A tryst with fate - updated final chap 11

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Anjali

@amisra

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Posted: 19 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Garf

Hey Anjali,

That is soooo sweet of you, thanks a ton..actually my laptop has gone for repair and currently I am using someone else's laptop...will be getting mine back hopefully tomorrow...and ya I have got this nasty cold...but I am hoping writing the next chapter might just lift up my spirits... 😊

And promise won't make you guys wait longer... 😊

Yaar...I am the one who should say thanks!! THANKS A LOT for making me hooked to your FF...I love it! 🤗

I hope your laptop returns to you soon! 😉

Will be waiting for the next part....

Take Care!

Love,

Anjali

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 19 years ago

#142

Dear Garf, again a very well written episode, not only from your style, but the story too. I just love it, you are turning it into a teaser...
I wonder how he's going to make her understand that she is that one woman. I think it's not easy to be on a business-trip with someone you secretly love. Conflicting emotions and yet have to concentrate on the business on hand!

Thanx a lot, Sujata!

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 19 years ago

#143

hi Sujata

h r u feeling nw. i hope ur cold is ok nw. just take care of urself first.

we can wait for u update. but u should feeling gd.

hope u recover fast from ur bad cold

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 18 years ago

#144

Hi guys,

I know this time, I ended up taking tooo much time to write the next chapter...However thankfully I have updated the chapter finally. Would impatiently wait for all your comments...Hope you enjoy reading it...

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 18 years ago

#145

Devastating, Garf! Perfect story, language, dialogues, setting. You have to move ahead Garf, you need a bigger platform than our forum!
And I mean it.

Thanx so much, it was an honour to be (one of) the first to read it!

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 18 years ago

#146

Hi Maria,

I am definitely surprised because to be honest, I found this chapter to be a drag...couldn't wait to finish it...Thanks a ton......Your appreciation really, really means a lot to me...You have put me on cloud 9 and made my day... 😊

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 18 years ago

#147

Garf

it was exceptional.. worth the wait! plz dont make us wait that long for
another part!

loved it.. plz do continue!!

👏

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 18 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
Garf

it was exceptional.. worth the wait! plz dont make us wait that long for
another part!

loved it.. plz do continue!!

👏

Thank you soooooooooo much, I can't promise as you know I am such a lazy person, but I'll definitely try and write the next chapter soon. Btw the next chapter is going to be last one...hopefully...

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 18 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Garf

no need to thank me.. i am saying the truth.. plz dont say the next part is
the end i am about to flood with tears.. haila.. nahin!! why?????

if ur lazy toh main hoon maha lazy.. i might as well win the award for the
laziest if member! 😆

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 18 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: maria-n
Devastating, Garf! Perfect story, language, dialogues, setting. You have to move ahead Garf, you need a bigger platform than our forum!
And I mean it.

Thanx so much, it was an honour to be (one of) the first to read it!

maria u just wrote wht i wanted to write.

graf it too gd. i really like the last part where they dance togther on the beach. wow it so romantic.

pls update ur next part sooon.

👏