FF:Ek Adhoori Prem Kahani-04/07/10 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
sorry guys i accidentally left out arm at the start of my ff but have edited it now so for anyone who already read it i'm sorry
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hope u guyz like it

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hii read part 3
im glad u made it longer than the first two parts :)
cuz i really enjoy reading it
hopefully jai will realize that bani is nice
cont soon
SA
PS: a request. can u put it in the title which part and page it is, its easier to see if there is a new part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lizzie fabulous update.😃
Hope Jai will appreciate all of Bani's hard work if he passes the test.😉👏
Pushy seems to have the hots for Pia.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Read all of it today. Interesting pair. Pia is despearate that Pushkar forgives her and for a change she is behind Pushkar. So waiting to know the test scores for Jai and Bani.
bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 4

As Bani walked into the classroom she got more and more nervous. Her hands were shaking and were a little sweaty but she kept telling herself that it wasn't her test that she should worry about it so much. But she did worry. A lot.

TEACHER:

Well class, before I hand out the results I just want to tell you some of you did very good.

BANI:

Thank God.

TEACHER:

But some of you did very bad.

BANI:

Oh no.

TEACHER:

Well without you waiting any further I am going to give you your results. Anita you did very good. Congratulations.

ANITA:

85%! Yay!

As the teacher got closer and closer to Bani her heart started to beat vey fast.

TEACHER:

Bani!

BANI:

Yes maam.

TEACHER:

Exemplary. As usual.

BANI:

99%!

TEACHER:

Jai!

JAI:

Yes.

TEACHER:

Very good. How unusual.

JAI:

95%! Wow!

TEACHER:

I know you even got the part right about homologous chromosomes. Keep it up.

JAI:

Yes maam.

BANI:

Thank God.

JAI:

Now I need to thank the person because of whom I have got such a good result.

Bani was waiting for this moment. She couldn't wait. But couldn't help think about how he would say it. Oddly he didn't say anything all lesson. The bell went and he rushed off as usual. Bani walked out of the classroom and saw him hug Roshni.

JAI:

Thanks darling. I guess all that mentoring worked.

ROSHNI:

I knew you get bored when i help you. Remember that time when you fell asleep. But somehow it got into that brain of yours. Didn't it?

JAI:

I guess so! Come on let's go celebrate.

ROSHNI:

As you wish my king.

They went off as a helpless Bani just stood there watching. Her face fell in an instant but she somehow managed to not cry at all. She went outside to find her sisters. She saw Pia, Rano and Anita under a tree.

PIA:

What happened di. The sun is shining and the birds are singing. Why are you looking down.

RANO:

Oh yeah you got your results how did Jai do?

Bani didn't reply. Anita grabbed her and made her sit on the newly cut grass in the shade of the tree.

ANITA:

Well Jai did really well. Right Bani?

BANI:

Yeah he got 95%.

RANO:

That's great! Aren't you happy!

BANI:

I thought I was going to get a thank you off him but that witch Roshni got it instead.

ANITA:

What do you mean?

BANI:

Roshni has been going over it with him. That's why he thought she was behind it.

PIA:

I don't think so.

BANI:

You're right. Once he even fell asleep when she was trying to explain it to him.

PIA:

Di have you been eavesdropping?

BANI:

Um.........Yes.

RANO:

You've got to admit that t is funny.

ANITA:

I know. Sleeping? She must be more boring than I thought.

PIA:

Oh she is. I once saw her in a shopping mall and she talked me to death. Her talking is lethal. She spent one hour talking about the shoes she was wearing.

They were all laughing as Pushkar came and sat down with them.

PUSHKAR:

Hey girlies. What's up.

BANI:

We're just talking about that witch from a different planet.

PUSHKAR:

Oh,her.

ANITA:

Any problem:

PUSHKAR:

No sis.

PIA:

Come on guys we need to get to class.

PUSHKAR:

Wait a few minutes.

PIA:

Why? Is the Chief Minister coming?

PUSHKAR:

No just.

PIA:

I'm out of here.

JAI:

Hey Pia! Come over here.

PIA:

Ok. Bye.

RANO:

Look here comes Rajdeep. He better stay away.

PUSHKAR:

Who is he?

ANITA:

A boy that claims to like Rano. It's not love. It's lust.

RANO:

Anita!

ANITA:

Sorry but it's true isn't it.

RANO:

Yeah. He is the pervert of this school.

BANI:

Well then let's go before he comes anywhere near us especially you.

They all got up to leave.

ANITA:

Oh no! Too late.

RAJDEEP:

Hey Rano!

RANO:

Hi aloo.

RAJDEEP:

What!

RANO:

Well you are stuffed and round. Do you own a mirror?

Rajdeep got angry and held her wrist.

RANO:

Let go of me you parasite!

RAJDEEP:

I'm sorry I can't hear you.

Looking from afar sahil came and grabbed his hand and made him let go of rano.

SAHIL:

If I see you near her again then, well you know who I am.

But Rajdeep caught her hand again. Sahil was about to punch him when Rano bit him on the arm.

RAJDEEP:

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!

Rajdeep went running off quicker than a bull when angry. Sahil was about to go but then stopped and turned around.

RANO:

Don't expect a thank you.

