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Sujata

@Garf

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

Arrey no.... lazy member award definitely mera hai...😆 Sorry this is one tag that I can't share with anyone else...😆

Don't worry I'll start writing another fanfic really soon...I need a breather from romance...khud kee zindagi mein toh romance hai nahi, doosro ke zindagi mein romance dal ke, I am going into a depression😉...aise bhi...if I keep on dragging this, toh that fun disappears...

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harpreet

@hp85

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Posted: 19 years ago

#152

garf tha was absolutley beautiful and soooo worth waiting for i ahve been watiig for ages to read the next part , oh my god you have really made it worth it
please don't make su wait for too long for teh next bot

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#153

oh snap.. part 10 was WOW!!!!.. phew 😳 that was gr8888.. thank god pushy's just a friend.. luveddd it.. 👏

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anushka_5

@anushka_5

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#154

Finally dear! It was Awesome, Beautiful and oh so Romantic! U made u for the long wait with a superb part 👏 . I simply loved watching Jai Jealous... I am glad to see Jai out of his denial mode.
Do continue soon... I just love this Fanfic...and the way u put ur thoughts across just weaves magic around the inherient magic of Jai-Bani love story.

Lots of Luv
Anu.

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Sujata

@Garf

Inactive

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Posted: 19 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: anushka_5
Finally dear! It was Awesome, Beautiful and oh so Romantic! U made u for the long wait with a superb part 👏 . I simply loved watching Jai Jealous... I am glad to see Jai out of his denial mode.
Do continue soon... I just love this Fanfic...and the way u put ur thoughts across just weaves magic around the inherient magic of Jai-Bani love story.

Lots of Luv
Anu.

Hi Anu,

Thank you sooooooo much, I am glad you enjoyed reading it, this is what makes me go on and on....the next part is hopefully going to be the last part because no use unnesarily dragging the story...

Thank you once again because this really means a lot to me...

😊

Love

Sujata

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

Alumni

+ 7

Posted: 19 years ago

#156

👏
That was so romantic, wonderful and cute, filled with every emotions jealousy and anger.
I hope Jai is able to confess his love to Bani
Please write soon

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#157

Oh man it took me 20 mins to read this whole thing and that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!

This is really good!!! some of the parts were funny!!!!!!! But the very last part... now that was something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome job please cont soon!!!!!

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MOE

@wite_rainbow

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#158

AMAZING garf....the romance u portray btw the two is soo elegant...i love it i think yer ff is very unique and well written everytime u update i reread the whole thing i love it soo much...cant wait for the next part!

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Khushboo Bindra

@khush51

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#159

First and foremost, thank you for giving me the heads up on the new
chapter update. Its was a delicous treat after a long day in classes.

Wow, is all I can manage to sputter out of my mouth right now. The way
you write it is as if I am sitting with Bani as she is moving her little toes
in the sand sitting next to Mr. Walia.

I love the way Jai is portrayed as an intense, "hidden" romantic. It blows
me away. I would be cowering in a corner if I ever met such a man. 😳 I
hope the next update is soon... since I can barely contain the joy I felt
when he thundered down on her lips...

Keep up the awesome job, and thank you from the bottom of my heart for
sharing your passion of writing with us. This story is truly a diamond in
the rough.

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Anjali

@amisra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#160

EXCELLENT Sujata...Awesome part! 👏

Loved your descriptions....very well written!!

Finally for once Jai doesn't confront Bani in a drunken mode. I thought he would be out of his senses with that bottle he took along to the beach!

Can't wait for the next part...and please don't create any twists after the beach scene. It looks like a perfect moment...Jai messing around or even Pushkar showing up will make it a mess!

Please continue soon...had waited long loooong time for Part 10 😉

Love,

Anjali

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