Woh tumhe to ho !! FF prt8 Pg.10 (upd) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thnkz a lot guyz for all your commentzz... and trust me wen i say dat... srry i cant do another part todai since i just returned frum doing sum "back-to-school" shopping ( which by the way was highly disappointing )and i have a few more errandz to run... i promise i will update soon... and ONCE AGAIN A BIG THNKZ TO ALL OF U !! U GUYZ ROCK !! 😳

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p.s: u guyz if u have any ideas and if u would like me to include one of ur ideaz... do PM me !! i will try my best to try adn put in in the FF. THnkz !



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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

wow jaan............awesome!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
GREAT FANFIC! please continue soon! πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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k .. just so guyz can remember wut happen last tyme... Bani told jai to park in her neighbours parking spot adn now the poor guyz car is being toed away.....

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Part 6


J: makes an innocent face - Lekin Aunty Bani ne tau mujhe bataya tha ke Woh apki Parking spot hai...

Both of Bani'z Parent glare at her......

Kiran: Bani y did u do dat.. ? He wuz our guest.... now wut is jai going to think??
NIshikant: Have we taught u nothing....??? Why did u do that to him ?? Becahra !!

Bani: * bechara my A*$* .... just looks down guiltly..(atleast thz how it seemed to her parentz) .. buh infact she wuz busy looking at the presentz that were in her hand...She closes one eye while trynna guess reallie hard wut Pia and Rano had gifted her...

K: BANI.. Bani..... are u even listening to me ??
Bani.... suddenly remembers that she wuz being lectured...huh...ermmM.... ohh... yea mummy i wuz just thinking that was very bad of me..( making a puppy face)..i shouldnt have done that to Jai... ( she turnz to jai) I am Sorry !! OK !! Gives him a wide grin..... πŸ˜ƒ
*thinkz*OK thnk God thz over now i can finally go and closely examine my presents...... she turnz around happily and iz about to open the door wen she hearz her mom'z voice
K: but..............Ur grounded for a week !! I think u need to sit in ur room and review ur mannerz.
B: But.. But...
K: i dun wanna hear another word... now quickly go upstairz and change and come down fast ... u have to show Jai the basement where he'll be staying....
B: (Grudingly)- OKAY !!!!! Shootz Jai another dirty look.. and runz into the house.

Jai had been quite entertained by the whole scenario.... Taking advantage of the situation... he finally decided to look like the good guy....
J: Aunty.. Uncle i dun think u should have dun that to her... i think u guyz are bieng a little too hard... IHZ ok.. Who cares if my car got toed away.... choren bacchi hai... * making a pity face *
N: No beta wutz wrong is wrong!! she needs to be punished so she doeznt do sumthin like this again....

Saying that Nishikant and Kiran start walking towardz the hosue ...

J: (Smiles devilishly to himself) - The torch has been lit and NOWWWWWW LET THE GAMES BEGIN !! 😈
He follows kiran and Nishikant into the hosue.

Stay tuned to see Bani and Jai going at it one on one !! πŸ˜‰


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Srry guyz i wasnt able to update... My high school started and i srsly have no tyme on my handz.... i know this part it short but dun wrry i think i'll make up for it in my next part !! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG I CANT WAIT!!!! hahaha jais soo funny and soo if bani! lolz! !!!! LMAO! it was awosome! cant wait to read part 7! πŸ˜† 😳 πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LOL...dat badboy Jai..y cant we ever have guests like dat come over to our house...lol πŸ˜† ..anywayz it waz great, wonderful, and i totally loved it..plz continue soon! πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was awesome pliz continue πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome part!!
bani is not going to let him get away with that! All i can say is let the games begin!!
Plz continue soon, i really can't wait to read the confrontation between jai and bani

Tuv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Let the games begin an the best man/woman win! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7

