Pyar To Hona.....-FF LAST PART!!!PG. 55 - Page 28

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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey hun nice part!...plz continue soon!,,and the shoe thing would be pretty funnie to see 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Finally caught up with the last part and wow!

Jai getting nervous - so cute!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow! di..

fantastic part!

loved it plz do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
OH man!!!! this fanfic is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i read all 28 parts in one go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........


this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!.....


please cont soon!!!!! cant wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys!!! really sorry for keeping you guys waiting! i was planning on updating either on saturday or yesterday, but couldn't becuz on saturday i had to rush to da hospital becuz my sister got really sick. yesterday i was just got caughtup in personal stuff. i might update tomorrow if i have the time. LOL, i'll consider the shoe idea. if you guys have anymore ideas, feel free to share! becuz honestly, i'm fresh out of em! thank you all for your wonderful comments and support!!! your wonderful comments encourage me on! thank you all so much!

Love You All,
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

OH man!!!! this fanfic is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i read all 28 parts in one go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........


this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!.....


please cont soon!!!!! cant wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh my gosh! you read all 28 parts!!! LOL! and in one go?? wow, thanks a lot! really glad that you liked it!!!

Godess

p.s. really love your ff 2 Guli! you're a talented writer! keep up da good work!

Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww don't worry about it goddess...take care of your stuff!
i hope your sister is okay!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys! sorry that i haven't updated for awhile. i just want to thank you all for being patient and for leaving wonderful encouraging comments! well here's part 29, it's short and maybe even boring, i tried my best, but i was so tired when writing this. School has been taking up all my time, i barely have time for myself anymore...well here's the next part, i hope you enjoy it! i wrote it in a bit of a rush, so if the events are going too fast, then please forgive me...

Part 29:

Jai turns his head to the side, looking back to the marble staircase, as he hears murmurs amongst the guests saying, "oh god! Look at her! She's look beautiful! Doesn't she look wonderful?", they'd all say. He uncovers his face a little, so he can get a better look of his dulhan, who was now walking down the staircase, with the help from her bhabi and sisters, her dupatta draped over her head. His heart stopped for a moment, stunned by seeing her. She looks especially more beautiful today than any other time he had spent with her. Jai waits patiently for bani to join him in the mandap, which she does, and her two sisters by her side, eyes full of tears of joy.

The pundit continues with the marriage rituals. (sorry, don't really kno what happens in a hindu wedding) They get up and take the saath phere together, jai applies the sinndoor in bani's maang, and finally ties the mangulsutra around her neck, fulfilling the marriage rituals, they were now husband and wife. Jai and bani both take aarishwaad from their elders, seeking blessing for their happy married life. As it is time to leave, jai cannot find his shoes.

Pia: Kya hua, jiju! (trans: What happened, brother-in-law?)
Rano: (mischief gleaming in her eyes) Can't find your shoes?
Jai: Hain, I can't- (looks at them curiously) Alright, where'd u hide them?
Pia: What are you talking about, Jiju? (stressing the word Jiju)
Jai: (sighs, reaches into his pocket and pulls out his money) Here you go, can I now please have my shoes?

Jai hands pia and rano both a roll of bills. They begin to count them, greedily.

Pia: (shocked) Jiju, this is like more than - it's - Thanks jiju!
Rano: Wow! 50000 rupees?! (lol taking your idea got2go2go)
Jai: (clears his throat) uh, my shoes?
Pia: oh hain! Rano, go get them!

Rano leaves to go fetch them and comes back after awhile, with jai's shoes in her hands.

Mausi: (giggling) Tum dono bhi nah! (referring to pia and rano, pinching their cheeks)

It is now bani's vidya and she is sobbing in suraj and pooja's arms, hugging them tightly. She didn't want to leave them, she was too attached to them. They were her family which she loved from the bottom of her heart. Pooja and Suraj, who are also crying, wipe away bani's tears and soothe her, telling her that they will still meet. Pia and rano, who can't stop the tears from flowing, also join in the family moment.

Pooja: Don't forget us, okay? (she tells bani)

Bani nods her head like a little child, listening obediently to her mother.

Suraj: Take care of your family and husband…(tears welling in his eyes)
Bani: (promises) I will….
Pooja: Visit us sometimes.
Bani: Of course I will.
Suraj: We'll miss you.
Bani: (more tears forming) I'll miss you too. ..

She hugs them once more. Suraj seats Bani into the black limo where Jai was waiting patiently for her, so they could go home. Before shutting the car door, signaling for the driver to drive off, Suraj wipes away bani's tears and kisses her affectionately on her forehead. He shuts the door and takes his place next to Pooja, Vijay, rano and pia (who will be joining the Walia family the next day) , all with tears in their eyes. Bani rolls the window down and waves a goodbye as the limo begins to drive away. She sits back against the seat, as her family becomes out of sight, weeping silently to herself. She becomes startled for a second as she hears Jai's deep voice.

Jai: Bani…

Bani stares at him with her now red eyes, still filled with tears, trying to choke down the tears. She begins to cry even more when Jai kisses away her tears and pulls her into a hug, wanting to soothe her. He strokes her hair as she sobs into her chest, her arms wrapped around him tightly.

Jai: (whispers into her ear) It's alright….there's no need to cry, you'll still see them…

Bani takes her head off his chest and faces him once again.

Bani: Why do the girls have to leave their homes? It's not fair…(she complains, lays her head back down)
Jai: (shrugs his shoulders) It's just tradition…
Bani: I hate traditions…

Jai grins and pulls bani's face up, meeting with her teary eyes. He kisses her trembling lips, deepening it after a moment or two. After what seems to be an eternity, jai pulls back and gazes at his beautiful wife. He pushes back a strand of her hair and smiles at her.

Jai: You won't be missing your home for too long, Mrs. Walia…I promise you that.

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next part: Honeymoon...(give me ur ideas!)

positive and negative comments are welcomed!...

Love you all,
Godess

part 30 pg. 51
Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww...awesome they are a couple now...lol i noe Bani i hate traditions too specially the ones that are meaningless and were there when the world was dominant of men ... but now we are equal...(well in some parts of the world we are...)...

awesome update

CK❤️

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