Ek Ajnabi - FF PT 59 Pg 124 1/19 End - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

Ria has gone to work and Bani has sent Rano and Pia to check out the local colleges and see where they would like to contineu thier education.

She is drinking chai and reading the help wanted ads in the paper when the phone rings. She doens't see aunti around so she is wondering if she should answer or not. After a few rings she finally answers. "Hello"

"Hi Bani, Ria here. Maine Aditya ji se baat kar li hai or tumhari appointment confirm ho gai hai. Tumhe Mr. Walia has asked to come in at 1pm after lunch. Oh and be on time he doesn't like people who are late."

"Wow! Itni jaldi mujhe to yakeen nahi ata. Teak hai."

"Ok I have to go Bani mujhe bahut hi kaam hai, oh Ma ko yaad delana ke Megha ko school se bhe lana hai..

"Yes Ria Ji I will tell her."

Bani hangs up the phone is wondering if she will get this job or not. She didn't even ask ask Ria the dress code for the office. What should I wear? Should I borrow something from Pia she has a lot of skirts and tops. Par kya karoo mujhe ye sab suit nahi karta hai or Rano ke kapde sab pants or tank tops hai. I guess I better figure out something quick its already 11 o'clock.

Bani is sitting in the taxi going to her interview is thinking about what all has happened in the last month, how she will survive all this. When the taxi comes to a dead stop and reality sits in. "Madam mein aap ki wait karo yaha" asks the taxi driver.

"Nahi bhaiya mein manage kar lo gi, aap jaye." She hands him the cab fair and is standing infront of a building and is looking up and seems like the building is never ending. "Hey baghban meri madat karma"

She walks in and there was Ria she sent her up to the 10th floor to meet with Aditya Ji first. Bani goes up and knocks on the cabin door and is called in. She is so impressed at the office. Very simple very neat. The wall has a few inspiration pictures and the desk has couple of pictures, must be his kids she assumes, but no wife.

"Hello sir, Mera naam Bani hai Ria ne mere bare me aap se baat ki thi"

"Yes of course, Bani come in have a seat. We do have a position open its for a person secretary for Jai. His secretary just got married and has moved away. So we need a replacement. I can just recommend someone but ultimately its his decision. I see you brought all your college certificates, that's good. Mujhe Ria beti bahut pasand hai. She has put in a good word for you. I will send you up to Jai's cabin now don't worry, he's really a nice guy, but comes on really strong. Tum darna mat. Ok.

"Ji."

Bani going up to Jai's cabin and thinking I have to land this job. Mere paas or koi rasta nahi hai. Mujhe kuch be karke Mr. Jai Walia ko impress karma hoga. I have to support my sisters and pay rent.

She is standing in front of the cabin and is fixing her dupatta to make sure its not out of place. I should have pinned it.

"knock, Knock"

"COME IN" She heard and thought awaaz se daar lag raha hai milne ke bad kya hoga.

Stay tuned for the First Mulakat
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
👏 👏
do continue it soon dear 😳
lets see hows the first meetting btwn them 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 !!
oh no hwy did u stop there...i realli want to know the their first impressions of one another!! pls continue soon! 😃
awesome part! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
hmmmm interesting ... please do cont..........
Arzoo 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
wow excellent can't wait pls. continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
it is really good...please continue 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
hey y did u stop there i want to know their 1st impression on each other...... 😆

plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon...... plzzzzzz...... plzzzzzzzzzzzz......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......plzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😊

its really awesome 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3

Jai is going over some files when he heard the knock. " Oh yes Adi neh kaha tha koi secretary ke job liya a rahi ahi."
"COME IN". The door opens slowly he sees a brown pair of high healed strap shoes. Moving his gaze up he notices a chodidaar pajami in green on nicely shaped legs, with a hot pink kameez that is body forming with every curve showing. There are two bangles on each arm green and pink. Simple pink earings. There is a green/pink two tone chunni around her neck and he is wondering what kind necklace she is wearing. He then focuses on the face. Big brown eyes, perfect shaped lips with a tint of pink lip gloss. Straight black layered hair around her face. WOW he thinks to himself kai baat hai.. Stunning beauty. He is speechless.

Bani on the other hand is standing by the door is looking at Jai sitting in his chair. Black shirt black jacket, I wonder if he is wearing black pants too. Very handsome she thought. The little grey patch suited him. His wife is one lucky lady. Yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai what am I thinking. And why is he staring at me like that?

Bani starts clearing her throat to get his attention. "Excuse Me"

"oh yes, please come in have a seat." I didn't know we were hiring for a model. Portfolio aap ke sath hai."

Bani is a little confused now. Model or main. " Aap ko galat sami ho gayi hai, mein to secretary ke job. Mein galat office mein agi lagta. Aap mujhe bata denge Mr. Walia ka office koun sa hai."

Jai thinks to himself secretary ka job. "Oh I'm sorry I didn't realize. Aap ko dekh ke laga ke aap itni ban tan ke aye hai to zaroor model hai. Office employees aise kapde nahi pahnte. Yes of course. I'm Jai Walia.
"I'm sorry Mr Walia mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap ka dress code bhe hai"

"It's OK, Mrs……

Miss Dixit, Bani Dixit."

So she is single Jai thinks to himself! "Can I see your certificates please."

Bani hands him all her papers and he is going over them very quietly. "Aap ne itni educaton ki hai for phir be secretary ke job chahti hai."

"Whoh Mr Walia mein naye hoon Mumbai mein. I really need to start somewhere. I have two sisters I need to take care of., or phir koi job choti bari nahi hoti, yeh sab insaano ki sochni hai."

Jai is impressed. "Teek hai aap kal hi job join kar sakti hain. I come in at 9 in the morning and I will expect you to be here before I am.

"Thank you so much Mr Walia." See you tomorrow.

Bani walks out of the office leaving Jai in deep thoughts. Yeah mujhe aaj kya ho gaya hai. Mein to aise react kar raha hoon jaise maine kabhi koi ladki nahi dekhi.. Well I think I am going to go home early today. Waise bhe Masi is coming today. I should be there to welcome her.

Jai comes home and Masi is already waiting for him.

I am at work I will have to continue later……..I hope you guys like it I am trying to make it a little different than the show itself.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!! it's brilliant!! 👏 👏 👏
Plz continue soon!!

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
wow bkeero! ur ff is so refreshing very diff from the show! pleez do continue soon!!

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