Pyar To Hona.....-FF LAST PART!!!PG. 55 - Page 26

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Posted: 19 years ago

sorry for making you guys wait. Here's part 27. It's pretty short, but if i have more time today, i'll try to update some more. Enjoy!


part 27:


Bani walks down the wooden stairs, slowly letting everyone look at her, amazed by her beauty. She looks beautiful in lehenga. Here's the link for it: http://www.utsavsarees.com/pages/sarees-large.asp?icode=LDC3 8&ct=Wedding&st=&isS=True&isC=True&abp=2 3
Her sisters seat her down with in the middle of a few girls, ready to do her mehendi. Many compliment on how she looks, saying that she looks absolutely gorgeous. Bani blushes and smiles with happiness. Pooja bhabi makes room for herself next to Bani and takes her hand from her. She begins to do Mehendi on bani's hand. In the background, women play the drums and others dance in the middle with joy. Bani smiles because of the happy atmosphere. She looks over to her side and sees Pia and rano are also getting their mehendi done. Her face is glowing, showing her excitement and joy.

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Tarun: Cheers!!!

The five men clink their cups together and drain down the alcohol, slowly, enjoying every sip. The loud music in the Club made it difficult for them to hear each other. After finishing his drink, jai wipes his mouth with his sleeve and sets down his cup. Aditya slaps him on the back and grins.

Aditya: Jai, this is your last night as a bachelor!
Tarun: Enjoy every minute of it, my boy, because you're gonna miss it!
Aditya: Yes, all that whining and complaining, never having time to yourself! It is complete torture, yaar!
Jai: (laughing) That's because you married, Jigyasa Di. My Bani isn't like that.
Tarun: You're nuts, Jai, for ever thinking about marriage, I will never set my mind on that. (he takes a sip from his beer)
Saahil: (smirks) We all know that, Tarun Uncle.

Tarun narrows his eyes at Saahil and continues to drink. Jai, Aditya, and Ranveer burst into laughter making Tarun scowl at them.

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Bani's face turns scarlet red as she reads his name in neat cursive on her hand, Jai. She admires her mehendi, done by Pooja bhabi. Pia walks away from the dance floor and cheerfully runs towards Bani, who is sitting down, watching everyone around her enjoying themselves. Pia extends her hand forward to Bani.

Pia: Come on, Di. Let's Dance!
Bani: I can't, pia. (she brings up her two hands, covered in Mehendi, to show Pia)
Pia: Di, I don't want any excuses.

Not letting Bani speak, pia pulls bani up by her arms and drags her over to the dance floor, with the help from Rano and Pooja Bhabi. Everyone circles around Bani and make her dance along. After about a few minutes or so, Bani decides to sit back down, finding it difficult to dance with wet mehendi on her hands. She sits down onto a chair and starts to blow on her hands, hoping for it to dry fast. "Vijay!," she hears someone scream. Bani looks back up to the dance floor and sees Vijay dancing, looking drunk with happiness, and annoying Pia. She begins to laugh as she sees Pia punching him on his arm and trying to push him off the dance floor. Bani rests her back against the back of the chair and closes her eyes. "At last, happiness is finally coming our way…," she thinks gladly to herself.


part 28 pg. 47

Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great.small and sweet.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh wow!!!such an awesome part..........plzzz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
noooo no happiness!! everytime they think that something goes wrong!! JAI BETTER NOT OVER-ENJOY HIMSELF!!! omg, i have a very bad feeling for the enxt part!! plzz prove me wrong!
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Posted: 19 years ago
have some more chemistry between aji and bani 😉 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
have some more chemistry between jai and bani 😉 😛 ur a great writer but please make it more interesting
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Ravneet_jassal

have some more chemistry between jai and bani 😉 😛 ur a great writer but please make it more interesting

i know that it was a bit dull. i've been having a bit difficulty of trying to make a happy ending, i'm planning on ending this fanfic, there's maybe two or three parts left of this fanfic. thanks for the honesty, will try to make it interesting. 😉😊

Love,

Godess

Edited by indian_godess - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg tat thing wuz 1000 sumtin...shit id go shoppin india 😆 gr8 part
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Posted: 19 years ago
sweetie.. it was awesome.. so sweet!!

plz do continue!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part
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