SAHIL:

Why?

RANO:

Look I can handle myself.

SAHIL:

Didn't look like it.

RANO:

Hello! Did you not see me bite him.

SAHIL:

Well you still needed me.

RANO:

Like hell I did. You men and your pride and ego.

SAHIL:

Hey it's you girls that think you can do whatever

you want. Say horrible things to the person who saved you. Real mature (!)

RANO:

Well if it wasn't for you men then we wouldn't have has this problem in the first place.

SAHIL:

Don't go there.

RANO:

I already have. You jerk.

Rano kicked him as hard as she could.

SAHIL:

YYYYYEEEEEOOOOOWWWWW!

BANI:

Rano what are you.......................

RANO:

Leave it di. Mujhe laga ke mard ko dard nahi hota.(I thought men didn't feel pain)

SAHIL:

I.....................

RANO:

I what?

SAHIL:

I swear......................................

Sahil was stopped from saying anything further because Jai came with Pia and Roshni.

JAI:

What the heck is going on?

SAHIL:

Bro ask this psycho.

RANO:

I'm not a psycho you're the idiot.

PIA:

Rano, what are you saying? Di I cannot believe you didn't stop her.

BANI:

But Pia once she starts she doesn't shut up.

Rano glared at her.

RANO:

Di! I'm arguing with this monkey and you're turning against me!

SAHIL:

Don't call me a monkey you jungli billi. (Wild cat)

Ignoring him Rano turned to Bani.

BANI:

I meant it in a good way. Which I will explain to you later.

SAHIL:

Well see you later you jungli billi.(Wild cat)

Seeing the anger in her eyes Pia quickly grabbed Rano from her waist before she leps onto Sahil like a puma.

RANO:

Next time I see you I will scratch your eyes out.

SAHIL:

Whatever.

He walked off with Jai and Roshni.

RANO:

Let me go now Pia.

PIA:

No, calm down.

ANITA:

Ok he's gone let go of her.

RANO:

Why did you hold onto me? I would have taught him a never forgetting lesson.

BANI:

Just leave it now Rano.

PUSHKAR:

Well Rano would have won anyway.

RANO:

That's more like it.

PIA:

Stop encouraging her.

PUSHKAR:

I'm not. It's the truth.

PIA:

It doesn't matter now she's gonna do it again next time.

Pia walked off.

PUSHKAR:

Pia. Hey Just listen to me yaar. Fine go!

BANI:

Oh don't worry she will be fine let's go to class.

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TEACHER:

Right class. I am going to read out some names and you have to go to the hall. Tanya, Trishna, Rani, Bani, Jai and Anita.

They all went to the hall wondering what was going on.

ANITA:

Why do you think we've been called.

BANI:

I don't know.

ANITA:

Hey look there's Pushkar, Pia and Rano.

Anita was about to wave when the headmaster came to talk.

HEADMASTER:

You all have been chosen to take part in a dance learning programme. These standing in the front are professional dance coaches and they will teach you different sort of dances which will be in couples. Everyone in the school will do this and this is your fixed time. This will prepare you for this year's party. This way you will be doing something at the oarty instead of complaining about boredom. Look around girls any of these boys can becomes your partner. Boys any of these girls can be your partner. Now I leave you to the instructors and good day.

ROHAN(INSTRUCTOR 1):

Now you basically know everything. Listen to us and you shall be fine. We will pair you up and I don't want to hear any moans and groans. Girls on this side boys on that side.

Nandini(INSTRUCTOR 2):

Half of you girls will get to pick you partner through this box which have half of the guys names in it. The other half of the girls will be picked out by the boys from another box.

Everyone picked and some were pleased others were not.

ROHAN:

Well everybody find you partners.

Anita called Pia, Rano and Bani.

ANITA:

Bani, who did you get?

BANI:

Well............

PIA: She got Jai. I can see it in her sparkling eyes.

BANI:

Yeah. I did.

PIA:

Unfortunately I got your brother.

ANITA:

What's so unfortunate you two will whizz by this. He's learnt how to dance since forever and you dance to exercise. By the way I got Rajiv. I've been crushing on him since forever. Bye.

As soon as Anita left Pushkar came.

PUSHKAR:

Who did you get Bani?

BANI:

Jai. And you got Pia.

PUSHKAR:

Really. Well let's go!

PIA:

Whatever.

Pia went off to talk to the instructor.

PUSHKAR:

I'll go see her.Bye.

RANO:

I wonder who I got.

SAHIL:

So I guess we're partners.

RANO:

Great (!) Good luck di. Bye.

There he was standing looking as handsome as ever in his white shirt and jeans. Now Bani was just trying to figure out how to go to him. When she get's to him what will she say? She started walking upto him.

BANI:

Excuse me?
Edited by lizzie786 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
oh wow luck is on everyone's side right now lol
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haha seems like a lucky day for everyone
wondering how jai will react
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
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How ungrateful can Jai be. And now he is in for a shock to guess who his partner is going to be. So waitng to see the reaction of Jai. I hope he doesn't faint.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
sorry people i can't continue this ff for a while becuz i'm not feelin well and am sorry to disappoint u all i will try 2 write an update 2morrow but that depends if i feel better sorry again😭

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