ff: nothingness - chapter 1 pg 4

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Kya dadijaan aap ne JW ko positive character banaya hai, hope that hathi don't hurt my bani.

loved both parts minku and krishma seems to be unorganized like duffer the JW wink, u know na i just can't write positive about JW. this JW has spoiled the girl and is unable to keep her clean, so JW must be punished lol

loved the parts dear and i am sure bani will come out of all her depression and uncertainities because of krishna and begining of a new love story

do continue soon

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

yay thanQ for making a big part

cuz i enjoyed it a lot!

omg krishna is just sooo cute, and how she talked with bani,aww

poor jai, bani turned his offer down b/o rano.

i think its a really cute part :)

cont soon, keep it up!!

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jaibaniwalia

@jaibaniwalia

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

hii...
great story...
keep up the good work..
plz cont.soon...

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Hey Minks, awesome update.

Bani and JW seems to have the eye for each other.

Too bad Bani though Rano is JW other half and turn down his

dinner invitation.

Waiting eagerly for you to continue soon.

All the best and take care.