Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-Final Chptr pg151 - Page 92

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Posted: 18 years ago
i'm almost done, sorry for the wait, i will soon update!! 😉 (see, it rhymes!! 😆 )
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Posted: 18 years ago

ok kaafi ruladiya aap sabko, aur mujhe jooton ka haar pehen ne ka koi shokh nahin so here we go...

PART 53

Nurse, quietly: I'm sorry sir… hum aapki biwi ko… hum aapki biwi ko nahin bacha sake…

Silence…

…broken by Pia's shriek…

Pia: Nahi… tum jhooth bol rahi ho! NAHI YEH NAHI HO SAKTA!!

Pushkar holds her in his arms and she sobs into his chest. Dadi sits down in shock and Jigs, tears running down her face, goes to comfort her.

Pia: Pushkar isse kaho na! Theek se dekhe, voh meri Banidi nahin ho sakti, Di mujhe chod kar kabhi nahin jayengi… usse kaho na please Pushkar!!!

Pushkar fights the tears threatening to spill forth from his eyes and strokes his wife's hair, as she struggles against his hug.

Adi, voice quavering: Yeh… what… what do you mean "nahin bacha sake"… voh… aise kaise… nahin…

Ranveer: Aap please doctor se hamari baat karvaaye… aapne aise kaise kehdiya?!! We deserve an explanation!!!

Pia: Rano se mille bina voh kaise… kaise jaa sakti hai…

The news shatters Bani's family, but her husband has yet to react…

He hears the words in his head but they make no impact, they don't sink in…

"Nahi bacha sake"… that was impossible… if it was true how was he still standing here??

The voices around him sounded muffled and echoed, he couldn't hear anything else but the crystal clear echo in his head… "hum aapki biwi ko nahin bacha sake…"

Someone was shaking him, but he couldn't focus.

Adi, his hands on Jai's shoulders: Jai… JAI… tum kuch kehte kyun nahin?! Suna nahin nurse ne kya kaha? Bani…

Jai looks at his best friend in confusion… he heard it… but he felt like he was on one side of a very thick glass door and everyone else was on the other side… he wanted to lift his arms and open the door but they felt like they were tied down with weights.

Adi, shouts: JAI, BANI MAR CHUKI HAI!! Voh hum sab ko chhod ke chali gayi, TUMHE chhod ke chali gayi…!!

The thick glass shatters in his head and hot salty tears spill down Jai's cheeks. He staggers backwards hitting the wall behind him and sinks to the floor, his head in his hands.

Adi kneels down beside him crying, but Jai refuses to speak, refuses to move. Tears fall but he stares ahead expressionlessly. The only sign that shows he has heard what the nurse said are those tears.

He is snapped out of his daze by a shrieking Pia.

Pia: WHY THE HELL ARE YOU CRYING AAP HI KI VAJAH SE TOH HUA HAI YEH SAB!!!! AAPKO PAANE KE LIYE HI ROSHNI NE MERE DI KE SAATH AISA KIYA!!

Jai stands slowly to face her but before he can get a word in edgeways Pia pushes him backwards, and Adi quickly intervenes.

Pia: CHODO MUJHE!! USSI KI VAJAH SE MAINE APNI DI KO KHOYA HAI, APNI MAA JAISI BEHEN KO KHODIYA HAI!! MAIN AAP KO KABHIE MAAF NAHIN KAROONGI MR. WALIA SUNNA AAPNE, KABHI MAAF NAHIN KAROONGI!!

The nurse, standing uncomfortably to the side, unwilling to quiet them, does a double-take and looks at the chart in her hands.

Nurse: Er… Mr Walia?!

Jai, rubbing his eyes, taking a deep breath: Ji…

Nurse, anxiously: Aap ka naam Mr Walia hai?

Jai, blankly: Haan…

She checks the papers on the chart again, and looks back up at him, looks back at the chart and pales.

Adi: Kya hua Nurse…? Aap kuch bolti kyun nahin?

Nurse: Er… there… may have been… a mistake.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh man!!!!!!!
I had a heart attack!!!!!!!!! Man Cord!!!! you scared the "stuff" out of me!!!
That was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue soon!
Yess ia m the first one!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my god. di. u scared me for a sec.. then at the end it was all good!

well done. di

i know u only just posted this part.. and i am already looking forward to the
next part!

plz do continue!

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Posted: 18 years ago
thank god! 😭 ...lol...what a suspense...that waz great hun..keep it up! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
cords ....teri toh, .........ab yeh nurse ko toh main nahin chodnewali, mere haathon zaroor marne wali hain. i knew what u were upto, bloody hell, rula rula ke maar hi diya tha hum sab ko....... guru ho ke dushman goddamit 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh man!!!!!!!!!!! 😆


i am laughing cuz that was funny!!!!!!!! @ the end!!!!!

about the nurse..

I would think if she was dead than Jai would bring her back to life!!!

But she's not dead!!! 😆


haila!!!!! please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
LOL LOL LOL!!!!!! GOOD SAVE!!

THAT WAS SO FUNNY. IM SORRY SUCH A SERIOUS SITUATION, BUT THIS IS SO FUNNY THAT THE NURSE WOULD TELL THE WRONG PERSON HIS WIFE HAS DIED!!

THIS NURSE SHOULD QUIT HER JOB AND JUST STAY AT HOMe!!!

JHAHAH...LOL

ASIDE FROM THAT, PIA WAS SURPRISING..I GUESS I COULD SEE HER BLAMING EVERYONE EXCEPT FOR HERSELF.
GREAT JOB!
THANKS
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol poor nurse!!!! continue pleaseeee

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