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got2go2go

@got2go2go

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

i loved the ending
it was beautiful
do we get an epilogue? 😛

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Hey Kamy, superb chapter.

The giant finally became Bani's captive for good.

Awesome end to an awesome story.

Looking forwards to Before The Storm when you have the time.

All the best, take care.

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Bani sure is a brat. So finally her brother gets a taste of his own medicne. Jai walks away with the most prized possession and honour his own sister. And Jai whats with him couldn't he say that he had some feelings for ehr. Instead of trying to kidnap her everytime. But any ways it ended on a very sweet note. So will we get an epilogue. As this Bani is sure to spike up his life.

Bye

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jeenal

@jeenal20

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

hey kmy..

tah twas a good part..

finally JB DECLARED THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER...

and the way jai challenged that randhir was just too good....

bani she always surprises me..

one time she wants to run away and then she wants to go back...

as she is tired of running....

that was just very good....

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

amazing part

i really liked the way jai got bani 2 stay

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

@sweet_gurl61

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

That was a great ending. Loved it. Now they are both captured by each other for life.

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Didn't know that you had started updating again, Kamy. Read all parts in one go - persistent Bani wins again!! Jai needed somebody to hit him on the head or somehing - sheesh - talk about a guy who doesn't know what he wants!

Very cute ff. Thanks!!!!!!!!!

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Lovely ending Kamy....!!!

Jai is such a nice guy...!

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Desriee1

@Desriee1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Awesome ending.👍🏼

Bani brother is such a psycho.

Finally the captor and the captive "JB" are together.❤️😍☺️

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

thank u all for the wonderful feedbacks guys! they reaaly mean a lot. thank u silent readers. as for an epilogue nothing clicks in my mind....
i am at present going through 'before the storm' give me some time i'll update that one too. until then take care and c u guys
love
kamy

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