7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
great thank u you made it a boy i am really happy
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Posted: 19 years ago
I loved it so much please continue you soon! 😉

Yours truly,


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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi everyone... thanks again for your sweet comments... here is the next part...

Part 7.

Jai is about to enter the room when he suddenly stops

Masi: Kya hua Jai?

Jai: Masi I'm going to go see my child for the first time and I don't have anything to give him. And Bani.. after what she went through… how can I go empty handed!

Aditya: Your right Jai! There is a gift shop right on this floor, why don't you get something for them

Jai agrees and goes to the gift shop to pick up something for Bani and and his child. He sees so many things he's confused as to what to get, when all of sudden Rano enters.

Rano; Mr. Walia, this blue bear would be great for my new nephew…

Jai: Rano tum… now this is the rano I know.. what happened to you back there?

Rano: Mr. Walia… there is much that you don't know! And it is important that you find out before you go meet Di!

Jai: Rano.. you have been saying that but I'm confused.. I expected you to hate me after what I did to your mom

Rano: How could I hate you when IT WASN'T YOUR FAULT!

Jai: WHAT!

Jai was shocked… he couldn't understand what Rano was trying to say

Rano: Mr. Walia… look please don't blame yourself for what happened to my mom… and I know its because of this that Di has started to hate you. Mr. Walia I have seen the love she has for you.. she does love you a lot but its because of this misunderstanding that has kept her away from you…

Rano was talking so fast and was so disoriented that Jai was now confused out his mind.

Jai: Rano please slow down and tell me what is the problem…

Rano: MR. WALIA YOU DID NOW KILL MY MOM.. RANVIJAY AND ROSHINI DID!!!

Jai: WHAT?!

Rano couldn't hold her tears anymore and started to tell Jai how she came to know the truth of the incident!

Jai: OMG! And all this time…. How can…. You mean…. You're sure right?! OMG Roshini and her brother will not live!!


Well thanks again for reading... and your sweet comments... hope you enjoyed this part

❤️ Vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hats off 👏 👏 👏 .U are doing a great job. Please keep on writing. But please do not kill the child. I think that Bani and Jai need the child int their life.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Gr8 part!! 👏 👏 👏
I hope jai sorts out roshni and ranvijay now!!
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
AHHHHHH! You have blown my mind! Brilliant! 😛 Please Please continue soon! Thanks for visiting my fanfic! 😃
You're really talented! 👏 👏 👏


Luv,
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 alrite.. she told him.. 👏 can't wait fo d nxt part 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏
that was great!
rosh and ranvijay are dead 😡
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
i wished that was true for the real soap
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg wow didi just superb didi just terrific it is so great didi please continue soon na viddi didi wow didi it is just wonderful 👏
love ya didi,
aap ki gudia

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