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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part II

Flashback continue:

That night was most unforgotten night of his life when he has lost himself in his wife, yes wife, that was day when he has finally accepted that bani was not just a mere girl who replaced pia for saving grace of both families but also a girl who has become life saving pill for him.

That night when he returned from the party venue after confrontation with roshni he was broken as meeting with roshni reminded him of his failure in life and how roshni has broken his heart and has chosen her career over being his wife and has left him heart broken and seeing all this Krishna had a heart attack and died as she was unable to see his pain. The person whom jai hates most was roshni in this world and when she tried to seduce him and mixed something in his drink and took him to her room, it was not that passion or love that he went along, but it was his hate and anger which took him to roshnii'ss room and only thing at that moment in his mind was to strangle Roshni to death and take revenge for krishna's life, but at last moment it was innocent face of bani that came in front of him and he was unable to kill roshni as he realized what will happen to bani if he will go to jail and at very moment he has taken roshni in his arms (he was unaware that at that very precise moment , bani has seen him with roshni in that room). Note: he took roshni in arms because he was gonna throw her from window of 20th floor, roshni was under impression that he is gonna make love to her and bani also thought that he was spending night with roshni).

When he came back after just throwing roshni from a height of 6 feet in hotel room he went looking for bani and was mad with himself when he could not find her and people told him that she was not feeling well so left for home. When he came back he was worried about bani and about what happened to her, but one look in her eyes and her tears and her blabbering go to bani made him realize that she has seen him with roshni and misunderstood him and is just jealous of this and he did not feel angry but was so happy listening to this as he was sure that jealousy was because of the fact that bani also cares for him and wants him and don't want him to see other ladies and when he asked bani the same thing then bani did not reply him in clear words, but words that were coming out of her mouth were almost inaudible and only words that he can make out was that she was angry with him. When he tried to grab bani by shoulders then at that moment bani started hitting him on chest and was continuously crying and blabbering and there was something in her behavior that he realized that she was not in her senses and on trying he could understand that roshni made her drink some juice and after that she was having headache and hearing this jai anger was on top as he could make out that roshni must have given some drug to bani to create a scene in party and people should start looking for him and then she making a scene that jai was still with her and spends nights with her and he felt disgusted that how stupid he was when he was fallen for roshni few years back and how roshni can go to any extent to ruin him even now. After grabbing bani's both hands he kissed her on forehead and tried to pacify him but bani once again used all her force and again started blabbering and hitting him and he found all this very cute as he could make out bani was mad with him and then the only way that came to his mind to control her uncontrolled blabbering was to kiss her and that was her first kiss and as soon as he started kissing her she went weak and stopped hitting and blabbering and was just overwhelmed with new sensations that he was making her feel and when she grabbed his neck, he deepened the kiss and after that there was no stoppage as he knew that all he wanted in life at that very moment was bani in his life as his wife for his 7 births and he made passionate as well as slow love to her and bani for sometime tried to restrain him but then gave herself to him willfully and that was also the night that bani cannot forget in her lifetime, the night which she loves as well as despise equally till this day.

Both of them were sleeping in each other arms after making love when they heard someone knocking on door without stop and the fact that it was early morning person was not stopping. Then jai got up and after wearing his night coat went to answer the door and bani got opportunity to run in bathroom with her clothes and seeing this jai chuckled. As soon as jai opened the door there stood pia who just came and put her arms in his neck saying that she wants to be his wife and pushkar is not worth and she don't want bani to suffer as she never wanted to meet some older man and that now both of them (jai and pia) can start a new life. Jai was so confused, on one hand he was having withdrawal symptoms and on other hand he was feeling disgusted with pia offer, at that very moment came bani and seeing pia crying he look at jai and it looked like with eyes she was asking jai what happened to her and why she is crying. Bani after giving over pia to pushkar has made a promise to herself that she won't keep any relationship with pia unless until jai gives her permission to do so. Jai told bani to take pia to guest room and be with her as she is not in great state of mind, and left confused bani standing there along with pia and went to his study.

Edited by swatinarang - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
ohh noo..
what dii..
i thought that u will keep the reptile pia out of thsi FF..
but no....
gross why she always makes her entry at the wrong time....
plzzzzzzz cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Swati JW was ullu ka patha...last night watch the epi after the love making when he tells Bani it was a big galti....stupid moron...couldn't he see how she was looking at him and how hurt she looked after. Idiot...he deserved everything he got. And your JW too went off running, instead of using any cells...and he has the money he could have used to get Roshni annihilated and no one would have known.

Lets see how your JW makes things right even if its few years too late....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Wow Swathi, a good FF. Although it's mostly similar to what happened in KS, I am very curious as to why he chose escapism and ran off to New Jersey and coming to face his past after 10 long years.
What did he do that he didn't want to face and left the country? And that stupid senseless Pia had to come in between and interrupt the lovey-dovey couple. I hate that Pia. And Roshni is no less - she is absolutely useles and a cunning witch.

Hoping u wud continue. Unless Jai's past is fully mentioned and the story is unfolded a further more, I won't be able to suggest a title. it's too early to suggest one. Maybe after 3 more updates. Hopefully we get a lengthier update next time.

Plz continue soon.

Ramya / ILS
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey swathi awesome update.👍🏼
Jai should have gotton rid of both Pia and Roshni when he had the chance.😡
Pia is like a sore that doesn't heal in Jai and Bani life.
But what did JW do to run away.😲
Continue soonnnnnn.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy swati di...
The belan queen is back with a ff...
Now I can't wait to see kii apne JW ko kaise kaise torture kiya hai...
Can't wait to read wats gonna happen next...
Plz cont.soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
i hate pia!!!!!!!!
cont soon though
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Swati, insightful chapter into Jai frame of mind.

What destructive women, both Pia and Roshni are.

Can't wait to find out what happen to both Bani and Jai.

Update soon.

Take care.



Have a heart ❤️ all (silent readers).
Leave a comment of appreciation for all the writers and their stories.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Di...wow thats great...your writing ...

havnt read it...but i will be back with comments...paka promise...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
read the update
too good
i would say how about
Past or bitter Past? as your Ff title
repto is bithcly bitch
hate her from bottom of my heart
why dont she die
now update karoooooo fast fasttttttttttttt

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