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Posted: 18 years ago
I still cannot believe that JW actually did that....There goes all the respect and attraction I had for the character....VERY disappointing.
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 41 (A)
FLASHBACK XIV (14)


This FF and the "JW" in this has NO connection to Kekta's Jai Walia!!! In reel or in dreams!!! This man is purely a figment of MY and my friends' imagination ONLY. Unlike Kekta's Jai Walia, this guy does not believe in sleeping with anything that wears a dress, to alleviate his grief.
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She walked nervously into the lobby of Walia Hotel. The events from the past few days was a fuzzy blur now. Too much emotional trauma too close together. She had taken

the evening flight to Jaipur the nite Papa had called. At the airport she was busy looking for a lawyer still, found the law offices of Rajora and Khandelwal, a BIG name in

Jaipur B cud tell, from the website, their main office was in Mumbai and Ahmedeabad too. She was able to acll from the airport phone booth (for privacy) and talk with a

junior associate and explain the situation, he had calmed her down assuring her that anticipatory bail, would not be a problem.

She had reached Mt Abu almost early next morning, her Dad was awake, watching TV, pale and terrified. She hadnt bothered to change, had called the associate a guy

named Nirav Rathore. He had been very pleasant and had offered to drive by to ND's house. There was no further indication of arrest or any kind of pursuit, that was making

B a lil nervous. Nirav and Bani went over the whole entire case's details, step by step, to understand ND's role in it. They both then drove to the law office, and met with the senior partner Mr. Rajeev Khandelwal who although met clients directly, very rarely, B concluded must have been moved by their case enough to meet with them.
He was a very good looking man in his early forties, with greying sideburns. He talked t B abot life in Mumbai, her job being a CPA etc. B wanted him to come to the point soon. He also mentioned having a wheeling and dealing brother. She didnt think much of it..........

He looked at the deatils of the case, had a one-on-one with her Papa that lasted over two hours and when they were ready to laeve it was past Noon. B hadnt slept a wink all nite. They headed home. Rano had fixed lunch, she was very happy to see B despite the circumstances. B had a hearty meal, she had invited Nirav over as wel, he was a charming, enthusiastic lawyer, who saw himself practising in the Supreme Court in a few years. They talked abt work life in Mt Abu etc.

B decided to take a nap, and half way thru it around 6 in the evening, her Dad had woken her, very excited about something. She had woken up startled, only to discover that Mr Mishra wanot be pressing any charges anymore. She was stunned to say the least. She didnt have a clue what brought the turnaround. She imediately dialled his number and attempted to speak with him. He was very affectionate towards her, deeply disappointed that his trusted employee Mr Dixit would do such a thing. He assured her all is forgiven, B wanted to know about the money, all he said was "I have gotten it back!"

B wasnt convinced she had asked him multiple times, all Mishra Uncle wud say was " Bete chinta mt karo, woh paise aa gaye hain"
She still continued to prod, wanting to know if Shah was arrested, Mishra Uncle had been very evasive about it all. She hung up and had shared the good news with her Dad. She decided to call Mishra Uncle later to clearly understand how the money was received and if ND still owed anything. Her Papa will have to find a new job now. May be Rano and him can move to Mumbai. Rano had always wanted to learn German, with her B Com heading towards completion, now would be a good time B thought.................

She had left the thrid morning for Mumbai.

She was done transitioning her work at AA, to the new hire, she had been offered a job with KPMG, and she was really excited about it. She hadnt had a chance to think about JW or how he must be all theese days. The call from Ms Singh had come to her desk directly. She had requested one hour of her time. B's hrt had started to race when she heard Ms Singh say the name of her boss. It was as if her heart had been waiting for the roll call, it jumped up and sped much like a racehorse. She thinks it must be about the transition and the public issue. She owed the client a meeting. Her personal relationship with the client was immaterial................