Bani was feeling quite sleepy after the long party. Bani quickly changed into one of her grey track pants and an oversized white T-shirt. Oh comfort !!
She removed all her make-up using the make-up remover and washed her face. She brushed her hair and tied her hair up in a neat ponytail. She came downstaris to find Jai sitting there watching Friends. Even tho he was watching TV, Bani could tell his brain wuz somewhere else. Bani looked around to find her parents but couldnt find them anywhere since they had already retired to their beds. Good!! Bani thought.. now i can talk to this hot shot one-on-one. She had to explain to him that he'd better be nice to her or else........
B: AhemMmMmM......(angrily)
Jai snapped out of his thoughts and turned around to see Bani. He was mesmerised by her innocence. She looks even prettier without make-up, so angelic. He looked at her up to down, unable to pull his eyes away frum Bani. but suddenly saw that Bani was gettin an annoyed look on her face.
B: Do u have staring problems? ( she waved her hand in front of his face as if to bring him back to reality)
J: gathers himself ... No i was just thinking.
B: Thinking what....??
J: Thinking ke tum sare larikyon ka.... agar asli chehra dekhna ho tau raat ko dekhna chahiye... WITHOUT MAKE-UP !! God u girls look scary
Turns back to face the TV and hide his laughter as well his lying eyes.
B: KIYA !! KIYA kaha tumne... How dare u? Can u plz tell me one thing... Why are u so mean to me? Did i do anything to you?
J: Ahh .. yea... U FLIPPIN GOT MY CAR TOED AWAY and Bani dear... this isnt called being mean... its called taking revenge.
B: Taking revenge....Taking revenge..... Y the hell dint u take "revenge" sum other dai... uses her fingers to air quote. Y todai? Well i hope u got what u wanted... Now all thankz to u i am gonna miss Rohit's Party. ArgHhHhH...

Pia had told Bani at the Party that Rohit wuz having a party.

*Flashback ( dun u just luv flshbackz .. LOL )

On friday, Pia was standing with one of her classmates going over the calculus notes when Rohit walks up to Pia.
R: Hey pia!!
P: Hey Rohit !! sup... Howz volleyball going?
R: Good.. i think this year'z our school'z gonna reach the finals. Newayz i just came to tell u that i am having a party this sunday and here'z ur invitation card. hadz pia the invitation card....
P: OH...Thankz Rohit. I'll be there !! Pia replies accepting the card.
Rohit turns around to leave but suddenly remembers sumthing....
R: Oh Pia. I almost forgot u know that gurl that ur always with... umMm... i dunno know her name...
P: Who Rano? Bani?
R: umMm.. i think Bani!! Can u also bring her with you?
P: Oh Pia looks at him raising her eyesbrows up and down in a teasing manner... and Why do u want Bani to cum when u dont even know her ? Iz there sumthing i shuld know Rohhit... Keepz doing that annoying teasing thing with her eyebrowz...
R: Looks down embarrased... Pia tum bhi naa... ok i have to go to my next period class... okie Bye.. and u better not forget !!

*Flashback*

J: looks as if sumthin slapped him right in the face.... ROHIT? .. ROHIT WHO? looks at Bani questioningly as if he wuz trying to figure out the detailz frum her facial expresseions.
B: Y shuld i tell u ? So u can go tell my Parents? U TATTLETALE !! squints her eyes accusingly
J: OMG... i cant believe i have to survive with this crazi gurl... Y me GOD? Y me ?
B: Y me? Y me ? - copies Jai in an irritating manner... Who told u to come here? if ur are so unhappy y dont u jsut leave? It will also give me some peace not to mention happiness !! ( smiles stasfied with her comeback)
J: Chala jaoonga ! mujhe koi shauk nahi hai yahan pe rehne ka ... it wuz my mom'z idea. OK. den mutterz under his breath but knows that Bani can hear God plz help me
survive daiz with this ugly not to mention crazy gurl....if i survive i promise i will send her mom some money to get her crazy daughter operated as soon as possible.May god give courage to her parents AMEN !!
B: Xcuse me..... iska kiya matlab hai....... ??? How rude can u get JAi ??? Dont u even know how to treat a girl ?
J: Humbly... I DO... but onli PRETTY GURLZ !! saying that he winks at Bani. πŸ˜‰
B: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH... i feel as if i am banging my head against a wall. Screw you !! I am going to bed. She is climbing the stairs wen she feelz Jai pull her hand. She comes crashing down.
J: looks deep in her eyes BANI.... ( his tone apologetic and flirty ) ....

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Here u go guys.... hope u liked da part
plz do leave comments as they are alwaiz welcumed
I'll cont soon !!
Edited by square1 - 19 years ago

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