A tryst with fate - updated final chap 11 - Page 14

Hey, I don't post very much but I feel like I can't let this
opportunity pass. This story is awesome. The style and language that you
ensare the readers with is not one I have seen very often with other KS fan
fictions. Also, the story is so romantic. I love the characters... and I love
where the story is going. I am enjoying not seeing Jiggy and evil Ranveer in
the story, and it just focusing on the loving banter between Jai and Bani.
When will you continue ?? I am so obsessed with the story, its an
understatement for me to say its awesome. Waiting patiently for the next
Ch.

Hi Garf... just read part 9 .... gud job... so both r struggling with their feelings...... 👏

Hey Sujata,

Sorry for being such a lazy bum....finally read chapters 8 and 9.

Before I begin, I wanted to share a song. I was listening to my iPod when I came across the song 'My Wish Comes True' from the film Kisna. I thought it suited Jai-Bani's situation right now from one way or the other:

A moment is all i am searching for
Just a moment in love with you
A moment so special so beautiful
In a moment my wish comes true

I am looking for a reason
To smile once again
Through every changing season
The pain I can't explain
I see the magic all around
Shining down on me
With you my life would be so right
If only it could be

Baby this world is a mystery to me
But if you could be here for eternity......


Going back to your actual FF, must say....really well written. Loved the way you described both of their feelings!! 👏 The questionare in the car by Jai was excellent...does she have a boy friend?....Really cute! 😳

Chapter 9 was great too! Jai's description on how he was staring at Bani doing each move to pick up her bag was soooo adorable!! 😳 And then Bani tripping in the arms of Jai Walia......you caught my breath on that one! 😉 And obviously, great question by the journalist. Bani should've gotten a hint that Jai was talking about her being in his heart....where she belonged! 😳

All in all...MAGNIFICENT!! 👏 👏 👏

Keep up the great efforts!

Love,

Anjali

Originally posted by: khush51

Hey, I don't post very much but I feel like I can't let this
opportunity pass. This story is awesome. The style and language that you
ensare the readers with is not one I have seen very often with other KS fan
fictions. Also, the story is so romantic. I love the characters... and I love
where the story is going. I am enjoying not seeing Jiggy and evil Ranveer in
the story, and it just focusing on the loving banter between Jai and Bani.
When will you continue ?? I am so obsessed with the story, its an
understatement for me to say its awesome. Waiting patiently for the next
Ch.

Hey Khush,

What can I say, thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much for your thoughtful gesture and believe me it does go a long, long way even a little feedback...I am hoping to post the next chapter soon, however my stupid laptop decided to conk off just now...so it'll be sometime before I am able to post the next chapter...regretfully u'll have to wait for some more time...

Thank you again sooo much again for taking out time and writing a post...it's definitely very overwhelming...😊

Originally posted by: amisra

Hey Sujata,

Sorry for being such a lazy bum....finally read chapters 8 and 9.

Before I begin, I wanted to share a song. I was listening to my iPod when I came across the song 'My Wish Comes True' from the film Kisna. I thought it suited Jai-Bani's situation right now from one way or the other:

A moment is all i am searching for
Just a moment in love with you
A moment so special so beautiful
In a moment my wish comes true

I am looking for a reason
To smile once again
Through every changing season
The pain I can't explain
I see the magic all around
Shining down on me
With you my life would be so right
If only it could be

Baby this world is a mystery to me
But if you could be here for eternity......


Going back to your actual FF, must say....really well written. Loved the way you described both of their feelings!! 👏 The questionare in the car by Jai was excellent...does she have a boy friend?....Really cute! 😳

Chapter 9 was great too! Jai's description on how he was staring at Bani doing each move to pick up her bag was soooo adorable!! 😳 And then Bani tripping in the arms of Jai Walia......you caught my breath on that one! 😉 And obviously, great question by the journalist. Bani should've gotten a hint that Jai was talking about her being in his heart....where she belonged! 😳

All in all...MAGNIFICENT!! 👏 👏 👏

Keep up the great efforts!

Love,

Anjali

This song is just sooo ideal with what's happening in the serial right now...Completely agree with you...I have kind of stopped watching the serial except for stealing few glimpses of it in between...For one, it makes me angry the way Ekta is dragging the serial and the other reason being I can't see Bani and Jai like this...😭

So hoping this stupid rohna dhona gets over soon....

Would also like to thank you for liking my ff, it definitely feels good when one appreciates it...so really thank you sooooooooo much for taking out time and adding in a note...Hoping to update the next chapter soon...let's see how soon that is...😊

Originally posted by: j&b84

Hey Garf

where did u going was waiting for ur next part so early pls do nt disapper again...........

ur this part was awesome........ pls cont soon

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Hey J&B,

What can I say I am just one lazy bum...but this time I am hoping to post it soon...however not going to promise anything knowing how lazy I am, plus my laptop has gone for repair...so I hope the replacement one works fine...😊

yaar, I am impatiently waiting for you to continue. Please continue soon

Hey guys,

I am sorry for making all of you wait, but can't help it becuase first my system crashed and now I am feeling a bit under the weather with a bad, bad cold...so give me a bit more time and I promise to update it hopefully in a day or two...

Sorry guys to keep u waiting, however will ensure the waiting is worthwhile... 😊

Originally posted by: Garf

Hey guys,

I am sorry for making all of you wait, but can't help it becuase first my system crashed and now I am feeling a bit under the weather with a bad, bad cold...so give me a bit more time and I promise to update it hopefully in a day or two...

Sorry guys to keep u waiting, however will ensure the waiting is worthwhile... 😊

Hey Sujata,

Is your computer all right now?

I hope you feel better soon....I'm sorry if I passed on my cold to you through PMs!😉 I really hope you get well soon....I'm praying!!

No problems about the FF update....as long as you don't make us wait forever!!😉

Take Care!

Love,

Anjali

Hey Anjali,

That is soooo sweet of you, thanks a ton..actually my laptop has gone for repair and currently I am using someone else's laptop...will be getting mine back hopefully tomorrow...and ya I have got this nasty cold...but I am hoping writing the next chapter might just lift up my spirits... 😊

And promise won't make you guys wait longer... 😊