She took the elevator to the coroprate offices, her face flush with color, in anticiaption.........
Ms Singh greeted her cheerfully as always and directed her towards her boss's room and returned to her desk

She knocked nervously, once, twice, waited for a response, a third time.................
JW: Yes ?........

B cleared her throat, wiped off the sweat from her palm on her dark green sleeveless kurta...... tucked a lock of hair behind her ear, wished her haisr was tied back, placed her index finger on her upper lip and mopped the sweat off

Walked in........ avoiding looking at the man seated with his back to the bay windows..............
B: (looking at his laptop) Hi! Mr Walia...........Ms Singh said u wanted to meet with me?
JW: Hello Ms Dixit!! Or shud I say Bani Nishikant Dixit? (softly, taunting)
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Edited by aditee - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

thank you..........thank you.........thank you so much.............
this is great.

please continue soon.

pooja

p.s.i just noticed i am the first to reply and i already read this twice.

Edited by pooja1_76 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey aditee great part as always... 👏 however i cud not find parts after 40(C)............if u cud help me on the same........plzzzzzzzzz..........also wanted to ask if u wud be updating the FF on this thread hereafter??
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Posted: 18 years ago
Di,
thank you.......thank you, waiting for your FF, it's a great treat. PLZZZZ Di continue soon...........thanks once again
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 41 B

This FF and the "JW" in this has NO connection to Kekta's Jai Walia!!! In reel or in dreams!!! This man is purely a figment of MY and my friends' imagination ONLY. Unlike Kekta's Jai Walia, this guy does not believe in sleeping with anything that wears a dress, to alleviate his grief.
************************************************************ *******

She walked nervously into the lobby of Walia Hotel their we go again in the LION's jungle. The events from the past few days was a fuzzy blur now. Too much emotional trauma too close together. She had taken

the evening flight to Jaipur the nite Papa had called. At the airport she was busy looking for a lawyer still, found the law offices of Rajora and Khandelwal, a BIG name in

Jaipur B cud tell, from the website, their main office was in Mumbai and Ahmedeabad too. She was able to acll from the airport phone booth (for privacy) and talk with a

junior associate and explain the situation, he had calmed her down assuring her that anticipatory bail, would not be a problem.

She had reached Mt Abu almost early next morning, her Dad was awake, watching TV, pale and terrified. She hadnt bothered to change, had called the associate a guy

named Nirav Rathore. He had been very pleasant and had offered to drive by to ND's house. There was no further indication of arrest or any kind of pursuit, that was making

B a lil nervous. Nirav and Bani went over the whole entire case's details, step by step, to understand ND's role in it. like all the details great job here.

They both then drove to the law office, and met with the senior partner Mr. Rajeev Khandelwal does name ring a bell 😲who although met clients directly, very rarely, B concluded must have been moved by their case enough to meet with them.
He was a very good looking man in his early forties, with greying sideburns. He talked t B abot life in Mumbai, and why would some one do that her job being a CPA etc. B wanted him to come to the point soon. He also mentioned having a wheeling and dealing brother. She didnt think much of it.......... she is always focused on the issue at moment good thing

He looked at the deatils of the case, had a one-on-one with her Papa that lasted over two hours and when they were ready to laeve it was past Noon. B hadnt slept a wink all nite. They headed home. Rano had fixed lunch, she was very happy to see B despite the circumstances. B had a hearty meal, she had invited Nirav over as wel, he was a charming, enthusiastic lawyer, who saw himself practising in the Supreme Court in a few years. They talked abt work life in Mt Abu etc.

