7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 13

Once again, brilliant!!! 👏 👏 👏
I know how Rano loves Bani;and hates any one who troubles her;Roshni you are going to wish you were never born! 😡
Keep up the good writing! 😃

Thanks again for everyone's sweeet comment.. i'm sorry if i did not respond to all.. with classes its hard... but please all comments are very appreciated and i thank you again for reading and enjoying my fan fic. So here is part 6

Part 6

The whole hospital was in chaos, with Jai, Rano and Roshini running.

Jai: RANO RUKH JAO! SHE IS NOT WORTH THE TIME!

Rano: ROSHINI! STOP!!!

Roshini is running as fast as she could, but she could go so far. She hit a dead end of the hallway and started praying (😕.. yea right ).

Roshini: WHAT DID I DO TO YOU! Listen Rano we all are grown ups here, we can handle this without violence!

Rano: NO! NOT AFTER WHAT YOU DID TO RUIN MY DI'S MARRIAGE!

Jai had just caught up to them to hear what Rano had said. He was even more shocked. He had no clue that Rano knew about the park road incident. Now he felt even more guilty and knew that she would hate him just like Bani did.(don't forget that Rano knows the REAL truth about the park road and Jai thinks that he killed their mom)

Jai: Rano… you know about the park road incident?!

Rano: Yes Mr. Walia…. But you don't know the whole truth!

Jai: What! Rano look I know you are scared for your sister and I'm really sorry about what I did to your mom..

Rano: NO MR WALIA YOU HAVE IT WRONG!

Roshini to herself: this is it.. GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE..PACK MY THINGS AND GET OUT WHILE I CAN ROSHINI! Man my last chance to get Jai… now this stupid Rano will ruin it.. I Have to run for my life!

Jai: What Rano…. I'm confused… lets just go back to Bani.. Roshini is not worth it!

Rano: No Mr.Walia you need to hear….

Doctor: There you are Mr. Walia! Your wife is doing just fine now.. we were able to get more blood and she seems to be doing just fine! The baby being premature will have to stay in the incubator but congrats Mr. Walia for becoming a proud dad of a precious baby boy!

Jai: OMG! You hear that Rano… your di is OK… Rano lets go! Thank you Doctor.. thank you

Jai hugged the doctor

Rano: Yes please lets go!!

Roshini to herself: Thank god.. I'm safe for now.. but Rano won't stop she will tell Jai…. Roshini get out while you can!

Jai and Rano run to the operation room and see that every member of the Walia family are waiting outside!

Masi: Jai beta.. we feel that you should be the first one to see Bahu.. please go and see your wife and your child.. but ha make sure you come get us.. I'm dying to see my grandchild and my bahu!

Jai: Ofcourse Masi..

Jai is shown opening the door and walking inside the room


I really hate to keep you guys hanging😳 . but I hope you all enjoyed it. Can't wait to hear your feedback!

and thank you for answering my questions.. if they are not worth it let me know 😊 thanks again

Question: What do you feel will be Bani's reaction to seeing Jai?
Luv
Vaidahi 😊

hun that was an awesome part
i just hope that rano tells jai the real raaz soon
and hopefully bani will react positively

Originally posted by: goldie_ever

hun that was an awesome part
i just hope that rano tells jai the real raaz soon
and hopefully bani will react positively

aww thanks for replying i was starting to think no one liked it😕 but yes i gaurantee you that the raaz will come out soon😉

cant wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome!! lovely part!!

please do continue!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. cont soon!!!!.. that was gr8888 👏

omg viddi didi just loved it
i just read most of it
omg didi you have such great talent didi
superb didi
wow didi 👏
please continue soon didi
just loved it didi 😃
love ya,
aap ki gudia

Originally posted by: gudia8712

omg viddi didi just loved it
i just read most of it
omg didi you have such great talent didi
superb didi
wow didi 👏
please continue soon didi
just loved it didi 😃
love ya,
aap ki gudia

GUDIYA!!

i was waiting for you... i was wondering where my lil sis went! thank you soo much for the comment! but i am nothing compared to you! you simply rock... luv ya lots

your viddi didi