What a fab performance by Ram PART VI - Page 205

Brilliant as usual. Even better that it was appropriately timed

Hey Adi....fantabulous as always!! 👏 👏
"B: Its spraying wrong, mere haath mein aa gaya saara
He walks over with an intense look takes her left hand and rubs her palm on his cheek. She feels like someone just placed a bunch of burning coal on it, it dries her mouth and she starts gasping for air.
JW: Yeah some men have to shave twice, unfortunately! (makes a sad face)
B: oh!?
Rubs her palm again it rasps again across his cheek......
JW: Now its all gone! Satisfied? "

How do u come up with such beautiful scenes!?....wat i love is the fact that none of these scenes are over the top...so subtle,with no effusive professions of luv and yet every gesture is able to capture the deep love JW has for B.
PS: I'll nominate u for a Pulitzer or a Booker award (if that tickles ur fancy 😆 ) anyday for writing such an addictive ff😃 😆

Love & Tc
Ritika.

JW: (a mixture of elation, surprise, confusion and back to elation cross his face) Oh Hi! What a pleasant surprise..........Its Ms. Dixit! Or shud I say soon to be Mrs Walia?
She just stands there........ numb.............upon hearing "Mrs Walia" ---- I just love it when he does that.

Bends her face to hide her rouged cheeks, still holding on to the double wide doors with both hands
JW: We arent even married....... yet, I am not allowed in coz I am late? (winks) --- Wicked!!

Her hands drop like theyve just touched burning coal..

YEAH we all feel the coal....
B: Ummm I am s I am....... come in
JW: Thanks ("look who is inviting who" tone)
B: Main maasi se milne aayi --- Yeah Right..


Adi I know you have heard it million times but still I am going to say it again. It was just mind Blowing. Loved every bit of it. Kash Ekta took your idea and showed it on the screen.

Can't wait for the next part....

Originally posted by: aditee

I am a die hard romantic. Me too.😆
In writing for you all I am reliving some/all of my fantasies ,Thanks for that.We love ur fantasies.Keep it up.👍🏼

We all believe in love stories and happy endings
But who wants to read sappy sob stories? 😆Bahot decently likha hai.😉

Heres to all of us who love the ZING! 😉 in my FF!! What do I say on this.I m going to print it.PC pe save kar ke rakha hai.😛When I will get married ,I will tell my hubby to read it .😳Hahaa! '19th June video 'bhi list mai hai.Poor guy!

Thank you thank you thank you.x 1000000000.......=Thanks to u dear.

Saniya wanted to know if he was a proverbial rich playboy! Awww! I did not ask u this.Woh mai nahi hun.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

His tastes are , if I may say that....... I have idea about his tastes.😉

Thanks for reading .Thanks for writing.

Soapaddict suggested .Thanks a lot Soap.Wonderful suggestion.👏
Hope u enjoy readin it as much as I enjoy writin it .This is O2 for me too.I really enjoy it.

Love
A

I was so bored after watching today's episode. U r right, na bolna hi theek hai.😆
I m suffering from split personality .😡

Add another fan to your list Aditee. You are fantastic!!! All this must be published one day. 😳 😳 😳

I forgot to mention. I love the touch to the smallest details e.g. Unforgiveable. The apt names for the colognes. And chocolate cake and pizza...any gals fave high-calorie low-nutrition food. How does Bani gorge on that and maintain to stay thin? I envy her.

aditee,
that was simply SCRUMPTIOUS!
i loooove this jw and bw....but more than anything else i love your writing skills....with such few words you make the whole scene and the characters come alive....WOW!

Originally posted by: armana

aditee,
that was simply SCRUMPTIOUS!
i loooove this jw and bw....but more than anything else i love your writing skills....with such few words you make the whole scene and the characters come alive....WOW!

I agree.. there is not much description of the happenings.. the conversations are so lively that it brings the best out of the FF.

This message is intended for all those who have PMed me wanting us to be back on this thread, robustly discussing the show on a daily basis.

Many of you in your PMs have showered me and the AF with compliments saying things like "I only watch the show if u review it as "good""

"Your reviews are the most honest and real", "you say it like it is" etc.

THANKS!!

Based on Mr Kapoor's post today I get the feeling that he does appreciate dissenting opinion, so I am going to let this post ride on that message, and pray that it does not get shot down by the Mods.


When an actor himself approves/agrees to play the part of a adulterous/incestuous/infidel husband for "TRP REASONS" then there is NO room left for intelligent audience to be watching such a show.

Maybe its a new definition of marriage according to Mr Kapoor and Ms.Ekta, where "consummation with sister-in-law" is considered a definition of "love for wife".
I unfortunately DO NOT endorse that point of view.

Unfortunately, I am also having to draw parallels to real life, I put myself in Bani's place (I am married and have two sisters), and JW's actions are unpardonable!

I am not able to appreciate/sympathize/justify/approve glorify an infidel husband's character who also happens to be concealing facts from his wife.

Its virtually impossible for me to deduce that JW committed incest and is later concealing the truth about it becoz "HE LOVES HIS WIFE",............ how ever great my math skills are! 😕
It just defies all published theories of science and math!


This JW is NOWHERE close to the one I fell in love with on May 31st.

I have little adulation and respect for the character and for the actor behind it right now.

My sanity and analysis skills are better utilized elsewhere at this point

Thank you all!!

A

P.S. Until the fantasy JW lives in my mind the FF shall continue..........

You have so much courage Aditeeji. Hope everyone is brave to call a spade what it is. Members have been kicked off for much less like Saraji.

holy