B decided to take a nap, and half way thru it around 6 in the evening, her Dad had woken her, very excited about something. She had woken up startled, only to discover that Mr Mishra wanot be pressing any charges anymore. She was stunned to say the least. She didnt have a clue what brought the turnaround. She imediately dialled his number and attempted to speak with him. He was very affectionate towards her, deeply disappointed that his trusted employee Mr Dixit would do such a thing. He assured her all is forgiven, B wanted to know about the money, all he said was "I have gotten it back!" we know who gave😉
B wasnt convinced she had asked him multiple times, all Mishra Uncle wud say was " Bete chinta mt karo, woh paise aa gaye hain"
She still continued to prod, wanting to know if Shah was arrested, Mishra Uncle had been very evasive about it all. She hung up and had shared the good news with her Dad. She decided to call Mishra Uncle later to clearly understand how the money was received and if ND still owed anything. Her Papa will have to find a new job now. May be Rano and him can move to Mumbai. Rano had always wanted to learn German, with her B Com heading towards completion, now would be a good time B thought.................

She had left the thrid morning for Mumbai. back to the life

She was done transitioning her work at AA, to the new hire, she had been offered a job with KPMG, and she was really excited about it. She hadnt had a chance to think about JW or how he must be all theese days. The call from Ms Singh had come to her desk directly. She had requested one hour of her time. B's hrt had started to race when she heard Ms Singh say the name of her boss. It was as if her heart had been waiting for the roll call, it jumped up and sped much like a racehorse. She thinks it must be about the transition and the public issue. She owed the client a meeting. Her personal relationship with the client was immaterial................

She took the elevator oh i love this elevator now to the coroprate offices, her face flush with color, in anticiaption.........
Ms Singh greeted her cheerfully as always and directed her towards her boss's room and returned to her desk

She knocked nervously, once, twice, waited for a response, a third time................. why three times man you can go in without a knock
JW: Yes ?........

B cleared her throat, wiped off the sweat from her palm on her dark green sleeveless kurta...... tucked a lock of hair behind her ear, wished her haisr was tied back (she was prepared), placed her index finger on her upper lip and mopped the sweat off

Walked in........ avoiding looking at the man seated with his back to the bay windows..............
B: (looking at his laptop) Hi! Mr Walia...........Ms Singh said u wanted to meet with me?
JW: Hello Ms Dixit!! Or shud I say Bani Nishikant Dixit? (softly, taunting)

set JW
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a new update!!!!
thanks!!!!!1
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 41 B
FLASHBACK XIV (15)

B's faces loses all the color, gained in the past two hours, from the minute she hung up on that phone call from Ms Singh, all the effort her heart had put in to pump all that

blood to her face, all gone in a split second!!
B: Ummmm how, aap, How... How do YOU know my full name? (screechy)
JW looking at a manila folder in his hand, dressed in a two piece black suit with a offwhite shirt inisde, a a gold and copper tie, pulled down in frustration, hanging to its dear

life from his neck, she could see the strong colum of his throat, the hairs on his chest working on their escape route thru his exposed collar magnified from 15 feet away......

JW: U work for a company which is provinding biz services for mine. Ms DIXIT!
JW: Oh I am sorry I shud say "worked" ( his jaw clenches at that word, obviously unhappy at her exit from AA)
B: They offered better money (sulkingly)
JW: Ofcourse! Money!! It cant be anything else can it? (swivels in his chair, faces the side of teh room, rubs his jaw with his fingers, the rasp amplified across the room)
B: Shut up! Its none of your business (almost shouts)
JW: Shhhhhh!! (places his index finger on his lips, left hand) It hurts my ears Baneee stop shouting! (touches his ear next)
She is about to reprimand him for the use of her first name, sees the look in his eyes and checks herself.............

JW: I set up the meeting. I better call Mr Ranade................. this is not going well (silkily)
B: Aapko kya kaam tha? Iam ................ I am ss....... I am SORRY (agitated)

The glint comes back to his eyes almost like they are saying "Hmmm thats better!"
JW: Wont u sit?
B: Sure! (nervously removes her laptop from her bag, turns it on, plugs it in....... stares at the screen waits for it to boot, not taking her eyes off it)
JW gets up slowly walks around the table to where she is.......... leans on the desk.......... hands the blue manila folder to her, she is not looking at him appear, she is

startled to find him a foot away........
Thinking everything is back to normal, and he is indeed interested in talking ONLY abt work, accepts the folder with a nervous smile and flips it open................
She starts breathing audibly when she reads thru teh first page, its a stamp paper, notarized with a Mt. Abu law office stamp on it at the bottom.. she peers at it, it says

