ff/ss-nameless for time being part2pg2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi I am back with one more ff, and hopefully I will complete this one. Sorry if my story repeats someone's else ff in some manner but I am not copying but can't just also remove the wonderful stories that I have read on few wonderful forums and u might feel that it is inspired by that story or that story. Sorry but I am not copying.

Jai was returning back from US after 10 years after he was not able to find solace even after 10 years, as one particular face kept haunting him day and night. Jai met psychiatrists and counselors regarding his problem, but no one was able to give a solution other than to tell Jai to go to the person whose memories keep him haunting.

Today was the day when Jai was on plane from New Jersey to Bombay, the city where he was born, brought up, got married and the city from where he run away because of fears of his own mind. While Jai was thinking about past he could make out how his own blood has made a big fool of him and has tried to spoil his life and that was the reason he was coming back to get answers for some unanswered questions and to meet the person whose memories keep him haunting day and night asking what was her fault in whole scenario. JW the biggest tycoon was feeling scared, he was not scared of facing anyone other than one person, but it was high time that he face the truth and start a new life.

JW closed his eyes and his brain went to happenings of 10 years back:

10 years back:

This was the golden day when Raashi and sahil got engaged and this was the day which even now JW feels was most wonderful day of life and that was the day when he had slept peacefully after his mother death for the first time as he has found someone in his life who was exact replica of his mother who was not selfish and was with her for him being just Jai.

He just could not forget feel of her being with her, just could not forget how they have become one not only physically but also their souls have become one. Though that was night where not much words were exchanged, but that was night when JW knew that he has a diamond in his life and he has to protect that forever. JW just could not forget how he found bani crying in their bedroom and asking him to leave and go back to reptile roshni and to be with him and how she told him that even if he don't love her he should not make a mockery of their relation in front of public and how she has told him that he is a double standard man who on one hand wants his massi to be happy seeing a good wife for him and on other hand he just could not respect that relationship in front of public and how this accusation has made his heart melt as that was the moment he has realized that he just cannot see tears in those eyes as those tears were causing a nonending pain in his heart and that was moment of realization that what he has got in life and what he feels for his so called wife and how he has fallen badly in love with the wife whom he shows he hates.

Will be waiting for ur replies. and please if someone could suggest me a name for this that will be great.

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jeenal20 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey swati dii..
taht was a good 1
do cont soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏Please do continue. I want to know what made him run away
Great start
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Posted: 15 years ago
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diii
kya bsaat.. :)
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, hey, exciting start to this story, have me intrigued already.

Continue soon please, can't wait.

Title suggestion "Tears In Those Eyes".

Take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*Yawn*... kia yaar its very short Di I liked starting thora lamba hota tou mein aaraam se sojaati lekin np itna hii theek hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
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please cont soon babez...
Ateet ki yaadein..........How does that sound as a title
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow...big billi is writing a story...wow and double wow...and she is making the bakra run back home to look for answers....why the hell did he run away in first place? Chalo good start...I like that he has mental issues...

Title how about Bhul Kabul or Tamaana or Dil aur Dard or Jawab diye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hope Jai can find the answers😭, but why did he run away😕.
Great start, absolutely love it.👍🏼
Can't wait for you to continue.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks everyone for replying.
jee i will continue soon.
ranju dear hopefully u will luv the reason why JW run away lol (people who know me well know what i can do to JW) lol
thanks kittu and cupidlicious, thanx for title but i think i will name this after posting 2-3 more parts.
hani parnani ji lamba tha bohot lamba tha, but sorry to keep away u from being ulli, yaar tum paadh ke so gayi now how u will become a great ulli lol thanx lazy parnani for commenting.
heart break and kanta ben thanks for replying and for titles but i think that u shld read 2-3 more parts and then suggest title. waise kanta ben mujhey batao yeh title kaisey hai brainless spineless JW ya phir darpook JW lol
thanks luna

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