7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 16

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it was soo beautiful..... please do continue!
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plz continue soon. I read all the fanfics that have been posted and i have to say that you have a charm for storywriting. Please continue to write such fanfics. Your fanfics are addictive. You probably dont know but i work for a storywriter and your story is absolutely great! =D

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yes!!!! he knows!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏



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That was great!!! Please continue soon!! I'm so happy he finally knows!!! 😃
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superb part.loved it.too good.eagerly waiting for the jai and bani's meeting. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
OH MAN!! you all have beeennnn sooooo sweet! your comments are soo sweet! i really didn't think that my fan fic would impress some of you soo much 😳 thanks again... well here is part 8

Part 8

Jai couldn't believe this … So much emotion experienced in just one day. He wasn't the one that killed Bani's mom… that meant that Bani had no reason to be upset with him

Jai: Rano you have given me my life back. You have given my family back.. No w I have a chance to live with my wife and baby happily. Rano I thank you!

Rano: Mr. Walia please don't thank me… it was never your fault in the first place… you were blamed for something that you never did… Thank God that the raaz came out. I am hurt to even know that my mom died such a horrible death but for someone to use it to get what they want made me more upset

Rano was crying a lot and Jai had no idea how to console her.

Jai; Rano I understand your pain and believe me I will get your mom justice.. Ranvijay and Roshini will not escape that easily. Please Rano ab rona bandh kard dho.. Come we need to buy your di and and your nephew some gifts.hmm.. Okay?

Rano with a little laugh and feeling a little better replied

Rano: …Ji…

Rano and Jai scour the whole gift shop and finally Rano picks up couple of adorable toys for the new baby. Jai took the priority to find something for Bani. He looked hard and finally came upon a small crystal ornament of a mother holding a child. In the light it sparkled with such beauty a beauty that he bet Bani would sparkle with when holding his child.. He was so excited to go see them that he quickly had the store keeper wrap all the gifts and him and Rano headed towards Bani's room

Masi: Jai beta it took quite a while.. please we all are anxious to see her and are waiting for you to go see her first.. please go JAI AND HURRY!

Jai with a small smile replied

Jai: … Of course Masi..

He then turns to Rano

Jai: Rano thank you for all your help…

Rano smiled and handed him all the gifts that they had bought.

Jai heads towards Bani's room and enters to see Bani starring at their beautiful child.

What a sight it was. Jai had the 2 people he loved the most right in front of him. It was a feeling he could never forget. He starred at Bani, who starred at their child with such love. Jai thought to himself that how could he have hated this woman. There was a chance where I would not have been married to this wonderful person. I have to thank god for bringing this angel to my life and saving her through this tragic time.
Jai proceeded towards Bani who now had spotted him.
She had gone through so much. The last few hours for her was the most tragic time. She thought to herself how she almost lost her baby. Why did she allow herself to live under so much stress.. It almost killed her child. Mr. Walia whom she loved with all her heart was the same person she now could not meet eyes with.

Jai: Bani how are you feeling now?!

Bani was still so confused about her feelings for Jai that she lost her stare with Jai and looked towards her new child.

Jai: Bani… he is wonderful…. I mean our child… He is precious…

Bani couldn't help but well up with tears

Jai:Bani please don't cry… everything is okay now.. we can be a family now

Bani: Mr. Walia that can not be possible… I can never forgive you for what you did…

Jai:Bani please listen to me…!

Bani: Nahi Mr. Walia.. You took my sisters child hood away from them.. I can never forgive you.. Please Mr. Walia stop trying to get me back.. and please leave me and my child alone! PLEASE MR. WALIA (as she starts to cry even more) leave…. Please…. I don't want my child to experience this.. please … pleae Mr. Walia leave…😭

Jai started to cry himself… he did not plan any of this to go this way… all he wanted was his family.. all he EVER wanted was to live happily ever after… but how could he when she had so much hatred towards him… Jai knew that his would be a bad time to talk to Bani and decided to turn around and leave.. He would do anything to make her happy.

Rano: NAHIN DI! Don't treat Mr. Walia like that!

Both Jai and Bani looked at Rano who had entered the room and heard what Bani had to say to Jai!

Well here you all are… I hope you enjoy this part.. I made it quite emotional… thanks again for all your support and please do comment
❤️ Vaidahi
Edited by vaidahip - 19 years ago

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