Rajora and Khandelwal on it, she goes back to read it once, twice, thrice, she cant believe her eyes............. its the legal dox for paying off Rs. 30 lakhs to Mishra Uncle's

company, she is confused at first, flips to page two at the bottom she sees the scrawled signature of the man lazily lounging on his desk, arms folded watching every

expression flit across her face with utmost curiosity....................
B: Aaapne, aapne? Apne? Why did YOU pay? (confused and dazed, her mind has stopped working a few minutes ago)
JW: I love doing charity Bani (flat, expressionless)
B: How do u know? AAPKO KISNE BATAYA (enraged, ready to explode...........) Its none of your business.... (throws it on her key board tries to get up but he is just in

front of her, his trouser clad knee rubbing on her chiffon clad ones, she shrinks back into the chair, pushes it backward with all her might, the wheels are stuck on the plush

carpetting, it wont budge, holding her breath too long only makes her choke)
B: Its none of your business. Why did u involve urself? Its my problem (she rambles on with a pained expression) Who told YOU? News mein bhi nahi tha (cringes when she

says that)Us se pehle hi..................
For a fleeting second a concerened warm look crosses his eyes, its gone before she can see it)
JW: Does Mohan ring a bell Bani? Mohan Khandelwal...............
Her hand flies to her mouth............ "the wheeling and dealing brother of Rajeev"
B: Mr Rajeev breached the attorney client relationship to tell his brother and his BUDDY? How ridiculous!! How dare he. I will see him in COURT (totally outraged)
JW: Yes he did Banee (calm, smug)
B: How dare you! Iska matlab aapne Shah ko kahin chhupaya hoga (sad, childish, sobbing) aap chahte the mere Papa ka, u wanted this. YOU PLANNED IT!!
JW: Shut up Baneee. I can send him back to jail, sorry.... send him there NOW if I want to, but I wont. Who the hell is Shah (yells back)
She is terrified when she sees him raise his voice
B: Dont lie! Aapko sab pata hai
JW: Who the hell is he Bani?
B: He partnered with Papa...... (softly) woh saare paise lekar...........

JW: Ur Dad stole it too. He is a thief!
She gets up swiftly and swings her arm but before it can connect in a noisy crack, he captures it and twists it down ina steely grip
JW: When I said it was the last time. IT WAS.............. (warningly)
B: Papa is not a thief
JW: Aur kya kehte hai aise aadmi ko?
B: He did not steal. Shah ne, Shah ne Papa ko...............
JW: FOR ONCE STOP DEFENDING YOUR LOUSY FAMILY BANEEEEE (exasperated, annoyed, frustatred)
B: You are a lousy man. I despise you! I hate you,. I am sorry I ever met you (vehemently) I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOUR FACE EVER AGAIN...............
JW: Thats going to be a tad bit inconvenient....Banee, (his fingers indicating a tiny quantity)considering you are going to be married to me soon!!! (dripping with sarcasm)
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Posted: 18 years ago
I cannot believe the twist Adi!!!! Kya dimaag paayi hai aapne!!!
I love the closing line - 'Thats going to be a tad bit inconvenient....Banee'... oooh.. that has so much sarcasm in there.

I may not be able to give you a detailed review, but can tell you that your twists are so much better than Ekta and you rightly said that the JW in KS has NOTHING in common to the JW in the FF.

I am trying to see what contract marriage you come up with... I want to see your lawyer skills now... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Adi that was BRILLIANT! 👏 (sorry for the caps mods) Adi that was too good loved every part of it even the Rajeev Khandelwal 😳 😉

you simply have no idea how anxious I am about the next part..sorry won't be able to give a detailed review ..

and vazz I agree with you I loved the closing line can't wait to see this marriage played out 😛

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