7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 18

that was awesome!

dying to read next part!

HI .. I'm back with another part… and once again THANK YOU SO MUCH for your sweet comments.. you guys really know how to lift a person😳


The scene shifts to Roshini arriving at Ranvijay's house.

Roshini: BHAIYA!! WHERE ARE YOU?!!

Ranvijay: Roshini! Whats wrong… why are you screaming..

Roshini: We need to get out of here.. NOW.. Jai is going to find out about the raaz soon!! Please pack your things we need to leave before he gets to us and tries to kill us… LETS GO

Roshini was all over the place.. she was running back and forth while still talking to Ranvijay

Ranvijay: Roshini cool down.. whats wrong?

Roshini: YOU SAID THAT RANO DIDN'T KNOW! WELLL…. SHE KNOWS, AND SHE WILL TELL JAI VERY SOON!

Ranvijay: WHAT! How can that be.. she seemed so calm… no.. no ..no.. we can't let Jai know.. EVEN IF WE ESCAPE HE WILL FIND US…

Roshini: Then what do we do?!

Ranvijay: We need to go stop Rano, RIGHT NOW!

Roshini: It will be too late…

Ranvijay: WITH YOU STANDING HERE AND TALKING .. YEA IT WILL… NOW LETS GO!!!

The both rush out and head to the hospital in quest to shut Rano up from telling Jai the truth..

The scene shifts back to Jai, Bani and Rano in the operation room

Rano: NAHIN DI! Don't treat Mr. Walia like that!

Both Jai and Bani were shocked to see Rano

Bani: Rano…

Rano: Ha Bani Di, Mr. Walia is not as bad as you think. There has been a big misunderstanding between you two…

Jai: Rano please your sister is very weak right now.. she does not need more stress

Bani: PLEASE MR. WALIA, you don't need to worry about me or my child. This is between my sister and me.

Jai looked heartbroken.

Bani: Rano please.. don't say things when you don't know the truth


At that point both Roshini and Ranvijay had entered the hospital and since Roshini knew where Bani's room was, she led the way.

Rano: Di I KNOW THE TRUTH.. IT IS YOU WHO DOESN'T KNOW THE REAL TRUTH

Ranvijay and Roshini now spot the walia family but pass them and head straight for the door!

HAS RANO TOLD BANI THE TRUTH BEFORE RANVIJAY AND ROSHINI HAVE ENTERED THE ROOM?! STAY TUNE FOR THE NEXT PART TO FIND OUT!😉😛

Hope you liked this part! And thanks again for all your sweet comment! And please do leave suggestion. I am always up for them! Thanks again!
❤️ Vaidahi

really good 👏 continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: cool breeze

Shabaash! You have come up with a truly wonderful fanfic! 👏 👏 👏 You are almost better than the real Ekta Kapoor!Why if Ekta Kapoor came up with this I would be surprised! 😃

Wow.. please don't compare me to Ekta kapoor😳 That is soooo sweett of you!

awwwwww man why'd u leave us hanging plz continue with ur fan fic soon gosh i'm dying to know whats gona happen next

Originally posted by: gudia8712

aawww didi it is such a nice part didi
viddi didi i can't at all wait for the next part didi
please didi continue soon na didi
it is totally terrific didi you have so much talent didi 👏
love ya,
aap ki gudia 😃

AWW... meri pyari gudiya... i continued and i hope you liked this part as well...

luv

Viddi didi😊

👏 !!
OMG WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome part yaar!!
i hope rano tells bani...pls i really do 😳 😳
poor J!!! 😳
ok plss cont.soon!!
ur doing an aamzing job!!
luv ya
sweetu 😃

pls post the next part soon
this suspense is going to kill me 😉
just loved the cuts from the hospital to the villians 😆
wonderful job hun i luved this part

Originally posted by: sweetu144

👏 !!
OMG WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome part yaar!!
i hope rano tells bani...pls i really do 😳 😳
poor J!!! 😳
ok plss cont.soon!!
ur doing an aamzing job!!
luv ya
sweetu 😃

thank you sooo much.. i will continue soon i won't keep you in suspence that long😉

Originally posted by: goldie_ever

pls post the next part soon
this suspense is going to kill me 😉
just loved the cuts from the hospital to the villians 😆
wonderful job hun i luved this part

aww glad you enjoyed the cuts.. while writing i hoped that it would come out like that! thanks again 😊😊