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Desriee1 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
Wow Minks, who could have played with Bain heart like that.
Continue soon, because you got me intrigue already.
kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang

U r right pardadijaan, she is paying price of being ur daughter😆
of course i am gonna call u people with respect and these names only
waise telling u one secret aap ke beti minku ka dimaag khisak gaya hai and has severe memory loss so instead of calling me granddaughter she keep calling me mummy 😆 i just hope aap ko dekh ke un ko yaad aa jaaye that u r her mother not me 😆
hey lina, long time yaar, how r u? lagta hai u r celebrating ur winter/christmas break on IF today.

she calls u mummy😆😆😆...
then we need to clear this mess lol...
dont tell me that u got married to ur pardadajaan😲🤣 ...
waise i m her CHOTI MAA, so u can be her mommy darling😉((it's sounds like bobby darling😆😆😆))
heyy di...i m fine...app kaise ho?? apke marriage kii batte kahan tak pochi??
and winter holidays havent started yet...we still have 2 week to go!!!
kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: minks

waise yaar, swati di kab se tumhari mummy banni😆😆
is she still known for her belan??😆😆😆 i thought woh batt purani hogahi hai😆😆
and we want u to cont. the ss!!
tumne already bahut sare ss/ff incomplete chore hai..
so we dont want you to add 1 more to that list😉
Edited by kooliio - 16 years ago

PDLIMA thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Hi Minks: Great story please continue soon and hope you give us a nice cute happy ending not a sad ending.
min2103 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys there is always a flip side to a coin haina.....so here is the other side to this coin :). thanxxx for the replies 😃
There was nothing in my world but nothingness

Then u came

u opened ur eyes for the 1st time and looked at me

and I knew I had u forever

I have u and u have me

now there is no void

my world is complete once again

Twenty year old Jai Walia sat brooding in a chair in a darkened room, today he had to make the most difficult choice in the world, he had to choose between his love and his child and he knew there was no choice but one choice and that was his child, and the love, well he never did love the girl did he, it was just an infatuation on both sides but the love that he had to choose between was his families love, his father had given him the ultimatum that he had to choose between the child and his family, well there was no choice was there? he couldn't let anyone kill his child, be it the child's mother only.

Pia Shukla wanted to become a model and had found herself pregnant with jai's child, she had gone to Jai fully expecting him to help her get rid of the child and had instead been shocked out of her wits, when jai fought with her for even thinking about it, Jai had even offered to marry her for the child's sake but pia wouldn't hear of it and was adamant about the abortion. Then Jai made her a offer that she couldn't resist.

He asked her to give birth to the child and then he would take care of the child after he was born and pia could move away and go were ever she want after giving up her right as a mother, for which jai would pay her 2 crores and pia agreed.

Jai's father Uday walia was furious when jai came and confessed all this to him, he asked him to get rid of the child, when jai dint agree he gave him two choices one, to raise the child but after leaving walia mansion, two, to forget all about the child.

Jai chose the first option and left the walia mansion, he did not have to worry about money because his mother Krishna Walia had left him a trust fund before she had passed away and so jai left the walia mansion, he took care of pia until the baby was born and then as soon as it was possible, pia left with 2 crores stashed in her account and jai was left with his bundle of joy Krishna Jai Walia.

Krishna was perfect, so tiny and soft, so beautiful, her eyes were big and innocent and she was so undemanding and when jai used to feed her through bottles, she would put one of her chubby baby hands on the bottle and used to keep looking at jai's face with those big innocent eyes and jai had fallen in love once again, had no idea it was possible to love anything, anyone, the way you love a child. he would watch her sleep for hours, so thrilled, so awed that he had created her.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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So JW is cheated on Bani and he has a kid with pia also.....
jeenal20 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey minku that was a good part
now i doubt whetehr the guy who cheated bani was jai or some1else
ans jai liked pia
so he cant be with bani
now i think bani will become the caretaker of jais child krishna
and grosss pia is soo selfish and self centred
really hate her
plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
min2103 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Isa_de

So JW is cheated on Bani and he has a kid with pia also.....

no no jai did not cheat on bani....he has never met bani......were did u get this idea from?? i hope i havent written something which suggests this if i have them m sry for the confusion😊
min2103 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey minku that was a good part

now i doubt whetehr the guy who cheated bani was jai or some1else
ans jai liked pia
so he cant be with bani
now i think bani will become the caretaker of jais child krishna
and grosss pia is soo selfish and self centred
really hate her
plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

u r right jinny jb r not together 😊 aab bani kiya banegi woh toh baad mai dekhna lol
thanxx for the reply
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Hi
looks like an emotional story. Wow what is wrong with the man he was two timing. Well he gave up his love and his child born out of love to have another child.
Hope that is sht elast we see of Pia in your sotry line. Don't want her getting greedy. And want to see if Bani and Krishnas path will cross first or is it going to be Jai and Bani meeting up again. will she see her ganga in Krishna.
Waitng to see that.
Bye

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