano. Just by looking at them she gained courage and fianlly spoke.
B: I am sorry everyone for disturbing u.
Ms. Walker now pleased becasue she got wut she had wanted... now turnz to continue writing on the board wen she hearz Bani's voice again.
B: ... and i am also sorry that Ms.Walker wasted ur time.
Pia and Rano Hi-five each other and pia gives Bani a wide grin.
Ms.Walker angirly walks up to Bani and raises her finger... suddenly Bani wished she can take her words back.
Ms.Walker: Bani... tht'z enough !! Maybe you would like to explain ur statement to me in.. She lowers her glasses in a grandma type of way .. DETENTION !! Now plz
go and take ur seat.
Bani lets out a faint moan and headz towardz her seat between Pia and Rano.
Pia: Bani tht wuz awesum !! sum1 needed to stand up to that witch ... startz giggling...

Freeze in

Pia Shukla'z Profile: Same age as Bani. She'z quite naughty and loves all the attention she can get. She and Bani have been freindz since
kindergarden.

Freeze out

Rano: Shut up Pia... ( seemz serious ) leans over to Bani and sayz: GOOD job and winkz at Bani... but too bad for the detention :( !!

Freeze in

Rano chopra: Same age as Bani. This ambitious girl is reallie into studying and doeznt care what otherz think of her. She and Bani havebeen friendz since Grade 4.

Freeze out

Bani quickly takes her book out not wanting to get into any more trouble and pretendz to listen to the teacher but eventually reaches Rohit land and returns wen the bell startz ringing.Everyone haz left the classroom buh she styll haz to pack up her stuff so she just grabz everything carelessly and runz out the door buh bumpz into sum1. She'z now on the ground as well as him. She startz blaberring to herself as shez picking up her thingz.
B: oh GOD !! can diz dai get any worse.. and Pia and Rano didnt even wish me Happy Birthday... and they call themselves my friendz!!
She is just lost in her blabbering world and doeznt seem to notice that the person she bumped into iz also picking up her paperz. Both of them stand up... Bani styll lost
and trying to manage her thingz... the person handz her the paperz that he had collected.. bani styll doeznt know who it iz..

Person: I am sorry and Happy Birthday !! I am sorry ur friendz havent wished u yet !!

Bani is suddenly jolted out of her world wen she lookz up to see a handsome guy standing in front of her...

So guyz who do u think the PErosn is ???

and just wanted to tell u that this is a J&B story !!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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woww!!! 👏
pls cont. soon!!!
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wow! that was soo good plzz continue 👏
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Great part I just love it and different from others damm good.
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ROCK ON!! i love this ff!! plz do continue!!

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cool ff.
plz post the next part soon
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cool ff.
plz post the next part soon
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cool 😉 .
plz cont soon.
and they are actually rich.
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Part 3


Bani is suddenly jolted out of her world wen she lookz up to see a handsome guy standing in front of her...
B: She stutters while saying his name .. suddenly shez at a loss of wordz... R- Ro- RoH- ROHIT !!
R: suddenly looks surprised and smiles; The one and Onli ( very humbly) and how do u know my name?

laughz in her head.... Only if he knew that he is all i dream bout... if i wont know hiz name who will... she feelz like a duffer for talking to herself, and suddenly blrutz out...
B: Ofcourse i know ur name... ur reallie good at Volleyball...The words just seem to be tumbling out her mouth... once I came to watch the game and omggggggggg
u played soo welll... i wuz even cheering for you and i even told my friend ur reallie cu.u..u..
Suddenly stops and realized wut she wuz bout to say.... lookz down emabarrased.. pretendz to fix her shirt..
B: UmMmM... i gtg BYE !!! and runs like mad down the hallway...
Rohit just standz there looking confused and amazed at what just happened... He made a mental note to himself to find out who diz talkative/Sweet gurl was. He waves his thoughts away and smiles to himself and headz inside the classroom.

It was finally the end of the dai... Bani wuz glad that finally todai'z over, now she can go dream bout her whole incident with Rohit peacefully @ home. She wuz just bout the exit the hallway and open the exit doorz wen she hears Ms. Walker.
Ms.W: BANI.......... i think ur forgetting sumthin.
Bani truns around to see Ms. Walker standing there with her handz folded against her chest.
B: Shit!!I totally forgot about detention. How stupid. She sulkly makes her way to the detention room.

After 5 minutes of trying to stay awake in detention.. Bani dozed off and woke up just minutes b4 it wuz tyme to go. She looked over at Ms. Walker, who was drunk asleep and drooling. She wuz muttering in her sleep ... Give me those donuts...there mine....if u dun give me the donutz i am going to give u detention. Bani puts both of her handz over her mouth to stop hrself frum giggling. She made sure she would mention this to Rano and Pia next tyme she sees them.

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Bani rushes home onli to find that nobody wuz home.
B: I am home... buh no answer...
she goes over to the fridge to find a snack and see a message posted there. She takes of the message, opens the fridge and takes sum juice out.She seats herself on the nearby shelf. Takes a long sip directly frum the juice carton and readz the message.

Bani beta,
Me and Dad have to run to the supermarket
to do some last minute grocery shopping
and run a few errandz. If the guest cumz
while we are gone...plz make them comfertable
and seat them in the living room ... and OH YEA..
plz clean ur room !!


p.s: Plz dunt drink out of the juice carton.

Love Mummy !!


B: smirkz ... she knowz me a lil too well.Now who iz thiz stupid guest.... i am preeti sure mummy ke koi dost aa rahe hein. She seemz so excited. She puts the juice bac buh not before takin anotherlong sip.
She makes her way over to the TV and catches the end of Passions. She flips through channelz buh eventually getz bored and decidez to go and clean her room, and get it over with.

After 2 hours of cleaning Bani glances over to the clock. 7:15. HmMmMmM... maybe the guest are not cumin... Bani smiles to herself and is bout to make a 3-way callto Pia and Rano buh the doorbell ringz... She getz an irrated look on her face. She quickly checkz herself out in the mirror to make sure she lookz fyne.
B: Tumhe koi haq nahi hai... ke tum itni khoobsurat lago.... she sayz mimicking Poo in Khabhie Khushi Khabhie Ghum.
She iz wearing a black capris matched with sleeveless
white t-shirt with sum Pink embroidery. Just b4 heading downstariz she grabs her Pink Chandelier earrings. She hearz another knock.
B: err... Cominggg.... She rushez downstariz and openz the front door.... buh getz a confused look on her face when she sees whose at the door. itz sum guy.
Guy: Hi.... can i cum in ??
Bani is confused at first buh den she finally assumes that he iz one of the anunty'z son and has cum to ask for sugar, Salt etc. She gets annoyed.
B: Ok look.. hamare ghar pe cheeni,Namak, Chaat Maasala, Lemon Juice... Ya jo bhi aap lene aaye hain sab khatam hai... my parentz went to the supermarket to buy them... OK... (She lies)..
She gives a fake irritated smile... and iz aobut to slam the door in his face ...
Guy: uhhh.. UmMMM.. I am JAI!! Jai Walia? .... Your mom called me Over..... !!
B: Oh SHIT !!!!!





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wow!! i loved it!! the guy who has come to see bani is jai!! aww..

wow!! plz do continue!!

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