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Posted: 19 years ago


Right as promissed...part 12A...it is very short, am very rushed for time. Yet i tired my best and do hope that you like it...Please ihope that you are not all discouraged my this part...all i can say is "For every tear...there is a bigger smile"...fo hope you understand my simple riddle. Do leave comments.
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Part 12A

"Your soul cries as it has just been separated from the one thing that helps it to live….doesn't your heart weep in such distress??"

Surrounded by such darkness…she feels so lost. All hope has left her eyes as they constantly weep drops of anguish caused by none other than her lover. Her heart still yearning for him…for his one touch…...for his lips upon hers...
She lets the darkness hide her…she lets it engulf all that she is now crying for…

She walks upon a road of silence to an unknown destination not caring for anything only knowing that she has now lost all hope…and all wish….to live..
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Falling to the ground…allowing the glass to crush beneath his hands he lets a single tear fall. Blood seeps through his clothes…yet he does not care for his pain…only for what he has caused his greatest desire…his love.

The locket still held tightly in his grasp, as if mocking him…he looks at it now in pure hatred and furry…knowing now all "her" intentions. He sends it ramming hard against the wall…intending to break the causer of his distress...but only causes a meek dent. Only he knows how powerful this locket shaped in an S resting upon a gold circle is. Cursing the very day he made it for "her". As making something with a touch of love is not that simple to break if you refuse to let go of your past…oh he should know. As the power of love knows no bounds….even if it is broken love of the past…as when a symbol cherishes that very same emotion…then that past love is not lost…not lost till one of them lets go…

Getting up slowly from his weeping position…letting the blood fall…allowing it to numb all feelings except the pain…the pain for his love. Like a non-living being he walks out of the room...intending to pay a much awaited visit to…."her".
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Sitting on her bed, she waits for him feeling him near. Her heart shudders as she feels a dent upon her soul…a dent which he caused...yet no matter…he is now coming to her. Her eyes shine in pure glee…

Yet what does she know...what does she know, of the amounts of anguish he brings with him…intending to drown her in them…....what does she know...
" The power of true love knows no bounds..."
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Her steps heavy and laboured….he can feel him cry out to her in desperate attempt…he can feel his soul crying…yet she refuses to give her hand of comfort…as he has not only mocked her life but her love. Just wanting the world to swallow her up she weeps and collapses allowing her body to shudder amongst the blanket of her darkness…only allowing her last word and breathe to adorn his name "Jai…"As all hope has finally left…

"Give your last breathe…give your life in his name…yet never forget your love…Your love of the present…."

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Right, an extremely short update….but yet WAIT… part 12B and C…will be let us just say better and ahem…will hopefully bring a smile upon your faces. Yet am rushed for time therefore could not write the full update I wished to…
Yaar guys if I had written all that I had wanted to even if time had permitted it…my ff would end..hahha…no but have thought of something ahem new…but do promise you the next part…lets just say will bring a smile upon your faces…well I hope it does.
I really do hope that I have not discouraged my ff readers to read my ff….due to the last emotional and now this emotional part…but like I said before…."the tears will go…brining a smile upon all"
Please do leave comments would really apprecite it...and i really do hope that i have not discouraged my ff writers from reading my ff..all i can say in my defense is that the next few parts will hopefully bring a smile upon...all.
Do leave comments.
Luv ya
sweetu.
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great Part Sweetu!!! can't wait for 12 B!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part sweetu!!
can't wait to read 12B
hopefully the whole mystery will be unclosed soon

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
another amazing part Sweetu!! 👏 👏 👏
plzz continue 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
WELL DONE didi.....................!!

plz do continue when u get a chance!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sweetu dear,
Thanks for continuing so beautifully and you are doing a great job.
Pl keep on writing.
Love
Sangita
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Posted: 19 years ago
🤗 !!
THANK YOU ALL SOOOOO MUCH!!
I really do appreciate you all reading my ff..i do hope that the last two parts were not too emotional and you were not all discouraged to contiue reading it.
Will post part 12B( will hopefully bring a smile upon your faces...i hope)...at night...or maybe earlier....we shall just have to see.
Once again thank you all..for your very sweet comments, they are much appreciated!
Luv ya
sweetu.
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Posted: 19 years ago
i cant wait for me to smile!! 😃 i loved the part!! really nice!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Aww my jaan!......last two parts were just awesome!👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow nice part sweetu 👏 👏
will wait for part 12 b 😳

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